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sona rai

@sona-rai

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Posted: 12 years ago

#691

wowww amazing MAHA SPEECH ,,,ZEE DEAR,hehehehe.

we'll wait yar,hum ne kahan jana...hehehehe.

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 12 years ago

#692

Dekha...jyada speech diya aur comp band pad gaya...lol... Jaldi jaldi update karo Glad that you got some free time for us 😉 Eagerly waiting for you to update

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@Mrs.ZSK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#693

I am finally awake. . though i missed class cuz i woke up too late...ooopsie😆

NOT updating but POSTING. . .give me 30ish minutes :))))

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@Mrs.ZSK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#694

Part:21

"Let it rain over me"

RecaP( Version 1: This is more of a summary of the previous chapter in case you forgot where the story is. Otherwise just scroll down to the shorter version RecaP.)

The story left off at the point where Maan and Geet are making each other jealous by dancing with other people at the Club. But suddenly Geet leaves seeing someone she knows come there. The guys mocks her, saying he saw the person he calls a distraction, of course referring to Maan. She gets angry and tells him to shut up and leave before someone sees him here. He tells her that she has to get the job done this weekend, and that he came here to give her a heads up, since she is his boss. Maan overhears the whole conversation, but pretends that he doesn't when he butts in asking Geet if the guy is bothering him. SHe says no and walks away.

The rest of the night Maan is up trying to put the pieces of Geet Handa together. He devises a plan to try to figure her out and take her mask off. That's why the next day Maan, Vicky, Meera, and some other college students trap Geet into a Bet, of whether she and the other girls will be able to pull of a desi girl look.

RecaP: (Shorter version with dialogues)

Geet: I never said I had innocence, its you who fell for that girl that didn't exist!

Maan: we shall see D a r l i n g!

" okay Meera this bet is so on. I also want to see how this will play out. Tomorrow at 5 at the Khurana farm house we guys will be waiting for you" Vicky says putting his hand out.

Meera shakes his hand. While the other girls and guys glared at each other with the intention of winning.

Geet puts her hand out, but Geet removes her hand in the nick of time, " sss too slow. Get ready to lose babez" winks before walking off.

Maan couldn't wipe the huge grin that played on his face as he watched his paagli walk away.

And that's what you call a "check mate!" giving a hi five to Vicky.

***************

Next day it was it 4 p.m. One hour left till the girls arrived. All the guys were waiting anxiously.

Vicky: Maan I can't believe you got all us poor guys into this mess. I know Geet will win this bet and omg we will have to SING. Have you heard my voice?? I don't even want to put my pour ears through that torture.

" Don't worry little bro. I am here" he winks.

***************

Meanwhile about 15 girls were getting ready at Geet's house, all giggling and chirping.

Geet had taken them shopping this morning and bought everybody what there heart desired, of course making sure it looked good on them. It was her treat to them and of course to prove the boys wrong.

A girl named simran comes and hugs Geet from behind as she did Meera's hair saying, " oh thank you thank you Geet. I love this outfit".

Geet smiles and says "your welcome".

Everybody starts thanking Geet. This was the first time they saw such a nice side of Geet. Geet was also taken aback at their sweet gesture. Even Geet was shocked with herself. If it weren't for the bet, she is never into the being NICE thing.

"Uffo girls, to all of you your welcome. Now no more thank you's and hurry up and finish getting ready. We got less than an hour left".

Meera: Geet thank you. Now you sit next to the mirror while I do your hair.

Geet: No thank you Meera. I can do it myself. I don't want to use the mirror, let Jasmin use the mirror.

Meera found it odd that she didn't want to use the mirror. She noticed that she hadn't taken a glimpse of herself in the beautiful sari she had on. Meera let's it go and helps do another girl's hair.

*********

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JzL9q6DGBKE[/YOUTUBE]

(Please listen to this song now to get a feel of the moments in store ahead ☺️ 😉)

Raj: Oh my god the girls are coming. They just parked in the driveway.

Shahid: Uff I am just waiting to see Simran, my heart is already going DHAK DHAK. When I see her I can't even imagine what will happen.

Meera starts to walk first while the other girls walked beside her. All of them had their dupattas over their heads and already the violins of the guy's heart started to play.

Maan chuckled seeing their hopeless state and mutters to them, " Moo to band karo uncles".

Suddenly the girls slide their dupatta's off and over the Guy's face, making their senses crazy with their scent.

