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Posted: 13 years ago
so lovely updates...mannat and rehaan are twins...both are opposite to parents they are living with...
maan knows geet through rehaan and geet knows maan through mannat...unka behaviour jo milta hai..i am sure jab ye sab milenge to inhein aisa lagega jaise ek doosre ko barson se jaante hain..
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
continue soon...
quite an addicting ff...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update!!
Mannat is really bossy and Rehaan a gentleman...
Poor Mannat...Does she miss her father??
And does Rehaan miss his mother??
I think Rehaan will be successful in making Mannat his friend..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow
beautiful update😊
THE PERSONALITY OF BOTH THE KIDS ARE GREAT... THEY ARE OPPOSITE TO EACH OTHER...
GEET'S N MANNAT TALKS WERE FUNNY..
MAANAT N REHAAN'S INTERACTION WAS CUTE
luved it.
Edited by crazydream - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

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Waiting..!!
Kitna tym lage ga??pls tell
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Posted: 13 years ago
KAB TAK INTEZAAR KARNA PADEGA...😔
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Posted: 13 years ago
perfect family in the banner...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 7


Class teacher Mrs Reema Sharma entered with pleasant smile n a register in her hand.Most of kids were not known to manners had to follow at school so most of then didn't how to welcome teacher in class.Three or four students got up Mannat n Rehaan were also two of them

All said in one tone 'Good Morning Miss/Madam'

Reema: Good Morning Kids...aur baaki sabhi kids stand up at ur seats lik ur friends..sahi kadde ho jayo (she said softly )

All kids stand up.

Reema: Vey good...Kids jab bhi teacher class main aaye aap sabh unko aise wish karogay ...if it is morning say... Good Morning ...if it is after noon say Good after noon.okey (But no response from kids)

She again repeated 'okey promise me aap sabhi wish karogay mujhe he nahi sabhi elders ko...Say yes miss'

'Yes Miss' all said collectively .But Rehaan n Mannat said in high pich .Becoz they knew how to wish n wanted to tell all this.

Reema: Vey Good..aap badde achay bachay ho .Okey sit down at ur seats now (she appreciated their attitude)

All kids sat down.Reema she was checking names on register n other study material.Mannat's mind had been again diverted to same thing what Rehaan said.She continously looking at him with sad eyes.Which he noticed.

Rehaan: Kya hua tum sad ho ?

Mannat: Hamare pass Papa kyo nahi hai ..tumhare pass kyo hai.(she sighed)

Rehaan: Mujhe kya pata apni mummi se pusho (he said in careless manner)

Mannat: Tumko tumhari Mommi ne kaha tha k tumhare pass papa kyo hai.(she wanna know why he said ask ur mother sbout her papa)

Rehaan: Mad girl Papa to sabh k pass hotay hai..tumhare Mom ko pata hoga..ho sakta hai wo bhagwaan ji k pass ho

Mannat: Tumko kaise pata...tumhari Mom ne bataya tumko k jinke pass Papa nahi hotay wo bhagwaan ji k pass hotay hai (she repeated same)

Rehaan: Rehaan k pass Mommi hai he nahi (he had tears in his eyes but he wiped it away with his palms)

He became sad jst lik Mannat.

Mannat: Agar hamare Papa bhagwaan ji k pass hai to kya tumhari mom bhi bhagwaan ji k pass hai

Rehaan: Pata nahi..Papa mujhe nahi batate

Mannat: Mannat ki Mommi bhi nahi batati

Reema find them talking so she asked them to keep quite.

She asked many questions about hobbies..likes dislikes.But when comes to parents both kids were too much sad.First time they realized both of them hav every thing except complete family...but every other kid hav Mom n Papa both .They started to cry.When Reema consolled them .Child is child after some time they became normal .But they realized which think was missing from their lif.

At lunch break

Reema n two attendents brought kids to Hall .Filled with kids furniture n indoor games..All things jst for junior students.At one side Chair tables especially according to needs of kids Each table having two chairs Attended helped kids to open lunch boxes.Kids r sitting in same order as in class.Mannat n Rehaan on same table.

Mannat opened her blue colored lunch box..having three portions n Rehaan had lunch box having aquarium figure on it. Both of them liked their lunch boxes

Mannat: Tumhare Lunch box nice hai

Rehaan: Urs also

Mannat: Tum Mannat k friend banogay.

Rehaan: Per tum to fight karti hi

Mannat: Unke sath jinko Mannat lik nahi karti .Wo boy humse dar gaya ..per tum nahi..aur u know manners...

Rehaan: theek hai per aab fight to nahi karogi..

Mannat: Nahi karte

Both kids laughed aloud . Attended came and asked them to eat.Mannat had two lil Rawa Idlis...one finally wrapped cheese sandwich n two chocolate toffees in third portion

Mannat: Wao..idlis Mommi know I lik Idlis (she was surprised to find her favorite food )

Rehaan: wo kaisie hoti hai..

