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Posted: 12 years ago


Part: 22

HANDCUFFED
Recap:
Geet: Vicky, Dev, Sharad, and the rest of you guys. Can you guys help move the damn tree that just fell outside blocking the gate. Something came up and I have to go.

All the guys nod, "Sure Geet".
She gives a weak smile, but just when she was about to turn toward the door, she automatically stops and takes a step back.

********

She could barely look at him in the eye, when she so much wanted to slap him!
"You're not going anywhere. Everyone is staying here for the night. It's pouring crazy outside and it's too dangerous. Another tree could fall and I won't let anyone risk their lives just because you need to be somewhere Geet!" his voice so stern and cold.
She moves the gaze of her eyes and looks straight at him. What happened to the guy that danced with her outside in the rain? Somewhere she was glad that he was back to his old self.
"Fine, I will find another way to leave, but in no way am I going to stay here! I have somewhere better to be" Geet snaps back and she turns to leave.
Maan yanks her by her wrist and pulls her back to him, " Look's like you didn't hear me Handa. That somewhere is now HERE! As much as I would love for you to leave, but unfortunately for both of us YOU CAN'T. Just Get inside and at least try to make the rest of the night less miserable with your presence.
Everyone else gasps in shock. The impact of his words made them cringe, when it was intended toward Geet. So God only knew how much damage it had done to Geet, because her poker face was giving nothing away.
"and whose going to stop me ?" she dangerously inched closer to his face.
"You?" she hisses staring deep into his eyes.
"I like to see who DARES to even try" her eyes spitting out fire.
She moves the gaze of her eyes away from Maan and looks at the others who looked the other way. They were too scared to meet her in the eyes, let alone dare to stop Geet Handa from what she wanted.
Geet smirks and turns to leave.
"Bad move Geet" Maan grins as he mutters to himself.
She was practically out the door when she feels something cold and sharp tangle around her wrist.
Before she could get a glimpse of what was on her wrist she was getting dragged by her wrist, her body sweeping against the floor.
"aaah Maan!" she yelps in pain holding on to her wrist that was now handcuffed to Maan's hand, but he mercilessly walked dragging her body with him.
"MAAN! Stop. . .You're hurting her" everyone screamed.
Maan abruptly stops and yanks Geet up by her shoulders.
"Listen up Miss Geet Handa. You are going to do as your told. I am done taking shit from you! You want to die so bad, be my guest. But I won't let you die in front of me or on my property. The blame will certainly go on me, especially since from day 1 you have been screaming REVENGE, Revenge. I am here for REVENGE!
If I am gonna have to drag your body the way I just did I WILL! Open up your ears and get one thing straight. Don't dare challenge Maan Singh Khurana ever again" he shook her with rage.
Something wet drops on Geet's hand, before she can look down to see what it was Maan shoves her away, as she looked on, something breaking and cracking inside her.