The guys surrender in defeat seeing their serene beauty and start to sing lost in their beauty:

Boys:

Ishq jaise hai ek aandhi, ishq hai ek toofaan

Ishq ke aage bebas hai duniya mein har ilzaam

Ishq mein sab deewaane hain, ishq mein sab hairaan

Ishq mein sab kuch mushkil hai, ishq mein sab aasaan

Dekho pyaare yeh nazaare yeh deewaane yeh parwaane

Hai ishq mein kaise gum

Vicky sings, "Haayye, tumse milke dil ka hai jo haal kya kahe

Ho gaya hai kaisa yeh kamaal kya kahe" dancing near Meera, but Meera plays hard to get and walks the other way.

Boys sing "Dum tara dum tara Dum tara dum tara dummm aaa

Dum tara dum tara Dum tara dummm aaa" as they danced to the musical hip movements of their lover.

Dev sings, "Dil to hai ek raahi jaana, dil ki tum manzil ho

Dil to hai ek kashti jaana jiska tum saahil ho

Dil na phir kuch maange jaana tum agar haasil ho

Dil to hai mera tanha jaana, aao to mehfil ho"

As there was this beautiful girl making her way down with a dupatta over her concealing herself, but he doesn't show it to anyone else and starts to dance with a random girl, since that girl wasn't HIS!

Maan's heartbeat was running away from him as he sees her coming toward's them in a red sari, concealing her face with a spare red sheer dupatta.

Out of no where the skies get dark and gray and it starts to rain in buckets, the strong wind blowing off Geet's spare dupatta as if flew away with the wind.

Geet makes a run for it from the rain, but finds her pallu stuck. She turns around and sees it got stuck on to Maan's watch.

Geet watches him, enthralled as slowly, like the predator he is, he stalked her in time to the slow sultry beat of the music. He's wearing a black deep cut v neck sherwani, which was now soaked and tugging on his body, as he approached her with a smoldering look.

"Oh my. . .he really is, quite. . . wow" Geet couldn't help but think to herself. She was spell bounded.

Not being able to control himself Maan sings,

"Tumko pooja hai

tumhaari hi ibaadat ki hai

Humne jab ki hai to phir aise mohabbat ki hai" as he encircles around her holding her captive against his intense gaze, taking his time in taking off the pallu.

Suddenly he tugs on her Pallu and she comes twirling into his arms, "Dil mera paagal hai jaana, isko tum behla do".

As she comes crashing toward him, Maan holds her tightly against his chest. She is so close to him she inhales his clean, vital scent. He smells of fresh laundered linen and some expensive body-wash. It's so mouthwateringly intoxicating that she inhales deeply.

"Dil mein kyoon halchal hai jaana, mujhko tum samjha do"

"Maheka jo aanchal hai jaana, isko tum lehra do" he sings taking the pallu off his watch and snuggly places it over her shoulder, while Geet laid immobilized aware of that delicious current running right through her, lightening her up, making her blush sure of the fact that her erratic breathing must be audible.

Suddenly Maan snakes one hand up her back and dips her down in a dramatic hold so that her hair touches the ground as he leaned millimeters away from her lips softly singing,"Zulf jo baadal hai jaana, mujhpe tum barsa do"

Geet dazed and lost in the moment closes her eyes in anticipation, but to her dismay he sings, "Jaana leke jaan aaya hai tera yeh deewaana" sealing it with a kiss at the side of her neck, making the cells in her body quiver with delicious tingles.

He slowly pulls her back up, scooping his hand up all the way up her spine and into her hair.

As they both stand up, face inches away, Maan has one arm around Geet, clasping her to him, while the fingers of his other hand softly trace her face, gently probing, examining her singing, "Jaana mere dil mein kya hai tune yeh na jaana".

Trying to pierce right through her eyes to her soul with his intense gaze. Geet's breath hitches as fear tingles with the pleasurable sensations that his thumb courses through her as he brushes her lower lip with it as he sings, "Jaana tujhko yaad aayega mera yeh afsaana".

He's staring into her eyes, and she holds his anxious, burning gaze for a moment or maybe it's forever. . .

Until he let's go and walks away without one glance back, leaving her hanging with her racing heart and hormones.

He watches his retreating body disappear as he walks inside the farm house.

She let's out her breath that she didn't even know she was holding, trying to register what took place as she runs her hand through her hair.

She was alone, everybody else had run for cover the moment it started to rain, but they watched the special moment that Maan and Geet shared through the window.

"Hayyye" Pinky gushes.

"That was so Hot and Romantic. So filmy yaar" Meera says not being able to hide her smile.

Simran shoves Sharad away from her, " Why can't you be romantic like that with me" she pouts.

