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Posted: 13 years ago
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congrats...
prologue
nice one...
add me to ur pm list...
sent the buddy invite...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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part 1
interesting...
so Maan and Geet are in the same class...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely start😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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congratz mel for new ff add me dear

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow im loving it this update and ff dear
continue with ur update soon me waiting for geet reaction finding him in same college lolzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Mel...

I read ur FF and it is very interesting...

I tried to send buddy request but it is saying error---that u are already in my buddy list ...

please pm me when u update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



Hey Mel...

I read ur FF and it is very interesting...

I tried to send buddy request but it is saying error---that u are already in my buddy list ...

please pm me when u update...



Yep you are already in my buddy list. You didn't get a pm because I didn't pm yet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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guys if you want a pm add mel420 to your buddy list.


Part 2
Maaneet Maaneet geet Yelled. Maneet trow the diary under the bed. Yes mom you called.
G: Maneet what have you done to my room. Geet's room was all upside down.
M: woh mom I was acteully searching for my maths book. I didn't remember where I put it and I was making homework in your room so
G: So you thought it must be here. Look what you did. You're a big ten year old boy now and still you don't remember where you left your stuff. Your math book was on the kitchen table. She gave him his book.
G: Now go take a shower and clean your room up and I will clean mine,
Maneet's room was in a worse condition then Geet's.

Maneet's Monologue
Phoef need to clean this up but before that need the get mom's diary. I want to know more. I want to know why mom secretly cries every night? Why we live alone?The reason I don't have grandparent's, a father, a normal family. Maneet I hope you are taking a shower I heard mom yelling. Well first I will have to take a shower I told myself.

What am I going to do with this boy. Look at the mess he made. Well Geet start cleaning up, Geet told her self.

Geet's Monologue
The room was cleaned up just as I started to leave my hand hit the glass of water. While cleaning up I found my diary. where all my secrets where in. What was my diary doing under my bed, was the first thought that crossed my mind. Maneet must have let it fall when he was searching his book. Thank God he didn't read it. He didn't need to know the truth it would hurt him immensely.

Geet unwillingly started to open the diary.

Thomas: Maan Singh Khurana

Geet (aloud): How come Maan is here? (she chuckled at her friends who made funny moves at her and she shrugged)

Maan: Present Sir

Geet's Monologue

I glanced behind me and saw Maan grinning at me and said "warm welcome"...

I walked up to Maan and sat next to him. G: Hi Maan. What are you doing here?

M: What do you think I am doing in a class room Geet. Maan said smirking.

G: Stupid question (Geet thought aloud).

M: yep I agree.

G: WHAT I said that aloud.

M: No I can read minds. You didn't know. Maan asked with the most innocent face you can imagine.

Geet's Monologue:

I decided to shut up before making a bigger fool out of myself.It was like my mind used to stop working when I was around Maan. I tried to act all cool and calm but ended acting like a total moron.

I a tear escaped my eyes when I read those times. Everything was so perfect, 12 years back. Mom I heard Maneet saying in a low voice. I closed the diary, put it on the table and walked up to him. I made a mental note to myself that I would hide it later. I didn't want Maneet to get suspicious.

Maneet's Monologue

I came to get the diary and I saw mom reading it, a tear escaped her eyes. It felt horrible to see her cry and the word mom escaped my lips.

Okey guys this is it for now.

Part 3: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2758605&TPN=12

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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its awesome...
i really loved it...
so maan n geet r not together...boy is ten yrs old...i think something happened in deir college life...
its amazing...
thank u very much fr such a lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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okay this si gonna getting interesting
fabulous mel!!! šŸ‘šŸ¼

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