Feeling something wet she touches her cheeks and brushes against it with her fingertips. She looks over at her fingertips. "Tears" she gasps silently to herself as if someone had slapped her in the face. She hated tears! It had been years since she last time let tears spring from her eyes.
She then suddenly looks over to the other people who were staring at both of them in shock. She looks back at Maan and starts to clap through her brewing eyes of tears.
"Sha bash! Mr. Maan Singh Khurana. Congratulations!" she continued to menacingly clap.
"I fell for your trap. This was all a game to you wasn't it. This bet to get me here and to put me down in front of everybody. Sha bash!" she clapped once more.
"Now here one last thing from me. The second I break free from here your finished! I will finish you!
"Guess I will have to hold you captive then." Maan opens the handcuff on his hand and locks it on a pole, walking away without one glance back.
"You f**king bas***d. Come back here you coward! You can't kidnap me! I am GEET HANDA! You can't do this to me!" she screams and yells, yanking against the hancuff trying to break free, but in vain.
"What the hell is Maan doing. He can't do this to Geet! Has he lost his mind" Pinky yelled.
"I am going to call the cops Vicky. Set you're brother straight or God help me I will" Meera raged.
Dev walks up to Geet, remorse filling his veins.
"I am so sorry Geet. I won't let him do this you. I promise. I will get you out of here. We all will!" he places his hand on hers, trying to comfort her.
"Get away from me. Nafrat hai mujhe tumse. Nafrat hai mujhse sabse. You guys all knew. You used me! I hate you all. Get away from me Dev! You guys will all pay. Mark my words. YOU GUYS WILL ALL PAY" she blasted at the top of her lungs still yanking and trying to break free.
"Geet we are your friends. We didn't know that this is what Maan had planned. We swear!" Vicky tries to defend themselves.
"Hah! Friends! f**k you all and your friendship. All of it was a lie. If you were my friends you would of never helped Maan, my enemy, with this game" Geet hisses still trying to break free.
"Stop it Geet. You are hurting yourself. Your wrists are bleeding" Simran comes by her side and tries to stop her.
" Get away from me you bitch" Geet mercilessly shoves her away, but Sharad catches her before she could fall.
Dev: I can't take it anymore. Maan is going to have to give me that key or else I will fight him for it.
Vicky: Are you crazy! You can't go up against Maan. He is your older brother. Everybody just calm down. We can't get our anger get the best of us. That's not going to let us get the key. We have to approach Maan nicely and try to make him see sense.
" Fine, but if that doesn't work. Not even Geet will be able to stop me" Dev says walking away angrily.
"Geet please stop. You won't be able to break free like this. You're just hurting yourself! We will get you out. Just stop hurting yourself" Meera tries to comfort her.
Geet just starts to laugh. "Shove this fake concern up your ass Meera. You want me to stop hurting myself, then get the f**k out of my face".

Her words didn't hurt Meera. In fact it didn't hurt anyone. Somewhere, they knew it was justified, especially coming from a person like her.

Meera: Fine. We will all leave you alone. If that's what you want. But only if you stop hurting yourself.
"Just get lost!" Geet mutters so mentally and physically exhausted.
Meera eyes for everybody to leave.
When she was alone, she couldn't hold back her tears. Slowly, drop by drop, tears made there way down her eyes. More than anyone else she was angry with herself! She never seems to learn her lesson, and lands in the same place. Weak, used, and helpless. How did she land up like this again?
Even in the situation like this, her mind taunts her by sending her flashbacks of their dance in the rain.
The way he sung to her.
The way he swept her off her feet.
The way he sent delicious currents down her body.
The way she wanted, yearned for his lips, for him to kiss her.
She screams as the forbidden feelings, unfamiliar feelings that she has tried to repress run through her drained body. Deep down her muscles clench scrumptiously, defying her! When he manhandled her, played her, humiliated her, here she was yearning for his damn touch.
She twisted, tugged, and yanked, against the handcuff but she was still chained. She let's out a sob. What was happening with her? She was losing control of her life, control of herself! All because of that bas***d!
This is not over! She vows her eyes burning with a dangerous determinacy and vengeance.
**********
Meera saw him nonchalantly playing the piano. Something snapped inside her and she goes toward him, slaps him across his face!
"You bas***d! I don't give a f**k who you are! But you have no right to treat my friend like that! Is this how you want to win her love! Now she will kill you and herself before falling for you! You bas***d, you have no idea what you have unleashed!" Meera hisses with eyes full of pain.
"Hit me! Hit me again Meera! What the f**k you waiting for!" he roared.
Vicky comes in between them.
Vicky: Calm the shit down both of you!

He looks angrily toward Meera, " What happened to confronting Maan nicely".