" Oh baby, I would never have the strength to let you go half way. I don't know how Maan just walked away from Geet. I would of kissed you till you were breathless" Sharad teases making Simran blush.

Everyone starts to chuckle and laugh. Maan heard that comment as he walked inside. Everyone stops laughing. Maan didn't even mind. He just looked out through the window at her, all the cells of his body still quenching for her touch. Everybody could see the pain in Maan's domineer. He wanted her so much. He was so close to her, yet so far. The richest and most successful man in India who got everything he wanted in the blink of an eye, couldn't have the love of his life in his arms. He watched her intently, she looked lost and dazed. He still couldn't decipher what could make such a beautiful woman turn to such a monster.

"Sharad, I had to tear every fiber in my body in order to let her go. Before she can love me, before I can love her, she has to learn to love herself" a small whisper full of ripping agony of his heart escaped from Maan's lips as he tore his gaze away from Geet and walked away in order to initiate the second part of this damn game.

"Bhai" Vicky says so lowly, not being able to bear his pain, but Dev stops him, placing a hand on his shoulder.

"Give him some time" Dev says trying to control his voice from cracking. But he didn't let anyone see the pain he was going through.

Vicky nodes his head.

***********

Geet raises her hands, which were shacking, bringing them to her eye level.

She still stood there under the rain, letting the cold raindrops cool the raging flames of her body. She winces, closing her eyes as flashbacks of their dance in the rain played back in her mind, jolting her out of her trance and reverie.

"What is happening with me!" a soft whimper escapes her lips.

"Why did I let him do this to me!" She says all angry with herself.

Geet: Never again! You hear yourself Geet. Never again!

"I have to go. I wasted enough of my time here" she says to herself hastily.

Suddenly lightening strikes and a huge tree falls on the driveway blocking the gate of the farmhouse.

Geet: Shit! Oh no. This can't be happening. I have to go!

She runs inside to get the guys to move the tree so she could leave.

Geet: Vicky, Dev, Sharad, and the rest of you guys. Can you guys help move the damn tree that just fell outside blocking the gate. Something came up and I have to go.

All the guys nod, "Sure Geet".

She gives a weak smile, but just when she was about to turn toward the door, she automatically stops and takes a step back.

Precap:

"and whose going to stop me ?" she dangerously inched closer to his face.

"You?" Geet hisses staring deep into his eyes.

Hey everyone. Surprise surprise. .. i know i can't believe i updated. .. after ages! *sowwie* and also my apologies who waited last night for me to update but just when i was putting the finishes touches my laptop froze

Those who haven't read my maha speech/important message to read it😃

mportant message (Read all plz😳):

Instead of focusing on my final projects/papers and Exams next week i have spent the last 2 days writing for ISRTU. . to the point i can't stop and the ideas and inspiration kept my fingers typing like crazy! i think i have 5 updates typed up 😆 which is good cuz i am gonna be real busy for the next 3 weeks as its my finals period so i won't have NO TIME to write and so i can just post at least an update i have in stock once a week for u guys till i am able to update again :D

I hope you haven't forgotten this story. . .i am sorry i keep on leaving it . . .it's just that its easier when you handle one story at a time. So now all you guys will be seeing is updates for ISRTU till further notice.

I know i have two epilogues pending both for "Two broken hearts falling in love" and "Love is blind". I promise i will give an epilogue. Just after my finals . Please bear with me 😳

I have a lot of interesting parts and tracks planned for this FF. As you can see i couldn't stop typing once i got started😉 It's definitely going to be dark,intense,passionate, and painful. That's what this FF had promised in the beginning as it's a dark concept. So i am going to need you guys to trust me and give me time to build the story until its climax. As I won't reveal much about Geet's past until the very end, since i want to build up to the suspense. BUT i will be giving many many hints here and their. But when the going gets stuff just don't judge too much until you have seen the full picture. If your familiar with my writing style i may start with one thing but end with something totally at the end of the update. I keep you on your toes cuz i am zaalim like that but you know you like it 😳

That's why i am going to need you guys to always let me know what you are thinking after each update. If you have any questions, any concerns, and suggestions plz plz let me know. But please nicely. I have gotten bashed quite rudely a few times and i understand its because its of Geet's characterization. But you got to understand this is just fiction and also i have a justification as to why Geet is like this, which you will find out later on.

Okay i am done with my maha speech ! I will post the next update soon :)

Here is a maaneet vm on the song used in this update! It's nice, check it out if you wish.

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=foaPACPIGZg[/YOUTUBE]

Please like😳 and big wala comments toh banta hai boss😛

Edited by Mrs.ZSK - 12 years ago

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