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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Omgthat was one hell of a updatewowwwand u described all these advanturesin a way that i feltthat i was actually thereand quote about silence was just superbn so trueand ur way or writingsneha u rock galand i knew it rfom the timei read ur poemsu have creative mindand it is evident from ur workmuah to uand all the big round of applausefor u

luv yawaiting for more

Edited by anshra - 13 years ago

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Seher

@Speechless

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Sneha the urgent need for shopping occurs for GeetJust like my sister They went for Bungee Jumping first and Geet herself was scared Maan asked instructor to go togetherhow could Maan leave her He wrapped her in his arms and Geet hold him Tight Indeed it was bliss Maan Singh Khurana's birth right to tease and make fun of his Cherry.. It's my right and always will be Haeyyy for River Rafting maan sat behind her and Scuba Diving they went together

Marvelous update Waiting for the next Update

Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago

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Shruthe

@Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

Yet another awesome update darl!!!!

i just loved every part of the update... from the shopping to the scuba diving... everything!!!!

Highlights of the update were --- Maan siding Geet against the mocking friends... the bungee jumping, and ofcourse the spark they shared during river rafting and the diving...

you have beautifully portrayed the different facets of MSK... the caring he had for her during the bungee jumping , the protective maan against the mocking group of people... and the way he wanted her company to explore the underwater scenery... it was brilliant

And Geet's monologues during their bunjee jumping were amazing ... and especially when she tells "indeed it is a bliss..!!" was just superb...

oh god... my comment looks like an essay... but what to do ... i just am in love with your update... 😃

Love you darl!!!!!

Muahzzz

Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago

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Rituja

@mishtiritu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Wow Sneha... It was superb update dear...!!!

Loved it sooo sooo much...!!!!

The way Maan agreed fro shopping was aww.. So sweet...😆

The trip & Adventure were just were expressed superb...!!!

Me love the part & momnet when they were walking on beach

& hand entangled... I loved it sooo much...!!!!

The way Maan gave ans to that guy was just wow...!!!

Me loved each & evry part of update...!!!

U wrote mindblowing yaar...!!!

Waiting for Next Egarly...!!!!

Luv ya sooo much...!!!!!

Hugs & kisses to u...!!!

Edited by mishtiritu - 13 years ago

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reni

@leverne

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+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#525

Awesome update...walking by the beach hand in hand is one of the most romantic moments...😳
did u realsie maan called geet geet first time else always cherry😉...i love the nick name...😃

maan standing up for her is 👏

love the adventure trip yaar.😊..ur awesome ⭐️

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Sakshi

@sakshi.ekansh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

Wow sneha di loved it... The way u described their silence was superb... The quote was hell true, the words can hide sm things bt silence cant.. Ur silence is best audible to the person who loves u... It was cute Maan taking Geet's side.. The walk hand in hand was so romantic... I really loved it... Eagerly waiting 4 next... Continue soon di...

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Remya

@Remya_Pillai

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

awesum yaar...

luvd the way u described each step of maneet togetherness..!

You don't need to thank me Geet.. no one can dare to say a word for you when I am there.. And more over its Maan Singh Khurana's birth right to tease and make fun of his Cherry.. It's my right and always will be..

loved dese words a lot..

underwater diving reminded me of the film zindagi na milegi dobaara..

its such a blissful experience to watch the most beautiful thing with ur most important person..!

Speechless dear..