MG FF:Limitless Thread 5: Epilogue Pg 112 (8/4)

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#611

great ending! Loved it! Maybe an epilogue later showing Mel having a baby bro?

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#612

Originally posted by: smallville
Awesome
Loved it !!!

Thanks hun!😃

Originally posted by: luvraj4ever
that was it???limitless has ended?😭..i can't tell u how sad i m ..😭..i loved it soo much😭...

can we please have 1 more part to it??? maybe a 4-5 leap or something?😭..i know u'll think it to be stupid but can't really help it...one part on our maaneet or maybe belle and imaan??😉

Thanks dear! Sorry...but it had to end😳
Umm...well maybe I'll write an epilogue...LOL I don't think that is stupid!

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#613

Originally posted by: princess163

ye laal laal chehra jijz ke naam se hi?😉

now now! I never let go of seb so u CANt keep him!

and anyways, jijz ke saath dhookha?😲

YESH☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

no dhoka woka...jijz n gharwala..baharwala bhi to chaiye na😉

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#614

Wow !! the last is it ??? can't believe !!! well its a was a wonderful piece of work !! narrative yet not doing away with the integral elements of excitement , curiosity , with , anger , pain [BEAUTIFULLY] , passion and of course romance and love 😳

My favorite {it has to be } character(s) are GEET and Seb !

Geet , of course for being predictable and unpredictable @ 1 and the same time ! From a passionate lover to a fearless mother ; her various facets were a treat !

And Seb ... well I love him ! 😛 😆 he's a sweetheart !

1 .Favorite parts ??? I've 2 ... 1st one was Geet broke down thinking of the accident ; them Mel stirred from sleep and she bacame calm again not showing the inner turmoil ; and

2.The part where she confronted her parents ... Parent and Geet convo !! 😳

Well I loved the emotional and practical side of these 2 parts ; also a beautiful facet of GEET surfaced , that of a daughter and a mother 👏 👏 👏

We owe our lives to our parents and our children become more precious than our lives . This was Beautifully written and expressed ! well there are others too I mean defense of Geet discovered by Maan , Geet n Seb scenes ...

But the said 2 touched my heart ! 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

All in all GREAT PIECE OF WORK !!! you should try publishing it ! 😊 its a wonderful read ! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

I LOVED IT !!!

hope you continue with works on Geet and Maan .😃

Lastly ,

for writing 'Limitless'😊

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#615

wow Maan planned everything so well

will miss Mel

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#616

Originally posted by: mechantefille
Omigosh!!
You know Aashu n me were discussing whether we'd make an entry or not -but I'm glad we weren't around to save Geet - heck the girl didn't need anyone did she?? 👏

Damn, Doctor, cum lethal fighter, cum hot babe all in one and a mother too...I love her!! 😎

But I think, Maan did do his bit well. The panic button is fabulous. I want one...errr...for... no reason other than wanting one!! 😆

The last bit was nice - I'm glad you didn't ass their wedding in the mix of the other two...so I can't help asking - who does Vicky end up with?? *hint hint*.

SAnji - this was one heck of a story - congrats - you finished it!! Muahhh!

Thanks Sauts 😳

LOL Well we did make an entry...*evil cackle*...the devils had the last laugh😉

And yes, Geet is too kick ass to need a savior!😆

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Sanjana

@maan-ki-sanjana

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#617

Originally posted by: lovelycutietedy
awsome dear

Thanks dear! 😃

Originally posted by: amita5
Awesome update

Loved the story

I especially liked Seb and Naina's fights and liked when Maan asked Mel if he could be her dad. and Iiked Mel's answer and how maan explained everything to Mel...it was very touching

But I would like an EPILOGUE please...