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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it, always love your updates and also all the notes, VERY GENIUNEly WRITTEN.
Thanks and do not worry about any criticism if at all there is any, take it in your stride and KEEP WRITING.
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Hey!!It is very obvious that your story is very different..and I am glad that you have clarified the doubt that some of us might be having..All THe Best..😊
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i love ur FFs... keep writing..
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Jass Thnx for the info
We all know dear you have unique ideas
I'm in love with ur works
Waiting for next update
Continue soon
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Jass Bhashan ka dose ho gaya chal ab update karde jaldi jaldi
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hmm its gud u told us actually i was thinking in the beginning regarding that thing ...very nice u cleared it.. and i am happy that its different.. thanks for the info dear...tc
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mera to vaise bhi mere papa maan season one fav hai to ye to hoga hi isliye i m always eagerly waiting for update
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i'm in love with this ff from day 1
it's awesome plzzz continue
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jass loved it dear
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Chapter 6


Both Maan n Geet after meeting class teacher n Princi reached library where all other parents were already collecting their kids stuff.Rehaan was happy to find kids but Mannat she was making comments about kds.

Mannat: Mommi look at that girl…where is her uniform..silly girl ..she doesn't know this is school (lookin at a girl in casual dress she made fun of her)


Geet: Mannat tum kissi ko apne jaisa samjhti bhi ho…this is first day ho sakta hai uske parents ne dress nahi li ho.mujhe to tum meri beti lagti he nahi..I think hospital main exchange ho gai thi (she whispered near to Mannat's ear)

Mannat: Really then u r not Mannat's Mommi..Is liye aap ko wo acha nahi lagta jo Mannat ko acha lagta hai (Mannat's presence of mind always made Geet speechless )


Geet: Shut ur mouth Mannat this is school not any public place or home (Geet placed her hand on Mannat's mouth )


Maan who was sitting on sofa jst opposite to Geet was listening to Mother Daughter's whispering n he had chirps of smile at corners of his lips..think about his fights with Rehaan But he not turned his face to look at them


But she as her habit she couldn't resist herself to criticize others.


Mannat: Poor boy !! (she sighed )


Geet: Poor boy but why? (Geet realized there was one other on his daughter's hit list)


Mannat:Look his Mommi is scolding her in front of outsiders she doesn't know manners.(she pointer a mother son due where mother was saying some thing to his son n their expressions were such any one could judge mother was scolding him)


Geet: Agar tumne apna muh band nahi kiya to main bhi yahi karugi(she threatened )

Mannat: But I know manners Mommi…hum Mannat Handa hai (she said with full pride)


Geet: shut up Mannat hamari turn aa gayi hai..lets go.(Geet grabbed her from hand n left place)


Maan got up his turn was coming n he looked Geet n Mannat were entering inside book store.He cradled Rehaan in his lap n gav smile thinking about that girl n his son.

Geet collected Mannat's stuff from library books copies n even beg becoz St Stelhn school provide bags also which was compulsory.

Geet held Mannat by one hand n her beg in other hand left placr from exit .After some time Maan n Rehaan also collected their

After observing all around Rehaan had a smile on his face which Maan noticed.


Maan: Mera bacha kyo hass raha hai…don wanna share with Papa.


Rehaan: Pa…kitna decipline hai na yahan jst lik our office.sabhi apni turn ki wait kar rahe hai..no fighting lik theater jahan hum movie k liye gaye thay.(he cleared reaon behind his happiness)


Maan: So my baby likes this school.Its good son apka study main concentration hoga ..we concentrate on some thing when there is peace n discipline.

After collecting books n bag..Maan again cradled Rehaan in his lap n took him to his class room.

Mannat has already reached class where one attendent from supervision department not allowed Geet to enter

Geet: Okey Mannat Mommi to andar nahi aa sakti..U don worry baby Mommi apko theek time per pick karna aa jaaegi .Agar koi problem hue to apni Miss se kehna okey.


