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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

will wait for ur update Mishty

aur haan jaise hi tum update karogi ur Pihu will give u 3 big comments on all parts that I have missed
Pihu loves her Mishty a lot u also love me na😳


aww thanks Piya
i'll b waiting eagerly 4 ur 3 big comments😃
n ys i love u very very much❤️
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Posted: 13 years ago
updated ma comment on pg38
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydevil87

updated ma comment on pg38


thanks Gina..will jus hv a look
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydevil87


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beautiful n super cute update yaar...
awww mi luved d way dadima proudly introduced geet to everyone...n maan's effect on geet is majestic...
luved d song choices for sangeet angel...n d special songs r indeed special...
u beautifully portrayed geet's dillema...its difficult n heartbreaking to leave her house for a girl yet dat day is one of d biggest n happiest days of her life if shes getting married to her prince charming...
maan is sooo understanding...luv him yaar...
d way he calmed her n took her to talk to her parents...it was really sweet of him...
d whole convo between geet n her parents was really emotional n sweet...
maan n papaji's convo was nyc too...
n d last maaneet bit was super duper cute...i really luved it...
amazing part angel...n sry for being so late...
luvya loadzzz...


awww thank u sooo sooo sooo much gina
i'm glad u liked it..i was confused whether i'll b able to gt my idea out right..hehe
thank u once agen😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Updating d last part which is d update u all hav been waiting for..

jus searching for some pics...gimme few mins :))

arrrggghhh 😡
it 2k me forever 2 find them pics.. some dint even paste😡😡

anyways hope u enjoy the update😃
Edited by luv_GurTi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Here is the LAST PART of my os... I AM IN LOVE

It was finally the day that Maan and Geet have been waiting for..it was the day of their wedding..the day two souls will be united into one..their hearts connected with each other way before but today was they day that Maan and Geet will be united forever and for eternity.

In Geet's room at the Handa house..the girls were dressing up Geet..she looked beautiful in her designer red bridal wear which obviously Maan had chosen..there was so much chaos going on in their house..Geet was sitting in front of her dressing table almost ready she just had to put her maang tikka on and her ghoongat.

One of the aunt's had come into Geet's room to call all the girls down..as she needed to discuss some rituals with them.

Girl 1: Geet tum tab tak yaha baithi raho..hum bus abhi aaye..theek hai?

Geet simply nodded..all the girls left her room on by one..and the last one closed the door behind her..Geet looked at herself in the mirror..she looked at her mehendi and shied..she covered her face with her hands..she suddenly felt something being placed on her head..She looked up to see Maan smiling at her in the mirror.

Geet: Maan aap yaha..iss waqt kya kar rahe hain..agar kisi ne aapko...toh pata nahi kya hoga..

She started to speak like a train on its track at the highest speed..Maan simply adored this quality of hers..when getting no response from him..she waved her hands in front of him to get his attention

Geet: why are you standing here like a statue..jawab dijiye Maan..aap yaha kyun aaye hain?

Maan: Mishti tum shayad kuch bhool rahi ho..

Geet looks at him confused..Maan come forward wraps his arms around her waist bringing her more closer..

Maan: Geet tumhe yaad nahi..maine tumse kaha tha..ki meri dulhan ko sabse pehle main hi dekhoonga..toh bus wahi dekhne aaya hoon

Geet blushes..remembering that moment were Maan had promised himself that he will be the first person to see her dressed completely as a bride.

FLASHBACK

Maan and Geet were at the designer bridal wear boutique..Maan had exclusively booked the whole boutique all day so that Geet could take her time in selecting her wedding lehenga...Geet could not stop adoring her Prince Charming...he does so much for her..

Geet was going through many of the expensive designer lehenga's but she could seem to find the right one..Maan very patiently waited for her and ordered the boutique staff to show something unique..whilst Geet was looking at some example..Maan had got a phone call so he excused himself.

It had been more than ten minutes Maan had been on the phone..so Geet excused herself and went looking for Maan..she found him to be looking at this bridal were that was on a manikin on the in the glass box..she went back to the sales staff and started to search through the samples again.

Maan had come back to find Geet not there..he asked the staff about Geet went to the trial room to try some of the samples on and she told him that Geet had left him a message to wait for her in the trial area..Maan patiently waited for Geet..whilst still remembering that bridal outfit that he saw in the glass box..suddenly he sees the curtain moving so he knew Geet.

Maan was left speechless when he saw Geet in that same bridal outfit that he saw in the glass box..and he expected Geet to look exactly like this..she was looking like an angel who had descended from heaven for him..just for him..only for him.

Maan: Geet you look beautiful sweetheart..simply wearing this bridal wear without any accessories you look gorgeous..so just imagine when you will be decked up with the jewellery and everything..how beautiful you will look..

Geet: aapko yahi lehenga acha laga na..aap ki pasand se zyada mere liye aur kuch maayne nahi rakta

Maan was sooo over whelmed that he gave Geet a tight bone crushing hug..Geet held on to him as tight as she could..after breaking away from the hug..Maan gave her a kiss on the forehead very tenderly.

