-MAANEET FF- HIDDEN FEELINGS-THREAD 4

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#411

awesome update...

eagerly waiting for the next update

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

hey zoha afetr long time lovely update started with romance

maan really lost in her and he is so possesive for her thats why he not even listen to her

The only thing which he wanted that moment was to taste her skin. Taste every inch of her. Feel every single part and mark his name everywhere.

maan sach me itna lost hogaya ki geet

Please maan. She whimpered holding his hand. The moment her tears fall in His cheek when he was busy sucking her neck. He stopped breathing hard.

its very heart wrenching both maan and geet

Moving up he look at her face. Tears rolling down her cheek. She sniffs shaking her head. No.

maan ka ye single question geet ko kitna tadpayega

You don't trust me? He whispered rubbing his thumb inside her hook. She shuddered looking at him. His eyes were speaking so many thinks. Asking so many questions.

He searched her eyes for an answer. Tell me? There was so much urgency in his voice. She knows by now there is no turning around. Somewhere he is out of his control today and stopping him is like impossible. His possession has reached his high point.

geet try hard to control him

Do you trust me geet? His question was still the same. A tear rolled down from the corner of her eyes which he licked making her gasp closing her eyes. Maan. She whispered slowly. He opens the hook. Her hand becomes fist around his neck. Jawab do geet. His again and again questing to her about trust was making her only week. Sniffing she swallowed hard

how much geet trust maan we can see maan can see in her eyes

Yes I do.. She whispered making him look at her roaming his finger on her bare back. I trust you more than anything. That's what he wanted to listen from her. Smiling he move a little above opening his shirt all the while looking at her eyes searching for any discomfort but there was nothing like that.

i hope maan jo trust anjali ne tum pe rakka wo tum toot ne na do

I can't stay without you. She just hides her face in his shoulder. The feeling of her softness awoke a demon in him. He was dying to taste her but he knows his limits. He knows what he is doing and where their relation is leading. He knows they have did something really high but it doesn't matter to him.. He loves her and knows very well where and what they are doing.

we can see h much maaneet missing each other

Moving a little away he look at her eyes and got relief seeing her smile. Kiss her forehead he smile begging to trace his finger on her waist. I won't go behind this.

naughty maan

She smiles keeping her hand on his cheek. I know. Moving him lyed besides her bringing her in his embrace. She kisses his lips and move away but he hold her waist not letting her go. Let me wear my shirt.

sach me best night he indonoko

He holds her waist and kisses her. Good night. She whispered when he move inches away. It's the best night ever. He whispered on her lips making her giggle. He moves back seeing her face turn deep red from the moment they touched each others. Bringing her in his chest both hold each other's closing their eyes.

No.
wonderful precap
Precap: still together..

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jenny

@ajenn

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Zoha darling how r you doing now? Fine from your sickness
But I guess you are still not fully covered. Your update suppose to be 2nd April but u wrote it as 4th April my dear darling. 😆 Or was it suppose to be some April Fool Joke 😆

Coming back to update.
Its truly beautiful my dear. I loved the whole part so much
Initially I was scared thinking of Maan's advancement. I felt like he was forcing Geet.
But all he wanted was to feel his Geet, thats all nothing beyond that.
He knows his limit and Geet knows that Maan will never cross his limit
Thou she was reluctant at first but she let him lead knowing that he wouldn't hurt her.
So cute together.

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sdlife19

@sdlife19

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#414

superb update dear..

loved the way maan controls and geet trust him

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-eiya-

@-eiya-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#415

awww...it was awsm...both their feelings nd trust towards each other was portrayed very beautifully through a small act...do continue soon...

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#416

whoa...!!!!!!
loved the update Zoha/...

thea ws so much of softness in the nature of both Maan n Geet...
hw Geet told him she trusts him more dan nethin...
n hw he didnt go beyond his limits... he neva meant to go beyond dat...

u juz created a beautiful moment...

i specially loved the last 2 dialogues...
wen Geet wishes Maan gudnight... n he replies to her saying.. "it's d best night ever"

beautiful moment...
loved it..