Originally posted by: drashsree100
Wow !! the last is it ??? can't believe !!! well its a was a wonderful piece of work !! narrative yet not doing away with the integral elements of excitement , curiosity , with , anger , pain [BEAUTIFULLY] , passion and of course romance and love 😳
My favorite {it has to be } character(s) are GEET and Seb !
Geet , of course for being predictable and unpredictable @ 1 and the same time ! From a passionate lover to a fearless mother ; her various facets were a treat !
And Seb ... well I love him ! 😛 😆 he's a sweetheart !
1 .Favorite parts ??? I've 2 ... 1st one was Geet broke down thinking of the accident ; them Mel stirred from sleep and she bacame calm again not showing the inner turmoil ; and
2.The part where she confronted her parents ... Parent and Geet convo !! 😳
Well I loved the emotional and practical side of these 2 parts ; also a beautiful facet of GEET surfaced , that of a daughter and a mother 👏 👏 👏
We owe our lives to our parents and our children become more precious than our lives . This was Beautifully written and expressed ! well there are others too I mean defense of Geet discovered by Maan , Geet n Seb scenes ...
But the said 2 touched my heart ! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼
All in all GREAT PIECE OF WORK !!! you should try publishing it ! 😊 its a wonderful read ! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
I LOVED IT !!!
hope you continue with works on Geet and Maan .😃
Lastly ,
for writing 'Limitless'😊
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