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guys I have started writing the next part...will post it tonight...may be after 10pm😊
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Hey Anu, when planning to update.
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Originally posted by: shining_moon

I have yet not completed the part...was held up a bit...so it'll take one n half hour atleast I guess😕...will update late tonight


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chapter-55





The party was in full swing. After maan's declaration the whole atmosphere became more rocking. It was like a new life was injected into the air. The gang was extremely happy for the couple and congratulated them. Maan then went ahead and generously announced the drinks and food on the house which was followed by loud hootings and clappings. All in all the whole ambience of the club reached the height of fun and frolic...!!


Geet couldn't have been any more happy and why not...!!...all she wanted was to celebrate this evening with her maan and finally her wish was granted. Maan on the other hand was lost in the angelic smile of his beautiful fiance and he decided it was all worth it.


FLASHBACK...


After geet left his cabin this evening, maan could clearly see the disappointment in her eyes at his denial. Even after uplifting her mood by the news, in some corner of her heart the wish to spend sometime with him escalated even more. But what could be done when it comes to work.


Maan was also feeling a bit bad on not being able to accompany her. But nonetheless, he concentrated back to his work and thought to complete itfast so that atleast could spend some time with geet after returning home. For almost an hour and half he kept working, finishing the pending files and going through the reports regarding the site he had to visit tomorrow. He just finished reading the site report, when there was a knock on his door and adi entered...


Hey maan...you are still here...??...he came and took the seat opposite maan.


Yeah, some work was left...going through some details of the land I had to visit tomorrow...he replied without looking up from the file.


Oh the one I was supposed to visit...adi said realizing to which maan nodded...I don't know why all of a sudden this sandy has kept the meeting with his financial advisors tomorrow...he added with an irritated look.


Maan looked up as he heard that and then thinking for a second said...adi, you were suppose to visit the land, so you must have be having the complete report and other details...??


Yes ofcourse I have and that is why I am here...adi said keeping thefile in his hands on the table infront of maan...here you go...!!


Maan picked up the file and a big relief could be seen on his face...thanks man, this was what I needed right now...he smiled at adi.


Good then. Now that your problem and work is finished...give us our treat...adi grinned mischieviously at maan, who for a second was puzzled at his words,but then clearly understood why he was here...!!


So, you got the news...!!


Yup...!!...congrats man, I am so happy for you...adi came towards maan, who stood up and hugged him tight.


They parted and maan asked him suddenly...by the way...yeh we kaun hai...??...he raised his brows with a smirk on his face.


Adi gave him an irritated look knowing well maan was in his teasing mood and said...aur kaun...your irritating friend, sam...he made a face.


Oh...maan made an extremely surprised face knowing well that sam had pissed him off again...my IRRITATING friend, huh...??...I guess sam should know about this new adjective you gave her...there was a spark of mischief in his eyes.


You won't do that...adi's voice was filled with a mixture of threat and fear as well. Maan's lips curved in a dangerous smirk at his half panic half threatening voice...


Try me...!!


Please...adi instantly turned to pleading knowing maan well enough and maan had this victory smirk plastered on his face...fine...!!


So, where are you taking us...??...sam has already called me hundred times...!!


As adi asked this a sudden thought struck him and maan instantly knew where he wants to go. They left the office together and picked up sam. On the way maan called dev to join them and headed towards yash's hotel.


FLASHBACK ENDS...



And now that he is here, he couldn't help but thanks adi enough to make things easier tonight. He could clearly see how much happy geet was to find him by her side tonight, which is very special for both of them. He saw geet laughing with yash and pari and then pari saw something and dragged an irritated yash away from geet. Maan smiled looking at geet standing alone and instantly went to her.


So, I hope you are happy now...maan asked leaning near her ear to which geet turned and instantly replied...Oh maan, you have no idea...she was overflowing with happiness.


But, how did you managed...??...I mean you said you had work and...geet asked realizing she has not asked yet, though it hardly matter, but she didn't wanted his work to suffer because of her.


