SS'True betrayal' Thread 4

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sehrish79

@sehrish79

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

awsome update annie

loved it very very much

cont soon xxx

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

awesome update that was so sad finally he told her his part it was an accident his brakes was not working and he loves her that was sweet love the update thanks for the pm

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rashida

@kupkakes

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

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rashida

@kupkakes

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

waiting 4 next update.

Plz continue soon.

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Awesme update..
So maan was the one who is responsible nt intentionally bt accidentally 4 dev's death..really maan's pain is heard in hs wrds..cant wait 4 next part...

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393794

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
haiye..
it was sooo painful di...
maan was in coma...but still he is repenting..
but the best part was the last poem...

Your tears will run dry
my memories will fade away
I'll start from where you end
my shadow will leave your way..!

its so beautifully written di...
so apt..yet so painful!!!!!!!!
update another one soon plss

how r u

thanks a lot dear

credit

for this verse

goes to sneha

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Senti part

Evn Maan was sufering

Lets c whats in their fate

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drrose31

@drrose31

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#268

thanks for pm...wow...so much pain...loved it ...do continue soon

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Challiya Bitch !! ;) !!

@-BlushaLicious-

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#269

LOVED IT !!
SUPERB !!
:-) !!

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393794

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet
U made me cry.

I actually cried reading Maan's lines.

It was really very much heart wrenching.

U made me cry yar.
Superb writing!!!

Remorse,paschataap is sumthing which shakens u completely

thank u so much muah

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