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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: todayzstar

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Thanks alott dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: disha_Maan.GC

amazing update dear...

loved it..



Thanks alott dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: zohafarheen

awesome yaar
loving it



Thanks alott dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jass.KN

as always great work dear



Thanks alott dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

waiitng for an update



Updating two parts dear 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: neha5058

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">first very sorry sehri dear for late commenting here..

both update was superb..
wow loved their relation which is increasing day by day...
their unsaid words...
wow their dresses were superb...
sexy...and hot...
oops...maan becoming naughty...telling his daughter is hot
and sneha blurt out everything...hehehe...
maan and yash both are gone...
omg karan ne to shock hi de diya tha,,,
ye shaadi nahi ho sakti hai..
mai to darr hi gayi thi...
omg that was their plan...
karan and yash...dono ne sabko dara hi diya tha...
puri tarah...
maan ki situation kya thi uss time..i can feel...
haaye...
oh my god sanjeeda ki entry... i really liked her..
thanks dear...
superb updates..
love u dear..
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Thank u soo much sweety 😃
I'm happy u like it
And no problem for late commenting dear but kiya zaroor Karo phir chahe jab marzi karo 😆 😉 😳
Love u soo much mwahhh
And hugs for u too xxx 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

hey sehri... i am so so so sorry for late comment... plzz maaf kardo...
coming to the update...
awesome dear...
loved it to the core...
awww maan n sneha r so sweet... sneha is so naughty... she started playing...
maan n geet r looking so HOT as sneha said... 😆
oops loved their shocking face when sneha said that..
mujhe karan ko dekkar darr laga...
really loved karan's part... awww yash n karan r superb...
ohhh yash n meera... wow...
finally marriage... eagerly waiting...

love u dear...muahhh
once again so sorry for late comment...



Aw thank you so much jyothi sweety 😃
I'm glad u like it :)))
It's ok sweety no problem 😃
Hehe sneha ne kamal kar diya hai 😆 😉
Love u too mwahhh 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Geetmaan1234



Thank u soo much sweety 😃
I'm happy u like it
And no problem for late commenting dear but kiya zaroor Karo phir chahe jab marzi karo 😆 😉 😳
Love u soo much mwahhh
And hugs for u too xxx 😃



fir theek hai... comment to zaroor karungi fir chahe late hi kyo na ho...
muah u too..
and OMG r u updating two updates??
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey update yaar kitna tym?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 26:-