Mannat: Mommi I m a big girl now.Humme problem ho hi nahi sakti look at other kids koi Mannat k jaisa nahi…okey.(she placed hands on waist)

Geet: okey bye then (Geet kissed her daughter n left)

Attendent showed Mannat her place at middle front desk where a boy was already sitting


Maan took Rehaan jst after Geet left.Where again on other attendant stopped them.This attendant was different as first one had some work .So he was on thae attendant's place


Maan:okey son best of luck…apke first day k liye n don worry Papa time per pick akrna aa jayegay,

Rehaan: thanx Papa…mujhe pata hai aap aa jayegay pehle bhi to aap he aate thay (he cupped Maan's face n kissed him)


Maan: Agar Nakul ko bhej du to (he teased )

Rehaan started to laugh


Rehaan: Don make fool out of me Papa I know aap kabhi kissi ko nahi bhjtay..Daddi Maa..Aap aur Addi uncle he humko pick karne aa sakte hai.


Maan: Bahul intelligent hai mera bacha…issi tarah jst look at ur target study per concentrate karna.Agar koi student apko problem de to teacher se keh dena okey.

Rehaan: Papa sabhi mere jsie kids hai…Rehaan ko koi tang nahi karega main sabse friendship kar leta hu..

Maan: theek hai beta wo to mujhe pata hai..hai to aap mere betay per not resembles me in habits


Till then his phone buzzed n Addi was there.Maan hugged his son kissed him many times n sent him to class.For him his son was whole world n he had tears in his eyes while sending his son to same class where he was a stuent years back.

In side class Mannat was on way to seize front desk threatening boy where he was already sitting


Mannat: Tumko pata nahi front desk per sirf Mannat beith sakti hai chalo pichay.(She placed her beg on table n throw that boy's beg on sesk behind her)


That boy might b sad n bit nervous in many students so he started to sob


Boy: Main yahan pehle beitha hu..


Mannat: to tumhara naam likha hai yahan


Boy: Tum pichay beitho


Mannat: kyo …tum special ho koi.


Boy: to tum special ho.


Boy dared to mess with her


Mannat: Ya hum special hai.ek baat batayo u hav car.


Boy : Ha hai mere Papa ne last year li thi


Mannat: Jst one Mannat k ghar per kitna cars hai u know.we all hav diffent cars (she busted)


Boy: usse tum special ho gayi


Mannat: Ha tell me u hav servants


Boy: hamare ghar main ek aunty roz aati hai.(he said in shivering voice )


Mannat: Aur Mannat k ghar main kai servents morning to evening hote hai..there r so many things which make Mannat special I can tcount ..so get up other wise I gonna beat u.


That poor boy got up n shifted his seat.

Rehaan entered class room with pleasant smile.Maan always ask him to lead in every way.So Maan's impact was totally on him but with different way He never wanted to hurt any body As in play school he went to middle row front desk. Where attendant asked him to sit n left..There was other boy this man was not aware as first attendant had been changed.Where Mannat was sitting on desk .


Mannat gav him tough look.


Rehaan : main yahan beith jaunn ( lik a gentle man he wanted permission)


Mannat: dikhta nahi hum yahan beithe hai.


Rehaan: Per ek seat hai…wo uncle ne kahan waha beitne ko (he told about attendant )

Mannat: Humme kya tum kahi aur beith jayo (she placed her beg on other seat)


Rehaan:Main yahi bethuga...(he put her beg on desk n took seat)


His confident attitude made stubborn Mannat to come on earth

But she hit him with her knee.


Rehaan: Tumko theek se na beith-ne ki problem hai.( he placed his hand on Mannat's shoulder )


Mannat: Mannat ko tumne kahan problem hai...tumko hogi problem...hamare pass every thing hai humme problem nahi hai koi ...hum wasie bhi India ko lik nahi karte Mommi le aayi humko


Rehaan:Agar tum lik nahi karti to hindi kyo bolti ho


Mannat: tumse matlaab ..hum wahi karegay jo hum decide kare gay


Rehaan: to fir decide karlo mujhe se panga mat lena...


Mannat: Panga !!!


Rehaan: Addi uncle ne batya tha mujhe Panga meaning don dare to mess with Rehaan


Mannat: N U don dare to mess with me...I m Mannat Handa


Rehaan: Tum Mannat Handa ho to main Rehaan Maan Singh Khuraana hu.


Mannat busted in laughter When Rehaan asked him why


Mannat: Itna lengthy name


Rehaan: Becoz Maan Singh Khuraana mere Papa ka naam hai ..aur sabke naam k baad Papa ka naam hota hai tumhara nahi hai iska matlan tumhare Papa tumhare pass nahi


Mannat: Hamare Papa (she became sad )


Before they fight more teacher came n they became good kids again


Hop u ll lik plz comment n hit lik.Will try to update soon


Lov



Jass

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago

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