Mannat: Dekho isko kehte hai..jab hum Canada main thay hum Mom k friend k home jaate thay to tab khate thay.Mom ko pata laga that I lov idlis wo hamare liye bhi banati hai aab (she showed him n asked reason behind her wao)

Rehaan: Achi hai main taste kar lu (he requested)

Mannat: Okey per tumko bhi Mannat k sath lunch share karna hoga...Mommi kahti hai wo bhi apne friends k sath lunch share karti thi aur unki friends bhi (she snatched his box)

Rehaan was surprised

Rehaan : Not good manners Papa kehte hai jab bhi kisi se kush lena ho pehle permission leni chaahea (typical Maan style lecture)

Mannat realized she was wrong as Rehaan asked her for her permission so to taste her lunch

Mannat: Mannat sorry hai ..To kya aab Mannat lunch dekh le.(she pulled her ears)

Rehaan :Theek hai I forgiv u

Mannat opened his box .Pasta .She made face.

Mannat: Pasta...lunch main ..Mom kehti hai lunch ki dish wo hoti hai jo hours k baad bhi kha sakte hai..but pasta to hot hot acha lagta hai..(she was shocked to see )

Rehaan: Tumko pasta pasand nahi..mujhe bhi nahi..

Mannat: Humko sabse acha pasta lagta hai..per usi time jab abhi garam ho

Rehaan: Mere Papa ko bhi pasand hai..per wo itne busy hai every time Rehaan ki sabhi things check nahi kar sakte na.(his reason was rite)

Mannat: Per mommi sab check karti hai...

Rehaan : Rehaan ki to mommi he nahi hai

Mannat: don worry Rehaan Mannat apni Mommi se kahegi tumhare liye bhi lunch bana de..aab happy .(she put heir hand on his shoulder)

Rehaan: sachi..(What is this a child n his thinking ..jst a food item can become a reason to smile)

Mannat: Sachi ..hum friends hai na hum half half lunch karegay tum hamara half lunch le lo hum tumhara..ho gaya equal (she gav her idea n both started to eat sharing their food.
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
On the other hand Handa house

Geet she was much sad.Her whole life revolves around Mannat n she was away from her even for few hours.


Rano: Geet itni sad kyo ho..jst matter of few hours

Geet: Per Maa mera mann nahi lagta..Canada main thi to iske play school chali jaati thi ..per yeh school hai..jaya khelne nahi padne gayi hai wo (she made sad face)

Rano: Jab tum jaanti ho to..Mannat k achy k liye yeh jroori hai..Tum bhi to itne saal mujhe se dur rahi..aab samjh aaya Maa ka dil kya hota hai.

Geet: Maa apko to yakeen tha kabhi na kabhi to main laut he aau-gi ..ja aap mere pass aa jate thay ..per main main kya karu..(she started to sob bitterly)

Rano: Geet jo ho gaya bhul ja usse aagay dekh ..isliye kehti hu shaddi kar le.Sathi hoga to tumko samjhe ga.Tumhari zindgi ka adhurapan kamm ho jaa-yega..aur Mannat ko bhi (Geet stopped her ..as she wanna say Mannat needs father)

Geet: Shaddi jaroori hai Maa..Mujhe nahi lagta..agar shaddi he sab kush hai to...bhua ji ko itne saal apke pass kyo rehna pada kyonki unke pati sharabhi aur rasiya thay..Amar bhayia apke pass rahe bina pita k .Bhua ji per shaddi ka tag laga tha per shaddi kya hoti hai yeh wo jaan na payi.(she yelled at her mom)

Rano: Per Geet..yahan ek akeli aurat.

Geet: to theek hai main Canada chali jaati hu waha single mother hona koi gunaah nahi..aur maine koi gunaah nahi kiya

Rano: Jo tumne kiya wo to koi beta bhi na kar paye.(sighed)

Geet: Mane jo kiya apno k liye kiya..aur aab mere pass mere jinne ka maksad hai Mannat...per Maa mera ..mera..(she was not able to say more n hided her face in her mother's bosoms)

Rano: Bas kar Geet kitna dukhi karegi apne aap ko...(she brushed her hand on back of her head) 5 saal ho gaye Geet koshis kar sabh theek ho jaae-ga.

Geet: Maa bas ek bar main mujhe (before she could say more She had depression fit n she fall from sofa)

Rano: Geet...uth uth..Leela mausi Geet ka medcine box layo.(she called her old maid)

Geet: Bas ek baar Maa..mujhe uske pass janna hai (she was mumbling in semi conscious)

Rano: Meri bachi kyo ik unjaani Aas(hop) main tumne apne aap ko rog laga liya...sach kehte hai Maan apni beti ko sabh de sakti hai per uski kismat nahi badal sakti...kaya karu mai (she made her lay on sofa n placed her head in lap.tears rolled down to her cheeks)


Leela brought medicine n Rano put a spoon ful of syrup in Geet's mouth


Hop it is up to ur expectations.Plz comment n hit lik


Lov

Jass😃
Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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