"Oh puleez Vicky. I ain't going to let him f**king play the piano like he has no care for the world, while my friend is chained to a goddamn pole!" she hisses back.
Maan: Oh for the love of God!You think I like what I did to her? I love her damn it! It's killing me the way I have to pretend I hate her guts. But I have no choice. This is the only way that I will crack through her.
I have to beat her broken inside and out, to let the true Geet she has buried to finally come out! Otherwise she will always remain a wh**e for the rest of her life!
Pinky: wah maan! How can you claim to love the same woman you call a wh**e!
Maan: what she does, looks nothing less than a wh**e! And I am f**king in love with a wh**e! How do you think that makes me feel? I am in love with a woman, that has slept with more people than she herself can count.
She is not supposed to be this person! I have seen it. I could feel it. That moment we had in the rain, she was not the Geet Handa everybody fears and knows. She was someone else. So innocent, so vulnerable. I could feel the fear vibrating from her body when I was dancing with her in the rain. Like for the first time she was losing control.
And for someone who everyone fears, has so much power and control, that's your worst nightmare come true.
And I am going to do just that. No matter how much it's going to hurt both of us.
I was able to make a small crack through her today. I am going to have to make the crack bigger and bigger, until I can save her from herself.
Dev: I won't let you take this risk with her! I won't let you try to save her, but put her through the brink of death to get her their. If you loved her truly you would accept her the way she is!
Maan: Oh yeah? Are you man enough to marry her, but at night when your peacefully asleep with her in your arms, she runs away from your arms and goes to ride someone else's dick!
Everyone gasps with Maan's choice of words, but they couldn't deny the fact that he was right, even if it disturbingly discriptive.
Dev grits his teeth, numb, and out of words. He knew his brother was right, but the pain he saw in Geet's eyes was making him feel so guilty.
Dev: I can't see her in pain. She is killing herself out there alone bhai. There has to be another way bro. Holding her captive is going to get us nowhere.
Maan: Geet has a secret life. She is more complicated than she puts to show, like she hiding something behind her promiscuous image. It's like she is on some personal mission. What exactly that is I am going to have to find out. But she wasn't lying when she said she has to go somewhere else. That's why I am holding her here, so she doesn't go.
Meera: So what's the plan? Let her bleed herself to death in trying to escape? Do something Maan.
Maan: She is what?? Ughhh she can be such a crazy bitch sometimes!

Fine you guys go eat. Everything is in the kitchen. I am going to go give some food to Geet and bandage her wrist.


Precap:

Geet is talking??Her vulnerability talking😲

Oh yeah and how exactly can you tell I am lying?" he whispers coming closer as he runs his nose along her jaw line and Geet's hands unknowingly moves to his hair, yanking his head up, so their eyes were boring into each other.

"Because you never fell for that girl" she whispers looking deeply into his eyes as if she wanted him to see through her. Help find that girl that she buried away a long time ago.


I know you guys are all confused with questions of, What just happened!! Nooo WHy? And then you see the pre cap!! and you don't know if your happy or sad? Am i right? Well this is the dark aspect of the story. What is true, what is fake? What words that come out of Maaneet's mouth are just for the war they are fighting and what words are coming from their hearts? What actions are for the game and what actions are from the moment of weakness of their hearts. So just stayed tuned on how i develop the story.

I need to know what you are guys are thinking! Seeing the number of likes in the last update, i felt someone kicked me in my guts. I told myself it was because i disappeared for a long time, so hopefully it will increase back again. I need the motivation guys, and that really demotivated me to be honest.

Let me know whose side you guys are on?? Geet, Maan, or both? Whose right and whose wrong?

P.S Exuse the language that i use. It's a college based story and well college students use such language normally, even more when they get angry. So I used to here as well. If you guys have an issue with it , let me know.

Please like and comment and finish this thread 😳

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Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
what a part dear
i don't know what to say
geet is in pain maan is in pain
i am just thinking that geet did not hurt herself more
please cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just read the chp,it was very well written. But Maan is seriously crazy, I mean how could he just handcuff her to some pole like that😡 The pre-cap seems interesting and I think, rather hope a little bit of Geet's past will come out in it. As for teams, right from the beginning, ever since I read this FF, I've been in team Geet cos I know that her rude behaviour is just an exterior and that she is a nice person beneath it all😊. Looking forward to the next chp and update soon Zee😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
i really want to know abt dat geet handa which she is hiding frm the world
i dnt knw wheather maan is doing right or wrong bt i think it will help geet
do update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing Update
Continue Soon
Thanks For The PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi thanks 4 da pm n rocking intense update! Maan handcuffs Geet! All angry! Maan tells dem y he is dng dat! He loves Geet! Well written! Geet needs this! Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
the only thing that comes to my mind after reading the update is OMGGG...did maan really say those things!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved the update
will maan really be able to crack her by keeping her captive
waiting eagerly for the next
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Posted: 12 years ago
geet is affecting n breaking gradually...

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