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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem updatelove it

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aah cliffhanger...what is this yaar...not fair...😔

update was so interesting that I didn't want it to finish...

so Maan is in front of Geet and he moved on...its his marriage anniversary...really...

waiting eagerly for next update...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
do update soon
they seems to like each other a lot .. where it went wrong
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan is there...

will he meet maaneet...???

continue soon...

thnx for PM..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tushti-kiran



aah cliffhanger...what is this yaar...not fair...😔

update was so interesting that I didn't want it to finish...

so Maan is in front of Geet and he moved on...its his marriage anniversary...really...

waiting eagerly for next update...

thanx for pm...


How sweet thx
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Hi thinking to update
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Originally posted by: mel420


Hi thinking to update

update dear, me creating a link of all my geet fanfics! wait will give it to u 😊
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Okey guys just updating because I am happy that Frankie updated Falling for a jock. So go thank Frankie.

Part 5

When the door opened Geet felt like her breath was stuck. tears wanted to make there way out. But Geet didn't plan to make her tears win, not today.Not when he could move on this easily. She wasted enough years crying over him and thinking about him.

She quickly moved her hand to her arm grabbed her bracelet and put it in her pocket. No he was not allowed to see that she was still wearing the bracelet he gave her.

She straighten herself up, formed a smile on her lips.

G: Take a seat Mr. Khurana.

Maan's monologue

Geet is it really her. Wow she looks even more beautifuler.

Maan's train of thoughts got broken when he heard Geet's voice.

M: Thx

Mom mom Maneet came running in Geet's office I am back.

Maneet: Missed you a zillion mom.

Maneet hugged his mother.

R.K: Sorry didi tried to stop him but he wouldn't listen.

G: It's okey. Missed you to Ma I mean Agent M.

Geet's monologue

No I couldn't call him Maneet not in front of Maan. I don't know what is weird mind would think and he is also married Geet.

Maneet: Nice mom two days away from you and you finnally call my agent M. Maneet smirked.

Maan's monologue

I saw a blond hair boy with blue eyes running inside Geet's cabin. He called her mom. So she is married what more could I except from her.That charecteless girl. Such innocent eyes but such a black heart.

Maan came back to reallty when he heard Maneet's voice.

Maneet: Hi mister I am

G: Agent M I think it is time for you to go

Maneet: Mom let me first introduce myself. then I will leave.

Maneet: Hi my name is Maneet

M: Maneet. Eh Hi maneet, Maan

Maneet Monologue

Hmm so this it Maan that's why mom is looking so disturbed. But I don't look like him then how can he be my dad. Need to figure out what happened Agent M. Get ready for this mission (Maneet told himself)

M: Mom you carry on your meeting. See you at home.

Diary here I come Maneet thought.

G: Bye sweety. Mr Khurana shall we start the meeting.

M: Sure Mrs...

G: Brown.

M:Mrs Brown.

M: Actually on the 11th of July it's my 10th wedding anniversary. It's a very special day in my live.

G: Of course I can understand.( Geet tried to say with a as normal voice as she could)

My wife is a huge fan of you designs. You won't believe it but she has a whole collection of you label.

G: How sweet

M:Yes so I want to gift her a exclusive design just for my beloved wife.

G: Sure Mr. Khurana I would love to make it.

M: Great

G: I will make a couple of sketches then you can choose the one you like. What is you budget Mr. Khurana.

M: None I don't have a budget. Money is no problem Mrs Brown. It never was. I love spending on my wife and I've got enough money to do so.

G: Wonderful. Then I will send you the sketches as soon as possible.

Geet and Maan both stood up.

G: Have a nice day Mr. Khurana.

M: You to Mrs. Brown.

As soon as Maan left Geet closed the blinds of her office, called up Abigail and told her not to disturb her for the next two hours.

Geet trew herself on the couch and started crying like crazy.

Geet's monologue

Why Maan why so 11 july is your best day of your live and mine worst. How could you 😭. You moved on that quik. Did I really never meant anyting to you. Was Emma right about you, that you where playing with my feelings. But still my heart won't believe her. Still it trusts you. Then why Maan why where you acting so indifferent like you where meeting me for the first time. Like I never meant anything to you. Why??? You even didn't react on the name Maneet. Why????

Why did I believe all those years that you must be unmarried and you will take me with along with you one day. And everything will be like it used to be. Why??? Did my stupid heart not let me move on. Why????

And your stupid mind presumed that I was married. Why did I lie that I am Mrs brown why???

Geet kept crying hysterically.

Am I really stuck in the past.She suddenly stood up, cleaned her tears. You know what Maan it is time to move on. If you believe I am married so be it. I will be Mrs. Brown. I won't cry. I won't think about you. This story is over for ever.You wasted enough time crying Geet. He is not worth your tears. He never was.

Geet took the bracelet out of her pocket and threw it out of the window.

She stood up opened her drawer grabbed Maan's picture and burned it. She left the office and went directly home. It was time to close the Maan chapter.

Part 6: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53535571

Edited by mel420 - 13 years ago
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sorry was busy updating check it out on p 20

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