Well, you see sweet heart...nothing is impossible for MSK...he had the smug look on his face and geet rolled her eyes at his reply...yeah right...she mumbled and added...show off...and twisted her lips.


Maan chuckled at shook his head...she is such a cutie pie...he thought and looked at her lovingly.


He gently pulled her to him and wrapped his arms around her waist...why are you so cute geet...??...he asked and then kissed her cheeks making her blush like a new bride...waise love, have I told you before that I love it when you blush like this...and again gave her a sweet kiss. Geet was simply shocked at his over PDA and got even more embarrased when a fake cough diverted their attention...


Ahem ahem...sam interrupted their romantic session an maan heartily cursed her for being the ultimate kabab mein haddi...god...!!...why does she always do this...??...maan passed her a fake smile shamelessly showing his displeasure, while sam grinned at his reaction...sometimes I feel she do it deliberately...and a scowl adorned his face.


What do you want...??...he directly came to the point not intending to waste his romancing time while geet elbowed him for being such a besharam and in return got a glare herself to which she made a baby face cribbing to her babaji...what did I do...??


Don't scare my little sister, maan...sam said hiding her grin behind her straight face. But maan was no mood for all this...Just tell me why you came to disrupt my moment with my fiance instead of doing what you were busy doing a while ago...he winked at her turning the tables very smartly.


To say that the ladies were scandalized by his comment would be understatement. Sam was getting mad knowing he had seen her and adi romancing in the corner , while geet couldn't believe that maan was gaining scholarship in besharmi...!!


MAAN...!!...both the girls shouted in unison in a reprimanding tone while he simply shrugged...what...??...did I say anything wrong...??


Gosh, forget it...sam didn't wanted to get more embarrased knowing he will not leave her for killing his romantic moment and said...I just came to tell you both that everyone is waiting for you two, if you both get free from each other...she spat and walked out giving an angry glare to maan and he confidently replied...not in this lifetime...!!


Geet though loved his declaration,but she was equally pissed at his PDA and shameless replies to her di. Thus as soon as sam left, she hit her elbow hard in his stomach making him groan a little...hey, what was that for...??


Exactly, what was all that for...??...geet spat back...I don't believe it you said all that to di...she gave an angry glare to maan, who returned it with pleasure...so, what should I do when your di is hell bent in spoiling my romance...??


You are just impossible...she shook her head at his words...do you have any idea how much they are going to tease me...she made a grumpy baby face, pouing her lips and maan couldn't help but to let those sinfull thoughts infilltrate his mind seeing that adorable pout.


But the sound from behind brought him back from his exotic dreamland and he straightened his expression...relax geet, no one has the guts to tease MSK's fiance...!!


Geet felt like strangling him for saying that. Such an arrogant jerk he is...she thought...shut up maan, don't talk rubbish...I am sure di and my friends are going to tease me real bad after the party...!!


Maan rolled his eyes at his drama queen and said...Baad ka toh pata nahi geet, but if we didn't go there...he pointed at the table where everyone was waiting for them...then they will surely get something to tease you...!!


Lets go...he said and took a step ahead to move towards the table with geet following him behind. But he suddenly halted at the second step causing geet to bang in his rock like back...what the hell...!!...what happened...??...geet asked making a face.


I forgot something...maan replied turning back.


What...??


The next moment maan answered her question by giving a tight peck on her lips saying...I love you...!!


He answered her in his style and returned to the table with his trademark smug look with a devilish smirk playing on his lips, while geet stood rooted at the spot with a her mouth half open in a daze trying to fathom what actually happened...!!


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Moron, jerk...idiot...stupid...urgh...I so hate him...she cursed him millionth time to see him waving at her with his stupid grin plastered on his face.


Geet, what happened...??...kise itni galiyan de rahi hai...??...a confused sneha asked her totally agitated friend.


Aur kise...that Devil khurana ofcourse. This MSK is the biggest jerk I tell you...she replied back and her scowl deepened when she saw him wink at her without anyone noticing and turned his head to look at adi and sam who were chatting with him.


