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Posted: 13 years ago
Dont get mad at me...if i tell u something...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Kagaz ki Kashti Luv tht Sacrifices Life

Part 23

Geet : I LOVE YOU MAAN,,, I can't survive without you…. Please doesn't u ever leave me…. I love you….

She cupped his face: don't leave me ever…. His face was blank at 1st and then he hugged her tight….

Maan: love u too geet… I'll never leave u mishty, never…. He smiled contently hearing her authority fill love… geet realize what has she done… she slowly comes out… and all family member rushes to see her,, they had witnessed the fire that caught her dress…

Dev hugged maan as he asked is him he is fine or not, he nodded… dadima was asking geet how is she but she was not responding anything,,, maaneet was busy staring at each other… maan saw the dupatta lying with ashes,, he looks at her worriedly as she is not saying anything….

Nt: geet u should be careful, ye kya pagalpan that ha? U was so careless in these days with ur health and now this fire… agar kuch hojata to? Maan looked at her catching the lines about her health…. She looked down mumbling a week sorry… maan saw her pale face… he was getting angry with her negligence and geet can see that…. She made a cute face mumbling smething…

Geet: abb maine kya kiya babaji, ufff ye khud hi to gaye the mujhe chod ke…. Now when he was not there who would take care of me… she was enough audible to maan only as he was beside him…

Dev: bhai ur flight had crashed,, we heard the news just now…

Maan: dev I had came from our privet jet,, I was coming with that flight but just got a meeting, and that was here so I took the jet and landed here in the morning,,, I was busy so couldn't inform u all….

Abhinash: thank god beta u took that option…

Nikita: ok now can we give some space to them, maan go freshen up.. geet u too go with him, u need rest beta.. u didn't eat properly thses days and u r looking really pale… geet nodded…

Maan left from their but waited for geet at the stairs…

Geet: maa can I take coffee for him?

Nikita: no,, I will send nakul with that….

Geet: but…. Before she can say something maan scooped her in his arm and started walking upstairs… annie giggle to see them and geet looked embarrassed… she hide her face in his neck….

He enters their room and lied her on the bed… he had ordered soup and something to eat for them through the intercom….

Geet just watched him silently,, he came out from the washroom after getting a shower…. He saw her staring at him… and then his eyes caught the untouched food…. He gave her a threatening look and she looks away making baby faces….

Maan: geet, his voice was full of love… she bite her lips to control her rapid heartbeat…. Why u didn't start eating?

Geet: wo,, main… maan walked to her and sat on the bed… he takes the soup bowl and made her have that.. She silently followed him,, he fed her some food as well….

She kept looking at his face, and he also stares at her eyes, that was showing so many emotion… but he want to see if she really loves him or its just she said for him…

She too fed him some rice,, after their feeding session, maan was going from the bed when she held her hand….

Geet: I m sorry maan….

Maan: sshh geet,, take some rest… I'll be here soon…

Geet: no,, u went away that time without meeting me or giving me any chance to speak… maan looked at her painfully… geet stood up,, I m sorry maan, I didn't meant to hurt u… I know I did a big mistake pointing ur love.. and trust me in this 10 day I understood ur pain.. when we love someone we want to see them everytime in front of our eyes,, when I heard the news of the plane crash I get to know ur pain,, when we love someone we can't afford to loose them,, and u were always ready to scarify ur love only cause of my happiness,, and I pointed ur love,, her voice was choked.. I realize the hollowness in my life without u in ur absence only…. I m sorry… she said where tears strikes down her beautiful eyes… maan closed his eyes….

He had promised himself never hurt her or give her pain and now she is in pain because for him…

maan hugged her instantly,, and she let herself cringed to him… her held his neck and cried her heart out….maan rubbed her back…

Maan: don't cry mishty, please.. I can' see this tears, it makes me week,, and I hate to be week,, do u want me to be week? She shook her head in denial,, he smiles so please stop crying and look at me… she broke the hug and looks at him…

She can see the love he posses for her…. he came close and kissed her forehead…

Maan: I love u geet… can we start a fresh? I want to feel the love geet,, so I want u to be with me in every phase… I want our relation to start from beginning where nothing will be with sorrow,, only happiness will be there… no sorry no tears… will u help in that geet?? She nodded her head in acceptance and rest her head on his chest… both stayed like that….

Maan had took the oath to feel her what called to be in love.. Both started spending more time,, and maan was papering her with everything….

It was a presentation day for khurana telecom, and geet was hell nervous, though maan was there but still she felt some jumping jag in her stomach…

Geet sometimes talks with their baby also, and maan founds it amusing, he kept looking or hearing her cute talks… he didn't take any intimate step as he wants it to be with care and in only love, not with the scare of the brutal night….

Geet to baby: mere sath rehna ok,, don't get too afraid or too excited… dekho na apke papa to kitne relax hain,, only I we know what we are feeling… she takes a deep breath…

Both enters the conference whole,, maan felt geet shivering, it will be her 1st presentation,, he held her hand and assure her with his eyes that everything will be perfect… she smiled at him….

Sujal was there witnessing everything, he was feeling burning sensation not only with their eye lock but maan touching her hand was burning him….