Maan: jee to karta hain..ki shaadi wale din sabse pehle main hi tumhe sabse pehleapne dulhan ke roop main tayyar dekhoon

Geet: (naughtily) aww..but I'm very sorry to say Mr Maan Singh Khurana..ap toh mujhe seedha mandap pe hi milenge..samjhe aap?

Maan: acha toh tum Maan Singh Khurana ko challenge kar rahi ho?

Geet: (thinking its impossible for Maan to see her first on the wedding day dressed up as the bride..she very confidently says) jee haan..main aapko challenge kar rahi hoon..dekhte hain aap sabse pehle mujhe kaise dulhan ki roop main dekhte hain..

Maan: Geet..think twice before you challenge me...har jawogi..toh phir jo main kahunga..tumhe karna hoga..theek hain.

Geet very confidently extends her hand forward and Maan also does the same..Maan smirks knowing how to win this challenge.

FLASHBACK ENDS.

Maan: toh yaad aaya meri Mishti ko..toh jo main kahoonga tumhe wahi karna hoga..toh main chahata hoon..ki tum abhi mujhe kiss karo

Geet: kya..!! Maan aap pagal toh nahi ho gaye..kuch hi dair main hamari shaadi hain..aur aap yaha mere kamre main..agar koi aagaya toh pata nahi kya hoga

Maan: kuch nahi hoga..mujhe pe bharosa hain?

Geet nods her head yes..she knew that whenever Maan is with her nothing can go wrong..Maan smiles and gently pulls her forward..he wraps his arms around her waist and she puts her arms around his neck..they come closer and closer..and then their lips meet..they share a very passionate kiss..they forgot about their surroundings completely and gave everything they had into this kiss.

They pulled apart after a very long time..but their foreheads were touching..both were getting back their breaths..whilst Geet feeling a mixture of emotions..Maan was on cloud nine..

Maan: (smiling) thank you Geet

Geet: (feeling nervous) Maan ab aap yaha se jaiye..

Maan: (naughtily) nahi Geet..jaane ka maan nahi kar raha..

Geet: (teasingly)acha..agar aap jayenge nahi..toh ayenge kaise baraat lekar..mujhe lene?

Maan was left dumbstruck once again..his Mishti was absolutely right..he had to leave as soon as possible to take his Geet away with him forever..

Maan: sahi kaha tumne..I need to get home as soon as possible..

Geet: aah finally..your talking sense..now go

Maan came next to Geet and made her sit back in front of her dressing table..they never broke their eye contact..maaahiii was playing in the background..he very gently placed the ghoongat on to Geet..completely making her look like a bride..a very beautiful bride..

He kneeled down next to her and gave her a kiss on the forehead..and very gently pecked her lips..he moved towards her ear n whispered..

Maan: now you look like my bride..see you in a while

Before Geet could react..Maan was out the window..she blushed even more..and hid her face in her palms..

...

The Handa family members were waiting at the gates for the baraat..everything was beautifully decorated.. Geet was on the terrace with some of the girls and the rest of the girls waiting at the gate..the sound of dhol's, trumpets and drums could be heard..the baraat were approaching..people could be seen dancing..doing masti..having sooo much fun.

Maan was sat on top of a white horse which was also decorated..he was wearing a green designer sherwani..which Geet had had designed for him..with the designer..Maan noticed Geet on the terrace and gave her a flying kiss..by that time she was standing alone on the terrace with some little kids as all the girls went down to the gates to stop the groom from entering unless he paid to good amount of cash.

Maan got off the horse and a group of guys from the baraat picked him up..and they all started to dance..Maan also showed some of his moves..his happiness was evident on his face..he was smiling like sooo much today..Dadi could not have been happier today.

Maan had reached the gates where the girls were eagerly waiting for him..so that they could get a huge amount of cash..as they knew Maan will do anything for Geet. After a long conflict between the girls and boys..Maan had to settle down the atmosphere and agreed with the girls..everyone just adored the love Maan and Geet have for each other..it was like an example for the other youngsters present at the wedding.

Maan was welcomed into the Handa House after all the rituals..he sat waiting on the stage with a few of his old mates whom he had called..and a few office staffs..he eagerly was waiting for Geet..his eyes were locked to the stair case..

After a very long time (according to Maan) Geet was brought down by the girls..she looked just like an angel..Maan was left speechless once again..although he had already seen her just a few hours back..Geet could feel Maan's looking at her intensely..she blushed even more

She finally reached the stage and Maan extended his hand forward so he could help her up..they shared a sweet short eye lock which was broken due to the girls and boys that were on the stage.

The garlands were brought to the stage..Maan and Geet took them and stood in front of each other..Geet had to put it on Maan first so he came even closer and bowed his head down so that Geet could easily put the garland on him..Geet could not but smile at this move of his..everyone was laughing and Maan simple ignored..he was under Geet's spell from their very first meeting.

