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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

Part 8 - Awesome update'..very beautifully written Annie'.

Maan panished brij by taking his company's shares was wow'..he shown his actual place'.

Geet is right in her place'she could not take that b'cos of him she and dev's family are suffering a lot'are in such a pain'..

And about maan is also right in his palce'he is going thro' such turmoil that spend sleepless nights'he accepted his mistake as he was driving the car'actually break fail was not his mistake'.but he accepted and helping his family and geet'.

yeah
they both r in pain
they both r right
in their own way
but they both love each other
but strangely its pain
that is still binding them together
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

hahaha
yeah we have gone insane
over this IF
really
whenever i get time free
i am online
😆
yaar where is princess
these days
she come online
so less now😭

yaar... pehle to she has exam... and then she got her foot fractured... coz chair fell on her foot...
but she came online that day... i dint contact her since last 2 days... i will ask her today...she has to study more i think...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Part 8

Awesome Update
loved how Maan shut Brij up..
and made him leave the place right there...
when there's an accident...
which is due to brake fail...
there's no mistake of driver...
its just fate of the person who comes infront...
but the people/family who lost there beloved in such incidents...
are also at no mistake...
and its natural of them to accuse the driver...
poor Maan is repenting each and evey moment...
he couldnt sleep out of guilt...
and he tried to do whatever possible to soothe her pain...

yeah u know in the last part u would understand why the name is true betrayal when i started everyone thought that maan betraying geet but its not like that just read last few lines carefully and wow what comments
luv ya
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

Part 9

Awesome
very beautifully written

loved how she recalled each and every word of his
and now meaningfully...
its difficult for her to admit that she actually love the person... she was supposed to hate...
such a dilemma... when she knows that she love him.. and he also love him
but amidst all
the pain in each word of maan is now better understood...
even he is in so much pain...
Continue Soon

hi
yeah
u know
i have one more
concept in mind
its not painful
but has depth
i want to write
it after this
i think i can experiment
with it
😉
its not been tried
till yet
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

yaar... pehle to she has exam... and then she got her foot fractured... coz chair fell on her foot...
but she came online that day... i dint contact her since last 2 days... i will ask her today...she has to study more i think...

oh
princess fractured
her foot
and we even dont know
majour fracture
or fiber fracture?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

awesome part
the way u showed geet is fighting with herself is sooo good.

waiting for next part

luv ya jas
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra


hi
yeah
u know
i have one more
concept in mind
its not painful
but has depth
i want to write
it after this
i think i can experiment
with it
😉
its not been tried
till yet

wow... will love to read...
sometime i also got new new ideas... then i just suppress those... its really hard to give your ideas words...
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh thanks hema
i really needed that pic
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anshra

oh
princess fractured
her foot
and we even dont know
majour fracture
or fiber fracture?

no its minor... it was just a chair...
but she said it cause pain while walking...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: softly_spoken

wow... will love to read...
sometime i also got new new ideas... then i just suppress those... its really hard to give your ideas words...

u know rabs
dont think like that
bcs when ever i start na
i feel the same
that ok
what words n all
but just draw rough
sketch
and then start working
it takes
few days
but after that u will be
fluent with it

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