OS: A Very Special Day

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Tyro

@Tyro

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

A Very Special Day...

The night wind had something in it...like something special...like someone was near...someone special ...looking for her...

She was standing near the window...looking at the moon...her dark hair flying and covering her face...

Disturbing the serene night...a faint sound began to appear...the phone was ringing...

She began to wonder who will it be calling her at this time...she went near the phone and picked it up...

She saw a pvt number flashing...

She instantly knew who it will be...a faint smile appeared on her face...

She said -- now u remember me..

He replied -- sorry jaan...got busy...

She said -- Maan...aisa kab tak chalega...you are always busy...you have no time for me...

Maan -- my mishti...mera har time to tumhara hai...

Mishti -- ye to bas bolne ki baat hai...

Maan -- smiling -- accha bolo kya baat hai...mujhe yaad kar rahi thi..

Mishti -- nahi padosi ko..

Maan -- geeettt...

Geet -- aur nahi to kya...aap to kabhi door hi nahi hote to kaise yaad karungi...

Maan knew what was the hidden meaning behind it but how can he leave a chance to tease her -- matlab...

Geet -- ooff...hoo...Babaji ab main inka kya karun...pyar ki baatein bhi nahi samajhte...

Maan -- Babaji se baad me baat karna...pehle mere question ka answer do..

Geet -- Maan aap bhi naa...agar aap mere dil se door jaayenge tab hi to main aapko yaad karungi...

Maan -- kya baat hai Mrs Khurana ...aaj bahut romantic ho rahin hai aap...

Geet -- Maan...aap bhi naa...waise aapko pata hai naa kal kya hai...

Maan -- kal 25th January hai...

Geet -- wo to mujhe bhi pata hai...

Maan -- kyun kuch aur bhi hai kya...

Geet is now getting angry -- nahin kuch nahi hai...and she cut the call...

Maan knew exactly what was the next day..

Here geet was cursing him -- Babaji ye Maan bhi naa...kal hamari first anniversary hai...aur inko yaad bhi nahin...leking agar koi businees deal hoti toh Mr. Maan Singh Khurana ko sab kuch yaad rehta...jab inko kuch farak nahi padta...to phir main bhi kyun sochun...chaddo...

Suddenly light were gone off of the whole house...

Geet got scared...she was always scared of the dark..., she decided to go and check downstairs...since everyone was fast asleep...it was nearly 12 in the night...

Geet -- koi hai...geet tu bhi kya bol rahi hai...apne hi ghar me puch rahi hai ki koi hai kya...tu bhi naa jhalli hai...

Suddenly a pair of hands gripped her...one her mouth n another her waist...and someone said in her ears...HAPPY ANNIVERSARY MY MISTI...

And suddenly the clock struck 12...

She couldnt believe it...Maan was there...she immediately turned n hugged him...and said -- AAPKO BHI...

And then the whole living room was lit... it was decorated with her fav red roses and all the family members were there saying happy anniversay...

She couldn't believe it...

Geet -- aapko yaad tha...

Maan -- tumhe kya laga...ki main apni zindagi ka sabse khubsurat pal bhul jaaonga...it is the most Special Day of my life...never...not even death...

She immediately closed his mouth not wanting him to say anything further and nodded in a no...and said, A VERY SPECIAL DAY OF OUR LIVES...

The whole family was standing there looking at them, they said all together -- HAPPY ANNIVERSARY

Dadi cleared her throat and said -- agar aapk dono ka romance ho gaya ho to cake to cut kar lijiye...

Everyone was laughing and geet was trying hard not to blush...

they enjoyed the celebration with their family and then went to their room...and rest of the night...☺️ ☺️ ☺️

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do tell me how is it...

i was just watching MAANEET wedding and thought to write it down...

hope you enjoyed reading it...

love

Jyoti

Edited by jyoti_l - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

ITS 2 GR8...BT SOME WORDS DATT TYPE R NOT SUITED ON GEET ...BT D REST IS AWESOME

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome cute little OS

loved it a lot

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mysteriousmilli

@mysteriousmilli

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

Mindblowing OS dear...loved it 🤗

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ashley18

@ashley18

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

continue yaar...see u hav the duty to teach us that what will happen 4 the rest of the night...i'm an innocent poor gals 😔

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ritzy09

@ritzy09

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

awesome dear...loved it so much

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muskaan_cute19

@muskaan_cute19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey princess🤗
I really loved the Os😳 I feel so light hearted was so stressed but feeling really great now, it was as simply as my princess is😳 no show off no extra masala, nothing seem artificial or something unreal just as sweet n as sober as her😳
The way it started I thought it wold be sad but then I was glad it wasn't, so cutely U made their day special was the best part just as Maaneet
Well. the only Question how do you manage n write it so short
I simply fell in love with the simplicity of the👏 OS
Great work
Loved it
TC