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pearl_warrior

@pearl_warrior

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#551

PART8

Nice update!!

Atlast Maan is opening up to Geet and with that he also confessed his feelings for her..

Now going to read part9..

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devibabu

@devibabu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#552

nice story... waiting for the update...

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soniyasharma90

@soniyasharma90

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#553

di for the new SS...

i know m very late...n m really feeling bad...

for commenting late...

i loved it to the core di... i mean its so different from the others what u have written till now...

loved it..they way u have written was so nice...each and every word each n every sentence holds so much meaning...do logo ka sirf khusi ka rishta nhn hota...i have seen n experienced same thing...now coming to the story...omg!!!!! loved it..u know i have read it twice...i loved it completely...m in love with ur writing di...now i demand more SS...i know m getting mean but cant help it...coz u only make me go mad...with ur stories...n the last few parts were mind blowing it...sad but touching...i mean u described every emotion so nicely that while reading i would feel the pain they might have gone through...dont have words di...lots of kissy wissy from my side to u...muuuhhhaaazzz...

n lots of hugs

...i'll try to be regular...from next time...m waiting for another SS...don't make me wait so much...

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soniyasharma90

@soniyasharma90

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#554

Originally posted by: mishtiritu
Kaise roku use jab usi ne hi ye dard diya hai
Kaise roku use jab usi ne apno se paraya kiya hai...

Mera aur uska rishta kya sirf dard ka hai
Kya wo bhi meri tarah dard me tadapta hai...

Mene uski ankho me dard ke sath pyar dekha hai
par kaise yakin karu jisne mera sab chin liya hai...

Wo kehta hai wo mujhse bahaut pyaar karta hai
par galti ki wajah se mujhse nazre nahi mila pata hai...

uski galti jankar bhi ye dil kyu use chahta hai
Kyu uska dard mujhe bhi mehsus hota hai...

Hum dono ka dard hi hume jodta aaya hai
shayad isi dard se ek dusre ko pyar hua hai...

Usne apne dil ki baat to keh di hai
par mere liye mushkil kadhi ki hai...

Na jane kyu mera dil bhi uske liye dhadkta hai
Uska dur jane ka faisla mujhe bhi satata hai...

Rokna to bahaut chahti thi use par kis haq se rokti
Baho me sametna chahti thi par kis haq se use apna kehti...

Mere dard me uska dard to mene dekha hi nahi
Mujhse jyada wo tadpa hoga kabhi socha hi nahi...

uski kadmo ki aahat ne bataya wo dur chala gaya
Laga jaise mujhse meri saanse chin le gaya...

Nahi me use khone nahi de sakti
Is dard me use akela nahi chod sakti...

Isi dard ne hume milwaya tha
Isi dard ne to pyar ka rasta dikhaya tha...

Ab yahi dard hume aaj bhi saath layega
mera pyaar use jarur wapas layega...

Uska aur mera rishta ek dard ka hai
usi dard ke khatir mujhe use apna banana hai...

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved it yr...👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

n it suits the SS very well...

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devibabu

@devibabu

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#555

really nice story... keep it up... all the best... love u and ur each line of this story...

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: soniyasharma90

yesshhh dear...

i know marathi...

mala marathi paan yeto...😉

@ mistiritu,

are you Marathi...????...I am Marathi...Maharashtrian...from Aamchi Mumbai...

From where you belong...????

@ soniyasharma90

You are also from India...from which part...

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todayzstar

@todayzstar

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#557

superbb updatee..
i luvd dis ss dear...
precap lst prt..?uhh?... 😲

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Anjali

@Gurlygirl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#558

Awesome update. Now m understanding the real meaning of those words spoken by him. Oh god... the words spoke so much of pain... It was realy touching and painful update. Umm...this too ending:(:( Update it soon