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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Dilsay

hey janay man ...

chup chup behtay ho zaroor koyee baat hay ..😆
how are you ..




oye hoye jaani
kiya baat hai
itna gane shane ke mood kyun hoon bahi
aab hum chup chup bethe hai tu zahir si baat ke koi baat hogi, par bata na zarori tu nahi😉
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thanks for liking the update dear
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thanks for liking the update dear
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Originally posted by: drrose31

phewww so finally i read all parts...


oh that's nice concept...dev is dead, maan is being betrayed

maan feeling for geet but geet is still in her past...

yash dhaara past...hmm..

this was just the same as i have planned for raj and pari in RM

guess have to exclude it from my story as you have used it😭 😭

maan is angry on himself for misbehaving with his dad...

geet telling him to say sorry with a genuine reason...

lovely

pm me this one when you update next...

love rose😉




phew finally ur done reading this SS of mine Appi
glad u liked the concept
yes Dev is dead, no problem for maan to enter in geet life😆
yes he is been betrayed, yes he do have feeling for geet but he don't want to accept it
awww me so sowwie Appi, i didn't knew we think the same way, hope u get another batter idea this this one and i am sure u will
yes he is angry on himself coz he knew whatever he said was not true and now feeling bad for it
yes she is
will surly pm u the next update Appi and i would like to have a long comment too😉
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thanks for liking the update dear
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Thank you all for liking the previous part and motivating me guys. Here is the next update.

ENJOY!!!

-DHDAJS Part 11-

"Dhara how is Annie now" Yash asked as he saw her image in the mirror as she come in the room, Dhara went and sat next to him and saw him holding Vihan picture in his hand, tears rolled down her eyes and said "Yash aap jante ho na Maan gussa main pata nahi kya kya bol jata hai, you know he didn't mean any of those words, you know na, he is just your son" Yash meekly smiles at her and says "how is Annie now Dhara"

Dhara- She is fine, wo bas Maan ko...Yash will he be ok na" Yash gave her side hug and says "Maan is my son, I know he will be ok, thoda naraz hai par koi baat nahi, he will be ok"

"acha ji, Jitna wo aap ka beta hai utna hi mera bhi hai" Dhara cutely complained to him then she pulled out of the hug and said "Annie is looking for him"

Yash- hmm chalo use thodi deer baton main laga te jab tak Maan nahi aja ta

Dhara- hmm" and as they walked toward her room Dhara realized she haven't seen Geet "Yash Geet kahan hai, wo dikh nahi rahi hai"

Yash- wo Maan ke saath hai, she went after him as saw him leaving the house in anger" saying that they both went in Annie room who was crying nonstop like a baby_____

Just as Maan and Geet came in KM Nakul ran toward them and said "Maan sir, Annie baba is looking for u, she fainted right after u left and now she is crying"

"Whattt, why didn't anybody called me" Maan said as he took his phone out and saw his cell was off, he turned the cell back on and ran to Annie room, Geet went after him too, but stood at their door seeing Annie hugging Maan tight as he creased her hair to make her stop crying, "Where did u go bahi pata hai main kitna dar gai thi, i thought u left us" Annie said between her sob. Maan chuckles hearing her, but the next moment he get a glare from Annie and she smacks on his shoulder saying "you think this is funny hun, well then it's not funny" outside the room along with Geet Yash and Dhara stood there watching Annie as she complain to Maan, and soon Vicky joined her complaining to Maan like a baby, Maan rolled his eyes as he watched his sibling complain, at last not taking their complain anymore, Maan holds both his ear with his and says "SORRY" making a baby face, but the next think was he got from them was a blank look as they continued to stare at him, "Bolana sorry, aab tu maff kar do" Maan says as he looked at Vicky then to Annie, "Bahi did we just hear u saying sorry to us, the Great MSK himself saying sorry to us" Maan knew Yash and Dhara would be standing at the door, he turns toward them making baby face and says "Mom is Annie ko bol de mujhe tease na kare" Dhara comes in smiling with tears twinkling in her eyes and hugs Maan and says "aab the great MSK sorry bole ga tu koi bhi shock hoga na" Maan makes a baby face and "MOM u too" just then Yash came in sternly saying "ye kya ho raha hai" Maan quickly gets up "Kyun mere bete ko tease kar rahe ho tum log" Maan bend his head feeling guilty for what he said, he goes to him and hugs him as tears rolled down his eyes "I am sorry Dad, i am really sorry, I…I never meant those word Dad I really didn't meant those words" Yash pulled him out of the hug and said "I know that Maan you don't need to say sorry beta, wo bhi apne Dad se"

