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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

wow!! awesome ss dear...😃

read it today...😛
sorry dear my like button is not working...
continue soon...😊


thank you...if you like it from your hear like button is doesn't matters me..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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amazing update dear... 😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice ff i think u r trying to bring a serial track dev betraying geet plz dont do dat ha a forceful marriage geet running from there wil do.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: saari

nice ff i think u r trying to bring a serial track dev betraying geet plz dont do dat ha a forceful marriage geet running from there wil do.


Its definetly not a serial tack don't need to worry about it...

There is no dev here for sure..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sorry for making you wait yaar.. yet i didn't write need some more time...
Some medical problems not able to concentrate in this..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishha


sorry for making you wait yaar.. yet i didn't write need some more time...
Some medical problems not able to concentrate in this..

Its ok yaar... we will wait
u take care of urself
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome ff dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazyfriends007

Its ok yaar... we will wait

u take care of urself


Thanks a lot for understanding dear...😊
actually if its for me i will in some position but its for my dad so am emotionally affected so cant able to concentrate in this..😕 but i will try to update this next week..😃
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PART 5
PART 6

Its not easy for maan to see geet as a third person just as an employee of KC because she is more than that to him... So its difficult for him to maintain the same distance with her but at the same time he cant show his concern for geet in front of KC where he is the boss and remains terror to all other staffs...

To the some extent he maintain that bossy attitude in front of every one to her and at the same time his anger on her raised some time making him to yell at her the same old anger for her being coward for her being a cheater and for that last words which he didn't want to here from her that too in front of her family..

He want her to accept her love before her family and stay stubborn in her claiming his hands till death but she is a coward who just throw away him form her life just for her family some time he also wonders just for his life just for him to live alive but living alive matters for him when there is no geet in his live...


He hates her and want to shout at her want to show up all his anger in front of her but at the same time its office he don't want discuss about his personal things don't want to show his emotions his weakness in front of his employees,clients and mostly not in the front of outsiders...

So he just acted normal in front of her as a boss a a third person to her he don't want to discuss any thing with her now in the office premisses..
But what about his question which he need answers from her now..
like


Why you left me?
Why you told you don't love me?did you mean that?

He closed his eyes in frustration for a while until the voice came from the door..

Can i come in.. a familiar voice which he love to hear which has the capability to sooth his pain in forehead which has the capability to sooth the pain in his hear more over which itself the cause for his all pains...

he just gave a glare and nodded his head..
she entered with a large number of files in her hand which is very hard for her little arms to hold and with a jerk some fell on the ground and some on the table before him...

Aadi sir told to get sign from you..


I remember that i asked you to not to disturb me until i said so... is that right ms.geet..

she murmured some thing under her breath...then said..

Take all these and get lost.. he yelled at her

And how i will know that you are free.
can't you see

Oh yeah... that's why i came here now there is no work for you and you are just closing your eyes and taking rest here in your cabin so i thought...
she cut of her words seeing his fuming eyes

he get up from his chair and came close towards her..
when did you learn to raise your voice geet..
i thought you are a first class coward he want to tell but cut it off and replace that with the another word naive girl
...

Am so...so...sorry she said in a low tone with her head lowered as he approaches close to her

He closed the distance between the both and pinned her to the wall near by and blocked her way by placing his both his hands above her head with out touching her he stand with only a small place left in between then

his eyes locked in hers and hers locked in the ground to the first finger of her toes where his toe is just at few mm distance away...

#Why geet? why? why? the damm distance between us why you said so...# there is a lot of questions in his mind which he needs answer which he want to discuss with her but at the time his words is not co-operating seeing the shivering hands of hers with which she is tying knot in the ends of her scarf...

If he raise his voice she will surly end up in tears which he don't want to see don't want to bear her tears he simply hold her shoulders tightly and asked again...

When did you learn--- ? to tell lies to throw me out of your lies to believe that i will forget you so soon but all this question is seems to be not more important for him now before her tears which she stared to shed when he barked at her...

When she started to shed the tears when it started to fall on her cheeks when he can't able to bear seeing her tears he unknowingly tighten his grip on her shoulders which is causing a more pain to her and results in more tears from her eyes...

Stop shedding those idiotic tears in front of me...
he again griped her harder..
you didn't understand what i say... stop crying..
maan... she yelled at pain in a whisper..
the moment he stand stil...l after one year his name is sounding great in her voice...he loved his name after a long time when she said it...when she called it...

once he only compel her to call him by his name but now its itching she said 'i don't love you go away from my life' before one year and now she still remember that thing... if she didn't love him if she really want him to go away from her life then why she is still remember that this is the magic word which is enough to make maan calm down...

which made him lose his grip... but yet its hurting her...

maan...its hurting...you..hurting ...me... she almost said in whisper while yelling in pain..


he immediately left her with a jerk and turned away showing his back to her... she started rubbing her shoulders harder to make the blood flow through in that place where he held her... which is pale and need blood circulation badly...

am--- sorry he can't able to say those words which he want to say but his mind is not allowing it from his mouth right now..
where geet understand his plight and she also knows very well maan is not used to those words and said...

Its ok...ma--- before she ends he cut off her and said
maan sir...

she questioned him through eyes for that he repeated those words again by facing her...

maan sir... its office and am your boss...don't forget that often miss..geet..

once he itself made her to call maan but now he itself saying to call him maan sir...now she understand her position in his heart and don't want to stay a moment together with him knowing that she is not in his heart now at the same time she want to cry so she turned and run away from his cabin..leaving a door shut behind her...


he didn't know why he said this to her but he too want her to call him maan but not now.. not in this situation as there is nothing between then other than a boss and employee relationship...

He want her to call him by his name when he did some mischief to her when he teases her when she is fake anger with him and when she really loves him and ready to face this damn world to get him...for being with him...


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PRECAP::::maan and his attitude... geet and her innocence
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Thank you for all of you who wait till nearly a weak for me to update this part... sorry for make you all wait this much as this is going on some serious note i can't put some thing which come to my mind i want to get very clear idea to move this ahead so i took my own time to update this part...


Sorry for all your inconvenience...


sorry for all my mistakes please bear me for that...

Thanks for all your likes and comments please do it for this part too with out forgetting...

Feed backs are welcome...you can also point out my mistakes and advices are welcome...i am ready to change...


please put your valuable comments...

next part as soon as possible..😃
Edited by nishha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome update
loved it dear
thanks 4 pm

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