While geet was busy hurling more curses on her beloved fiance, sneha's eyes popped out hearing the name of the receiver of the choicest gallis from her friend. Vicky saw her shocked expression and grinned...chill sneha, yeh toh inka roz ka hai...pari said to her chirpily like giving abusing your boss was the world's most natural thing...well to extent it is...!!


Sneha, don't think too much...geet and bhai show their love like this only...vicky too conveyed his gyan and got an icy glare in return from geet.


Yeah, I still remember how they used to chase each other in school like tom and jerry, ready to kill the other at the very second they get an opportunity...this time dev said...I still wonder how they fell in love...!!


Well, you would have understood that onlyif you had the thing called brain in your empty cranium...geet retorted at dev's last sentence...you khurana brothers are all alike...complete jerks...she concluded with her favourite line only to make others laugh except dev and vicky, who scwoled and sneha and jia who were yet to be completely familiar with the creature called GEET HANDA...!!


Jia simply shrugged her shoulders while sneha was amused to no extent...whats with this girl...one second she is all lovey-dovey with her fiance and the next second cursed the very fiance to her heart's desire. She is sure an enigma...!!


Meera was the only one who was quite throughout the whole thing, not really feeling like participating. She coldn't curse her bad luck enough tospend the night with the very person from whom she was running away. And the presence of her girlfriend was no less than pure torture. But somehow, her friends distracted her thoughts with their leg pulling and teasings. Dev on the other hand was trying really hard to talk to meera the moment he entered the club, but he hardly got any luck. He somehow felt as if she was intentionally avoiding him and that was bugging him to no end.



Soon, the Dj makes an announcement diverting everyone's mind...Hey friends...this one is for all the people who are in love...a heart to heart connection...come and rock the dance floor...Enjoy...!!...he rotated the disk infront of him and mixed some music changing the effect on the dance floor.


Plzz click the link for the song

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zhEb0cOrXh8




The beautiful music filled the heart of each and every soul present their with a pleasant feeling and everyone could really feel a connection with it. Thus grabbing the hands of their partners they marched to the dance floor.


Maan saw that he has annoyed geet enough for the night and thought of doing some damage control before his mishty gets into the sherni mode. He got up from his seat and headed towards geet, who saw him coming from the corner of her eyes, but turned her face reminding herself that she is angry with him...geet don't look at him or you know you'll not be able to keep up your anger...remember what he did and make a grumpy face...and just don't look into his eyes...they cast a spell on you and her mind instantly went into imagination of the magic those lovely eyes contained...He chuckled as he saw her doing that and moved towards her. She knew he was coming closer and kept enchanting the mantra...don't melt...you are angry...when maan reached behind her with a soft yet passionate look in his eyes as the lyrics of the song added to the soulfullness of the music...


Kehte hain
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye
Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere jaise hi kisi ke liye



He softly caught hold of her shoulders and turned her around to face him and geet instantly melted with his single touch like a candle react to the touch of fire. She looked into those hypnotizing hazels of maan and got drowned into it like always. He led her to the dance floor and spun her in her circular move adding a new life to the dance floor. All anger forgotten...all resolutions vanished...the only thing remaining was their limitless love and the connection of thei hearts making them beat in resonance.


Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane, hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta





Maan smiled as he saw geet completly lost in him and let himself move more closer to her pressing his body to hers,moving with the rhythm.





Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fikar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye



Adi-sam, yash-pari, dev-jia too joined the dance floor, while vicky, meera and sneha stood beside the floor watching the pairs grooving to the music. It was a pure shocker for anyone who knew vicky to stand at a corner and miss the chance to rock the dance floor when so many chicks were around at his service. But he was busy in niharofying his new or the only center of attraction.


Somehow, his heart was finding a weird connection with this girl,whom he met just few months ago and now it seemed like he knew her from eternity...what is this feeling that has captured my soul...I just can't ignore it, but is it really what I think it is...??...am I really falling in love...??...he asked himself this time with a name to his feelings.