The meeting started and geet started her presentation, it was a presentation of a launch of a new network… investor were throwing numerous question that geet was answering confidently then pressure came from everyone..

Investor: u are giving the cheapest call rate, but it will damage our reputation as nowadays no one believes in low things, they will think it will be a disaster network,

Investor 2: yes and if u provide that much offer in one network and if the networks fails to gain ppl trust then?

Investor 3: then it will be a loss for us, there is no guarantee that this network will work in every place then how can u be sure it will develop good market….

Geet was feeling restless,, her constant sweats were the proof.. she sipped the water.. and looks at maan, who was showing no interested in their bulsheet talks, he was just observing geet's every move without any worry at all.. the investor start taking in them when sujal stood up…

Sujal: excuse me gentlemen… we can have the discussion after some break, I m sure u all are really very tired,, we have arranged a good cuisine for u guys… please if u don't mind can we take a break?

Everyone was quite happy with it as seems like discussion will follow another some hours…

After their departure sujal looks at geet: what happens to u geet,, u are so confident in this project and its ur dream project then why is stopping u… I know sometime u get scared but I know u have so much potential…

Geet: I m sorry sujal I don't know what was happening to me, they were throwing so many questions and I felt restless….

Sujal: ohh common geet u were the best in debating in the collage.. and think about the project its the biggest project for us… don't let us down…

Geet looked at him and then her eyes fell on maan who was sitting there in the chair of MD,, hearing them but till now he hadn't spoke a word… she tried to search anything in his eyes,, rage jealousy anything but fails to find that, how can she when he was holding only love in them…

Sujal saw her staring at maan,, he jerk her from her thought: are u hearing me geet??? Geet looks at him with sudden movement…

Maan: it will be better for u if u take ur tone lower,, he can feel the dangerous tone of maan…I think u should let her do whatever she want to do..

Sujal: but,,

Maan: I want to talk to her for sometime….

Sujal: geet please try to give ur best….

Maan raises his voice: I said I want some time alone with my wife…. Geet jumped on his voice…

Sujal half heartedly left them alone…

Geet: I m sorry maan, I let u down….

Maan cupped her face: who said u did that.. infact I m proud of u geet… geet looks at him in awe… he smiles I know u can do the best… u r the best geet…

Geet: but I m not best in it,, she said while tears started falling.. he wiped that with his thumb…

Maan: geet,, look at me… she looks at him,, did u saw any kind of dissatisfaction with the presentation? She shook her head in denial… then how can u say that… I was not in a slight tention, infact I m surprised and happy with ur effort and trust me its the best presentation…. U are new in it and still u have manage to do it… its the best achievement.. to tell u the truth u are best in every aspect… u are best for loving me, for bringing my family together, that family I never have… she looks at him with pain and love,, for bringing my child in the world…. When u are doing the most critical things with an ease then this small project u can handle in fraction…

Geet: u saying this because u love me…

Maan: yes I love u,, more than anything, but that doesn't mean maan singh khurana will tell u the lie.. do u think those investor are more experience than ur husband?

She shook her head in denial… he smiles at her…

Maan: then, give me a smile and don't u dare to cry for this small small thing,, ur husband can handle anything but not ur tears….

She hugged him and he caresses her back and hear…. Maan kissed her forehead...

They investor took their seat once again…

So mrs khurana do u have any solution of our worry…. Geet looks at maan who smiles at her…

Geet takes a deep breath: yes I had my answer,, if u think about the profit in ur way u can see the profit by the cheapest call rate as in market there are no one with so low cost and this way we can grab the middle class family as well…. Not only upper class but also the lower middle class people will attract by the offers… and they can afford good network with cheap cost….

The investor looks impressed with her….

One of them: but the network?? How can we work with the network,, can we have the network in every city or small towns?? Geet knew its not possible to have a good signal in every town,, she looks at maan, who just stood up… she gets afraid did she let him down? But his voice surprised her…

Maan: yes we can have the network in every town,, in this century nothing is impossible…. We can pass the license from the government and then we can work with the network…

No one can say any word after MSK speaks….

After some more discussion they took a leave after getting full satisfies with the presentation….

Maan saw her tried face…

Maan: feeling tired? She nodded cutely,, and he placed her head on his chest…. There was on ein the room…

Geet: maan if u were not there I couldn't do that….

Maan: geet u r best in it, and I will be always with u in every path, no matter what happen but I won't allow anything to touch u, if anything wants to touch u it has to tackle me 1st ….

She felt his grip on his waist,, and she placed her hand on his heart… hearing his heartbeat… both hug each other… they remain sometime like that,, without noticing their surrounding…

Sujal saw them hugging each other… he felt crushing everything…. His eyes were red in anger and pain…. A hand place on his shoulder,, meera was there standing for her friend… both left the place leaving maaneet in their world…

At night geet was lost in her thought,, she was remembering the time she met with maan… their encounter and maan kissing her,, and then in the engagement day… unfortunately those days were filled in hatred when they could have sorted everything with some words,, and now when they are in the relation of love they didn't have anything other than words…

Maan enters the room and saw her wiping her wet hair… he felt an urge to feel the smooth skin… the water drop was making her intoxicating…. She was having her back but she can feel him behind her… she slowly turn and faced him….