Now it was time for Maan to put the garland around Geet...he came forward and was ready to put the garland on her when her brother's picked her up in the air..everyone was enjoying Maan's expressions..he gave all the guys a stern look but they knew that Maan Singh Khurana could not do anything to them today..so they left Geet up in the air..

The next thing that happened that Maan was also in the air..his mates and office staff had picked him up too..so now both the bride and groom were in the air..so Maan finally put the garland around Geet..h also pulled her forward and gave her a kiss on the cheek whilst still in the air.

(just imagine Geet in the air too please and that Maan already has the garland on him and its Maan that is holding the garland)

...

Maan and Geet sat at the mandap..it was time for the nuptial rounds..Geet's parents completed the kanya daan..Maan applied the sindoor on Geet..and tied the mangalsutra around her neck..tehy took the seven rounds..and blessing from their elders..the wedding was now completed and Maan and Geet were tied together for eternity..

The bidaai was very emotional..it was hard to control Geet..she cried her heart out hugging her parents..she was now not only their beloved daughter but the bahu of Khurana kandaan and wife of Maan Singh Khurana..Geet mother explained to her to fulfil all her duties as a bahu and as a wife..her father very gently patted her head..and blessed both Maan and Geet.

They were outside near the car..which was decorated with flowers..Geet after hugging her parents one last time sat in the car..and Maan also hugged his in-law's and sat in the car..the car was driving slowly out the gates of Handa House..Geet's father was pushing the car from the back (imagine d song dulhe ka sehra..where d father was pushing d car frm d bck).

Maan held onto Geet's hand as she was still crying..he gave her a assuring look..she gently placed her head on his shoulder..and the drive was quiet all the way to Khurana Mansion.

They arrived at Khurana Mansion..Dadi had organised everything so grandly for the welcome of her daughter in law..she had been waiting for this day for a very long time..she fulfilled all her dreams that she had been storing up for Maan's wedding.

Dadi welcomed both into the Mansion..before entering Geet looked around her new house..this was her home..she was now Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana..Maan had captured their first step as husband and wife in their house onto some clay which was also decorated with flowers.

The games went on full swing..not just one or two games..they played many games..everyone was enjoying themselves..Geet was smiling like she used to..she was back to her normal self and Maan was happy to see her like this..

Maan and Geet both had a tie..so that meant they will both rule each other equally in their married life..but the truth was that Maan intentionally let Geet win the first few games but when Geet realised Maan was letting her win on purpose..she also started to lose the games on purpose so that Maan could win..the key success to marriage is to have a balance.

...

Geet was brought to Maan's room..which was completely changed..she realised his room had a makeover..the room had pictures of them hanging on the wall..a big picture of her was in the centre of the wall..

Geet could not be happier..Maan had got his room changed ..and it was filled with their memories.. the room was also decorated with red and white flowers..even on the bed..laid a heart shape made with the petals from the flowers..and in the middle lay a picture of them smiling at each other.

Geet was standing by the huge window when Maan entred the room..after being once again stopped by the girls..he paid another huge amount to them..

Maan: (self talk) are inn larkiyon ne toh mujhe kangaal bana diya..they rinsed my pockets out..but anything for my Mishti..yeh toh kuch bhi nahi hain.. (he said smiling)

Maan saw her standing by the window..he crept up from behind and snaked his hands around her stomach..Geet simply held onto him tighter and leaned back.

He turned her around and she simply just hugged him as tight as she could..Maan also reciprocated by hugging her tighter..they both have been waiting for this day for a very long time.

They break away from the hug..and Geet has a eyes casted down..she could not look into his eyes..Maan put his finger under her chin and made her look up.. Geet looked up and saw immense love in his eyes for her..she wrapped her hands around his neck and pulled him closer..Maan also held her tight by her waist..their lips met and they started to kiss each other very passionately.

After parting from each other's lip..to get some air..Maan simply carried her to their bed..he gently placed her on the bed..and sat near her.. he very affectionately took off her ghoongat.. all her jewellery one by one and placed a whole load of kisses there..Geet just held onto him..she hugged him as tight as she could..and Maan also sis the same..he very gently made her lie down whilst he was still on top of her..and he switched off the lights..the room was dark..and they both drowned into the night..expressing the love the love they have for one another.


THE END

(I'll leave the rest of to your imaginations..I'm not good at writing romance as you may have realised by now..hehe)

(If I get enough likes and comments I may write an epilogue..but that all depends on your comments and likes..so please do comment and like..and tell me what you like and did not like)

Just want to say a big thank you to all of you lovely readers..this was my very first attempt at writing..I initially thought it would only be a one part one shot..but the comments and likes u showered on this one shot..made me write more.

😃

Edited by luv_GurTi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

updated 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanks mariam darling
i hv updated..
will b waiting eagerly 4 ur comment 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

hehe yep
old is gold😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

thank u sweety 😃

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