Maan made a baby face and said "but u lied to me" everyone looked at him as he continue "how could u say I am not your son, main sirf aap ka hi beta hoon Dad sirf aap ka" with that saying he hugged him, just then Dadi came in shouting at everyone saying "ye shadi ka ghar hai ke rone dhone ka, aaj mendhi aur haldi hai aur is ghar ke logo ko rone se hi fursat nahi hai, agar aap logo ki ye rona dhona khatam ho gaya ho tu hum kuch kaam kar le, nahi tu aisa na ho ki bechare Vicky ki shadi postpone na karni pade" just then Annie came in the talk and said "BTW is baar aap logo ko kuch wearid nahi laga, I mean the Great MSK ka gussa itni jaldi gayab, I mean mujhe tu laga tha ki Vicky bahi ki shadi 2 or 3 years ke liye postpone par ye tu aaj hi, i mean 2hrs main hi man gaye" Maan gave her a glare as Yash said "It's all because of Geet, I am sure usne hi iska gussa thanda kiya hoga uar samjhaya hoga"

Dhara- bahi is baat pe tu hum bhi agree karte hai" saying that as she turn toward the door to look at Geet but she wasn't their "ye ladki kahan chali gai, she was just right here"

Yash- she must be in her room crying I think

Dhara rolls her eyes and says "ye ladki bhi na, aap log yeahi raho main use deakh kar aati hoon" saying that Dhara leaves for Geet room and just as she thought Geet will be sitting in her room and crying, well that is how she found her, as she lay on the bed hiding her face in the pillow and was crying, Dhara shook her head as she made her way toward Geet and sat beside her, "Main buath buri hoon hai na aunty" Geet said as she felt the bed moving she knew it has to be Dhara, "Kis ne kaha aap se ke aap buri ho" Dhara said as she creased her head then later she makes her sit facing her and says "mujhe tu nahi deakhta ke aap buri ho, itni pyari aur sundar ho phir buri kais hogai tum" Geet looked at her with teary eyes and says in between her sob "meri wajha se aaj aap log Maan ko kho de te"

Dhara- aur aap ki hi wajha se wo hamein wapus bhi tu milgaye aur wo bhi bas kuch hi palon main

Geet- I am really sorry,jane anjane main sab ko dukh hi de jati ho, unse unki pyari cheezein chein leti hoon, but I really didn't meant to hurt u all, I am really sorry aunty plz hamien maff karde, I am really sorry"

"Did I hear something I shouldn't be hearing, Dhara" Yash said as he came in the room with Maan Vicky and Annie.

"Yes u did Yash, and that to from our Geet" Dhara said still looking at Geet

Yash- really, uff ye ladki bhi na, pata nahi kab iske dimag main beathe gi ki hum betiyon ki sorry accept nahi karte aur ise deakho ye tu har waqt uska ulta hi karti, kabhi hamre feet touch karti hai tu kabhi sorry, kya karo main is ladki ka" Yash said as he sat next to her, soon as he sat Geet hugged him saying "sorry Uncle, I am really sorry, i didn't meant to create problem in this house or in ur all life, If I had known I would have never done what i did last night, plz forgive me plzzz" Dhara and Yash knew what she must have gone through, Maan felt really guilty if he hadn't reacted like this then she wouldn't have to say sorry and feel guilty for pouring her heart pain, He looked away as tears rolled her eyes, he so wanted to go and embrace her in his arm but couldn't he knew his mom and dad will do it much better then he could, he just stand their and watches them and Yash broke the hug and wipes Geet tears saying "Betiyan humse sorry nahi kah ti hai aur nahi hum se mafi mangti hai, aur jaise annie hum se sorry nahi bolti aap bhi humse sorry nahi bolengi samjhi aap warna hum sach main naraz ho jayenge aap se, aap tu hamari beti hai na tu phir" Yash for the last time wipes her tear and says "chalo aab hamein achi si wali smile..." before Yash could continue Vicky comes to Dhara saying "Mom this is totally unfair, why do I and bro have to say sorry over small things and not Geet ji and Annie, aur pata hai Annie do lots of big mistakes and still Dad doesn't let her say sorry, why is that so Mom" Vicky finishes his talk making a baby face, looking at his face everyone burst in laugh including Geet, Maan just gets lost in her smile and then an idea pops in his mind and says "Yes Mom why is that so, do you know Geet made THE GREAT MSK say sorry to Dad, can u believe MAAN SINGH KHURANA saying sorry"

"wo kya hai na bete tu nalaik hote hai, they purposely do mistakes" just as those word escaped Geet lips all eyes turned toward her, Maan knit his brows as he stared at Geet, seeing his expression, Geet bits her lips realizing on what she just spoke, then she looks at everyone and then bends her head saying "sorry" softly, Yash starts laughing seeing her face expressions and says "ye baat tu Geet ne bilkul sahi kahi, ladke galityan jaan bujh kar karte, aur betiyan se tu galtiyan galti se ho jati hai, hai na Geet" and winks at Geet

Geet- 100% true, and they give high five, after giving Yash high five she hugs him saying "Sorry, I promise I am not going to cry from now on, pakka wala promise" Maan just stood there looking at her when the smile was playing on her lip, his gaze instantly went on her lip as she smiled hugging Yash, before he could continue to stare Dadi came in again angrily saying "this is the last time I am telling all of u to stop crying, nahi tu I will surly cancel the wedding"