They enjoyed their party with smiling and laughing, cracking jokes with each other...they were happy with karan in fact he was staying with them like their own family member and maan was happy to see everyone happy..they was repenting for giving pain everyone especially his geet...he had hurt her very much but not now he will not do anything like this, he will take her every pain her every sorrow he will never ever make her cry..all were busy in doing preparation, today was maan and geet's sangeet and mehndi..geet was in green saree with beautiful silver embroidery on it..maan was busy in staring at geet, yash and karan were smirking at him naughtily, they poked him on shoulder maan looked away embarrassed
KS:" aare maan sharma mat hota hai, aab bhabhi lag hi itni Aachi rahi tau tujhse control kaha hoga hum samaj sakte hai" he winks at him
Mk:" lagta hai Teri baari bhi Kuch aesa hi huwa tha haina"
Yash laughs at karan and karan makes baby
KS:" yaar tu mera mazak bana raha hai"
Mk:" chor naa yaar"
Y:" haa haa aab tau tu yahi kahe ga naa"
Maan glares at him..and they all laugh just then meera and kajal came
K:" kya baatein ho rahi hai"
M:" haa haa Zara hum bhi tau sune"
Yash and karan start staring at them..maan shakes his head with smile
Mk:" Kuch meera kajal bas karan humein apni suhagraat ke kisse suna raha tha haina karan"
Kajal looked at karan with big eyes whereas karan eyes popped out he looked at maan with baby angry face
Yash burst out laughing so as maan
Kajal looked at karan with angry eyes
K:" kya tum yeh Sab kar rahe the"
KS:" aree na...nahi...nahin Tau darling yeh maan bhi naa" he stammered looking at maan
Mk:" aree mahal mien mazak kar raha hoo aesa Kuch nahin huwa hai"
They all smile yash was staring at meera..meera blushes and looked away.
They all enjoyed their sangeet geet was very happy..maan was happy to see feet happy but somewhere he saw some sadness behind her happy smiling face but he didn't know what is this for. Meera and kajal dance on sangeet..they pulled geet with them as well they were dancing smiling sneha and mehak were also dancing with their chunni munni legs. Maan smiled at them so as Karan and yash but they were busy in staring at kajal and meera.
They enjoyed their sangeet mehndi ceremony..at night he eat their dinner together..sneha sit in maan's lap as usual and eats from his hand
They all enjoyed their dinner with smiling and laughing..they all were tired so dadima retired to her room because tomorrow is their wedding so work is still left.
Maan yash and Karan were in one room enjoying each others company whereas kajal meera and geet were in room enjoying each others company..sneha and mehak were busy in playing with each other
Maan was in room with yash and Karan..they all were talking but they find maan little bit quiet..they looked at each other with worried face
KS:" maan.."
But maan was lost in his thoughts, seriousness was on his face
Karan looked at yash
Y:" maan!!"
Still they got no response from him
Karan touched his shoulder and maan snapped out from his thoughts
Mk:" kya huwa"
KS:" Hume Tau Kuch nahin huwa par tujhe kya huwa"
Mk:" nahi..Kuch bhi nahi"
Y:" jhoot mat Bol maan..mien tujhe Aachen tareeke se janta hoo..tujhe jhoot bolna bilkul nahin aata..Bata kya Baat hai, tu Kuch serious aur pareshan lag raha hai sab theek hai naa"
Maan looked at them both..he goes and stands beside window looking at maan
Mk:" pata nahi..par meine geet ke haste muskarate chehre ke peeche koi dukh chupa dekha hai..Jese wo kisi Baat ko le kar buhat hurt hai...par kya Baat hai yeh mien bhi nahin janta, par janana chahta hoo ke Aesi konsi Baat hai Jo meri geet ko pareshaan kar rahi hai"
Karan and yash looked at each other with worried face
KS:" par maan yeh Teri galat fehmi bhi Tau ho sakti hai naa"
Mk:" nahin Karan...galat fehmi ek Baar ho sakti hai doo Baar ho sakti hai par teen Baar...nahin yeh galat fehmi nahin ho sakti..koi Aesi Baat zaroor hai"
Yash was lost in his thoughts and then something came in his mind
Y:" kahi bhabhi apne mom dad ko Tau miss nahin kar rahi"
Maan and Karan looked at them astonishment
KS:" aare haa yeh bhi Tau ho sakta hai naa."
Mk:" lekin uske maa baap ne uske saath.."
Y:" haa maan...buhat galat kiya in logo ne bhabhi ke saath...bachpan mien hi bhabhi ne itne dukh dekh liye hai, aur un ke maa baap ne un ke saath kya kiya..beta paane ki chahat mien unki zindagi ko barbaad kar dala, paida hote hi unko orphanage mien daal diya..tab jab unko unki sabse zada zorurat thi"
Maan and karan with shock and painful eyes..maan knew that her parents had left from but he didn't know that they left her because they wanted a boy not a girl
Mk:" yeh tu kya keh raha hai yash"
Y:" haa maan yehi sach hai"
One tear escaped from his eyes..and what he did to geet, gave her so much pain when they got married he still remembered his words what he said to geet when he had misunderstood her for no reason
""Tum soch bhi nahin sakti ke mein tumse Kitni nafrat karta hu... Aab mujhe Samaj mein aaya ke tumhare maa baap tumse itni nafrat kyun karte the... Kyun ke tum sirf nafrat ke like ho... Unho ne bhi tumse nafrat hi ki aur mein bhi tumse sirf nafrat karta hu... Samjhi tum""
Tears escaped from his eyes, he dropped on his knees looking at ceiling
Mk:"aur...aur meine apni geet ke saath kya kiya...mujhse pyaar paane ki chahat mein usne yeh shaadi ki yeh sock ke ke shayed usse woh pyaar wapis mil jaaye lekin...lekin meine usse itna tadpaya, usse itni takleef...woh Sab lafz kahe jo mein janta tha ke usse sabse zada takleef punchaye ge" he start crying not facing anyone
Tear escaped from karan and yash's eyes too
Yash went to him and hugged him tightly maan hugged her back
Mk:" meine uske saath itna bura kiya lekin wo aab bhi mujhse aur sirf mujhse pyaar karti hai...mein uske pyaar ke layak nahin hoo...nahin hoo"
Y:" aesa mat Bol maan...is mein Teri koi galti nahin hai...tu bhi majboor tha isliye aapne aap ko zimedar mat thehra"
Karan went to him and touched his shoulder
KS:" haa maan yash bilkul theek keh raha hai jo huwa us mein Teri galti nahin hai"
KS:" is waqt bas yeh soch ke geet bhabhi ko Khushi Kese dii jaaye,
Yeh din Khushi ke din hai maan isliye puraani baatein bhul jaa warna geet bhabhi tujhse aese dekh kar pareshaan ho jayengi"
Y:" haa maan karan theek keh raha hai purani baatein bhul jaa"
Maan nodded and wipes his tears
Mk:" chahe Kuch bhi ho jaaye mein apni geet ko udaas nahin hone dunga"
Karan and yash smiled at him they all hugged each other.

Precap:- MK:" I'm sorry geet"

Really sorry for late update
Updating another part in few minutes :D
Plz do comment and press like
Sehri xxx

Edited by Geetmaan1234 - 13 years ago

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