Kehte hain
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye



Soon yash and pari came and dragged both meera and sneha to the dance floor, who were anything but willing, while vicky took this opportunity and offered his hand to sneha. Now meera was dancing with yash, while pari with some other guy and sneha with vicky, who was simply having the happiness of his lifetime.


hmm Meharbaani jaate-jaate mujh pe kar gaya
Guzarta saa lamha ek daaman bhar gaya





Dev was dancing with jia, but his concentration was on meera who was dancing with yash with eyes looking lost. Like they were searching for something or rather someone. Sneha on the other hand was having this weird feeling being in close contact with a man like this after so long time. It was a wonder that she had not yet pushed him away from herself, on the contrary it she was having this weird craving to remain like this for a long long time. Like her heart was at peace.


Geet leaned on maan closing her eyes and he submerged her in him more if that was possible. Maan burried his face in her silky smooth hair taking in the intoxicating fragrance. He separated and saw her serene face that he only get to see when she is in his arms and he was proud of the fact. He couldn't thank god enough for sending this angel in his life. It was like he got his destiny. Well it was true...they were destined to be together...!!





Tere nazaara mila, roshan sitaara mila
Taqdeer ki kashtiyon ko kinara mila



The couples were having the most romantic time of their life. It was like they had been living a fake life all throught and all of a sudden met with their actual life...like they have reached their destinations. In the hectic life they had missed this peaceful time with their loved ones and now they were relishing every second of it...!!


The god has finally answered their prayers and gave them this respite to spend this lovely moment with their beloved. It all felt magical...!!


Sadiyon se tarse hai jaisi zindagi ke liye
Teri saubat mein duaayein hain ussi ke liye
Tere milna hai uss rab ka ishaara
Maano mujhko banaya tere hi jaise kisi ke liye





They danced within the arms of their partners. Maan and geet were completely lost in their own world like nothing existed apart from them. It was asif they were all alone feeling each other. The connection of their hearts was such.


Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kuch toh hai tujh se raabta
Kaise hum jaane hume kya pata
Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta






Meera was just feeling suffocated and thus left the floor on the pretext of not feeling well, which was not actually a lie and dev was equally disturbed seeing her leave. He thought it was right time to talk to her and left behind her...handling jia to yash.




All the tension and anxiety flew out of the window as vicky finally realized what he has been feeling for the girl, who was right now in his arms...dancing slowly with her head on his chest as if seeking the warmth of his body. The feeling was outstanding and now he realized what it means to be in love...Yes, finally Vikrant singh khurana fell in love and he was loving this whole love thing now...!!


While what to say about our maaneet...their were just at peace...!!





Tu humsafar hai, phir kya fiqar hai
Jeene ki wajah hi yehi marna issi ke liye
Kehte hain:
Khuda ne iss jahaan mein
Sabhi ke liye kisi na kisi ko hai banaaya
Har kisi ke liye






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okay...so here is next part...hope there was enough maaneet this time😉😳...n regarding other couples I know most of u r sad about meera,but things r not going to be the same for long...n I'll try not let her suffer more torture...she needs some fresh air😆
n finally that our vicky has realized its time for some pataofying for him😉...I didn't included the devils here coz for a change maan took to his devil form for geet tonight as I was missing their one on one n I hope u all must have missed it too, but what to say maan is just too irresistible for our naive geet and vice-versa ( except the naive thing😉)

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Edited by shining_moon - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!! me first

Hey Anu,

Nice Update with Maan the devil Khurana & sweet Geet.

Liked how Adi came & some relief for Maan accompanied him.

Maan is really becoming Besharm 😳 but then this is something that is facade for his true feelings.

Vicky realized his love finally so I think he is becoming intelligent 😉😆 not that he needed that more but maybe that's how the combinations are to fill the gaps for other though being naive & air head is different.

What a lovely co-incidence. I was just listening to the song & it came as update part & that was treat.

Let's see how situation turns with Dev & Meera & what Vicky has up his sleeves to patofy 😛 true love.

Edited by serenelove - 13 years ago

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