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Hinal.94

@Hinal.94

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

wardah

im sorry for ur loss

reall heart wretching OS

i was in tears by the end n meri tabiyat aur bigad gayi bcoz of crying

im sorry mujhe yeh bolna nahi chaiye lekin i know u will feel bad later on n also kill me for not telling u about my health

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jaspreetm2815

@jaspreetm2815

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

very very touchy Awesome Dear

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

first of all...im so sorry for your loss...i know that nothing anyone can say will make it easier but its heartbreaking to hear...beautifully done though...for you to put a part of your life out there on the line...hats off to you...one of the best pieces ive read on IF

JAZ

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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

very touchy OS dear
loved it
thanks for the pm

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Abreshmina

@Abby-GC-Crazy

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

aww... Dis ws sooo amazin yr...
I hv tears stinging my eyes...
Dis ws sooo beautiful n serene...

I truly luvd ur style of narration...
Lyk d way u showed their emotions n movements in d present and den u go to d flashback n tell what happened in d past...
BEAUTIFULLY NARRATED...!!!!!

I luvd their moments wid their Pari... I luvd hw u put small dialogues of Pari in btw... It ws rly cute...

I luvd d scene whr Pari ws hungry early in d mrng n Maan ws gettin fussy bout dat... Hehhe.. Bechara he wantd 2 sleep... Bt alas! Nethin 4 his Pari...

I especially luvd d scene whr Geet ws complainin to Pari about hw Maan was all ova deciding her pari's career wen she wantd to do dat...
N den later hw Maan teased her n den manaofied her in sucha cute way... It ws truly adorable...

I cried d way dey lost their Pari... It ws truly heart-wrenchin... It pierced my heart...

Me truly felt amazin wen Pari actually paid heed to Maan's prayer and wrote d letter..
Letter ws amazin.. Truly... It ws poetic.. Thoughtful.. Beautiful.. Evrythin... D words... D thought.. Everythin ws jz sooo perfect bout it..

I luvd both d endings... Even i found d 1st one really perfect...
Bt yeah i luvd d 2nd ending 2...

Truly a masterpiece...
Me rly rly luvd it...

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shreeyazz

@shreeyazz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

awee... just dont hav word.! its wonderful how u put it all... all the emotions u put i could actually feel it while reading it.! :)

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#27

its very emotional dear
u made me cry
beautiful OS
thanks 4 pm

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

beautiful

the angel was sent back to them

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Spandana

@sptrno

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Posted: 13 years ago

#29

Aww MAANEET and their angels Pari Roshni such a beautiful emotional os...truly made me smile thru tears...i loved both painful n happy endings bcuz life itself is a bitter sweet journey...thank u so much Dear for such a lovely emotional os n this os will always close to my heart n soul...

Dear Ur Sweet Angel to whom u have dedicated this sweet Os will be very happy n proud of u dear...Hope u r much better now dear...

Geet hui sabse parayi MAANEET have taught us how to smile despite tears, n how to find positivity in worst negative situation, find hope n faith even in fear, find love even in hatred, find closeness even in distance n made us believe that after every sorrow there is happiness, after every darknight there is bright day, after every sunset there is sunrise n after every nightmare there is a dream n dreams do come true if v believe in ourselves our dreams n give our 100%...

Most Beloved Precious Inspirational Divine Magical Beautiful Romantic Passionate Musical Fairytale Special Unique Geet hui sabse parayi MAANEET' maahi Drashti Gurmeet GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS r truly the bestest of the best so truly deserve the bestest of the best...

Long live Our GHSP MAANEET' maahi our life heart soul...

V r Proud to be GHSPIANS MAANEETIANS ever n forever...

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Jasmine

@jasminerahul

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+ 11

Posted: 13 years ago

#30

I felt really upset reading this.It touched my heart.Both endings were good.But 4 a mother even if she gets 2 kids her pain of losing d 1st child won't vanish

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