"Whattt" Vicky stood up shouting, then makes a baby face and says "Kya Dadi why are u after canceling my marriage, do u even know Kitne mushkil se Meera is shadi ke liye razi huwi hai, wo tu..." before he could continue Annie interrupts saying "pata hai how hard it was for u, jise tu nahi tumne I love u bola aur nahi purpose kiya" Vicky makes a baby face and says "tu main kya karo wo jab bhi mere samne aati hai main sab kuch bhol jata hoon" everybody starts laughing seeing him and then they decided to go and continue their preparations or else Vicky marriage will surely be canceled, Maan and Yash were sitting in the study hall as they watched the khurana lady running from one place to another in preparing for the rasam today, but for Maan all the while he was just looking at Geet, he eyes went everywhere she went, and when she goes to kitchen and took long time to comeback in the hall, he would sit restlessly waiting for her to come, Yash could clearly see his restlessness he sat their observing all Maan act and then an idea pops in his mind to make Maan realize his feeling for her and says "Maan I think you owe someone a Thank u don't u think so" Maan instantly looks toward Yash and gives him a confused look and says "Dad what are u talking about"

Yash keeps the files he was looking at and says "kyun aap ko nahi lagta ke aap kisi ko thank u bolna bhol gaye hai" and gestures him to look at Geet who just came running down the stairs holding a bowl full of mixed haldi to be sent to Meera house. "No dad, why do i need to say thank you to Geet" Maan said as he stared at her

Yash- really mujhe tu laga tum sabse pahle use Thank u bolo ge, I mean itni jaldi tumhara gussa thanda kar diya aur ek thank u bhi nahi, not good Mr. Khurana

Maan- tu kya huwa usne thodi si hi tu help ki aur waise bhi main ne thodi na bola use meri help karne ke liye, us ne tu khud meri helppp" before he could continue Yash gave him a glare, Maan knew he is not happy with what he just said and gulps and says "Dad main abhi ata hoon, Vicky ki help kar ke" with that saying he left, Yash shook his head and said "pata nahi ye ladka kab samjhe ga"

"Kise kya samjha rahe ho" Dhara said as she came in study

Yash- aur kise tumhare bete ko

Dhran- aab kya kiya usne

Yash- pata nahi when he will listen to his heart

Dhara- kyun kya huwa

Yash gave her a glare and she understood that he is talking about Geet and Maan; Dhara took a deep breath and said "give him some time to understand his own feeling"

Yash- aur kitna time do, u know after the marriage ends she will go back to HP and then what will he do, we don't have other reason to keep her back for long time so that Maan could realize his feeling for her" They both stood silently for a while and then at the same time they said Ma

Dhara- Ma Ji ~Yash- Ma both says it together

Dhara smiles and says "Tu aap bhi wo hi soch rahe jo main soch rahi

Yash- "hmm" and with that saying he ran to DM who was in kitchen directing everyone what to do and what not. Yash goes and hold her by her shoulder and turns her toward him

DM- Yash what are u doing, aise koi karta hai kya, dara diya mujhe

Yash- sorry Ma but I need ur help

DM- help, Yash jo bhi help chiye later abhi i have lots of work to finish" Just then Dhara came and said "No Ma ji now, hamein aap ki abhi hlep chiye plzzz" and made a baby face, Dadi looked at both suspiciously and said "kaise help__________

"What" Dadi snapped and stood up and said "have u both lost it, tumhe pata hai agar use pata chal tu mujhe nahi chore ga"

"Ma plz do this for him na" Yash said pleading to DM

DM- tum dono pagal ho gaye ho, main kaise he will know it in no time

Dhara comes and hold Dadi hand in her and says "Ma ji plz do it na, I promise use kuch nahi pata chale ga"

DM- tab tu pakka gai main" Dhara makes an O face and says "Ma Ji" making a baby face "Tum dono ne tu mujhe mar wa hi dena hai Maan se"

Yash-Ma aisa kuch nahi hoga he won't say anything I promise

DM- ye lo ek aur agaye chua, tum tu khud uske samne kuch bol nahi pate jab waqt ata hai aur mujh se promise kar rahe ho" Yash glare at DM and Dhara as they laugh and said "ye sab apki bahu ke karan if she had not told him about my little secret, then it wouldn't have been hard for me to keep him under my control.

DM-yeah right, waise I think we should get going before the kids starts looking for us

Dharan- ji jaldi chaliye ise pahle Mr. MSK reaches their as he told me he has a very important Vidoecall meeting today.

DM- aaj bhi work, when will he learn to enjoy his life

Yash-soon ma, aab jaldi chalo

Precap- plan to put in action, a surprise for Geet & she whining



Hey guys i want to give the next update in the next thread only, so plzzz help me finish this thread plzzz

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Edited by Mariam94 - 13 years ago
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awesome upadte
loved it
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Awesome Update , waiting for next update
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Finally with a bit of rona-dhona and a relay of sorry the family is back to the happy mood, now its time for the cupids to act😉

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