Maan: how r u feeling now?

Geet smiles a little: feeling much better after the shower…

Maan: did u had ur medicine?

Geet: yeah….

Maan was going to the bed for collecting his laptop…

Geet stops him in his work with her words,, still not facing him...

Geet: maan thank u,, she said in a calm voice,,

maan slowly came behind her,, his breath fans on her shoulder giving chill down,,

maan: u don't need to say thanks... he lips were touching her earlobe, she closed her eyes,, I had done nothing, it was ur efficiency that u cracked the deal… his lips were slightly touching her earlobe and neck… maan planted a sensual wet kiss on her bare shoulder,, she breathed hard…. Feeling him so near was not the so difficult but today she can't control herself… he leaned on her and kisses her nape… buring himself in her hair, his heartbeat was wild…

geet: I m not thanking for that only… he held her waist and brought her close, placing his chin on her shoulder,, nuzzling his face in her hair… I was,, I wanted to,, her words were not coming as his magic was creating havoc inside…. Thank u for being with me everytime… he kissed her cheek…

maan: thank u for coming in my life geet….

She turn and hugged him tight… feeling his breath on her…. she kissed his chest… he felt he is on fire, he simple gesture was making him insane… he kissed her nape, brushing her hair,, and rubbing hi shand on her back….

He placed deep kisses around her jaw,, she tightly clutches his shirt,, and he slipped away her dupatta… her deep cut neck was exposing her white flesh… he traced her shoulder and neck with his finger and saw the water droplet coming down,, he licks that… the soft kiss turn hot and intense… the wet kisses increased its pressure… he wanted to love her with no hindrance… his hand goes around her dori and he pulls it…. She rest her head back as he came there,, licking her skin of back…

but something flash in front of her eyes,, geet's breath caught in her lungs and some dried tears makes it way, she clutches her dress tightly to block the thoughts but nothing seems to block that… he can sense her hesitance,, and without anything he move back from her… she turn and walk back a little,, maan saw her eyes that still has the nightmare she faced... her shaken body and rolling eye balls...

geet: i have some work unfinished,,, she looks at his eyes and he nodded...

after she left maan's eyes moisten up,, some hot water started pouring in them...

i m sorry he whisper...

her heart felt chocking to see him like that, she knew her rejection will torn him apart… he didn't saw she was in the room,, he thought she had gone but she was hiding behind the door only…

maan without knowing that geet was there: I m sorry geet,, I can never repents the damage I did with my hand… tears came down,, I don't want to see u in pain, but it always me who puts u in pain everytime…. Sorry geet.. sorry….

She ran to him and hugged his back….

Geet: u don't have to be sorry maan,, its me who was not over with the night when u have tried to reduce the bitter memory in every single way… I can't thank u enough for that, I want to live maan… I want to live only cause of u, in ur love… he twirl and touches her face…

Maan: but because of me u have forgot to live,, ur life is in danger because of me…

Geet: no maan, it was my destiny,, infact I had left my will for living, u were the one who taught me to live for ur love…. I want to live in love of u…. will u help me, he nodded… then love me maan… I want to cherish the moment,, I want to forget everything… every bitter memories,, I want this moment as our moment… our love that is my life now…. Will u help me to overcome my fear? Will u Love me tonight?? Bolo maan?

Maan: ha geet,, I will love love u with my soul… I belongs to u only and my love also… I will love u tonight… I love u geet, I really love u… he hugged her and she too reciprocate it….

Precap: night of their love….

Sorry guys I wanted it long and next part was with it but I m not feeling well and this part has become long so will update in next part… please tell me how this ff is going and is the pace of the story is correct or not?

Ok I m not a business student so whatever crap cam in my mind I write that,, feeling sleepy still had to pm all…

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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Wow Superb Update
I just Loved it

Loved to see Maan having so much faith in Geet.
When Everyone including Sujal questions Geet her Maan is the only one who strengthens her with his own Belief on her 😊

Geet talking to baby and complaining about Papa was really very cute

Their cozy moments were so lovely yaar

Tichu the ending is just the best part of this update

Me waiting for the next part now
The night of their love haaiii 😳😳😳 😳😳 😳



Edited by krndr - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
really gud...
kya yaar yeh sujal kab samjega??
and the way maan tackle geet was fantastic...lvd it through
dis time i want update real soon...
cont
oye teri wishing u again
happy valentine day

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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan ka guiltyness dur kardo.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Fantastic update...
maaneet's convo was really awesome...
looking forward to know the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the updatetotallyi am loving this fflike anythingn now after the precapi am waiting for the next partthough the best thing is thatu update regularlybut plzzz this timeupdate jaldi se
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update..
luved the way maan supported her n boosted her confidence for the presentation...
kinda felt bad for sujal..
really happy for maneet...
finally geet is ready to forget the trauma n move ahead...
cant wait for the next one...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome
Loved it
Update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
SUPERB LOVELY UPDATE
i loved it
good going keep it up
waiting for next
😉

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