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Posted: 13 years ago
#31
hey this is the first time i am reading ur work, it's awesome😃
plz continue soon...will be waiting eagerly!!!!!!!!😉😆😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: anisha_maaneet

awesome start😃

continue soon...

thanks anisha
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
thank you dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#34
Thanks all for beautiful comments...
I really hope i can do justice to the story...
here is the second part!!!
PART 2


( credit to Sakshi.ekansh)...

In the beautiful hill station of Daarjeeling, she opened the windows and sound of beautiful chirping birds comes inside the room and she was leaning on the window looking the beauty of the nature outside...Suddenly, the door opens and a man enters the room...

Hearing the sound, she says,

its been 2 years, 2 years away from my family, from my life...U are going back today rt..

yes i am..

but do u think he will accept? he loves me Raj... i know he loves me I always have a place in his heart...... she has tears in her eyes...the life away from him and my daughter.. was a hell Raj.. i cant take this more... U know, today is our wedding anniversary and my baby's bday... she is 1 year today... i ant wait to see her...

But Geet...do u think he will accept you..

. he will Raj he will...i know he will...U left him without saying anything u know that rt.he will have lots of questions... I just want to go back to him Raj... i want to see my baby.. Geet... I am happy for you... but i am so gonna miss u know that rt buddy... and he gives her a hug... She smiles and hugs him back..You know Raj.. only with your support and help.. i have started living again.. ...

Aacha...ab rona dhona bas... apni packing poori karo...we will go

...Raj u will come with me? Of course geet i will.. what did u think...stupid girl... chalo.. main jaane ki tayyari dekhke aathi hoon...

Meanwhile.. in Khurana mansion, Daadi goes to the baby's room and takes her in her arms and gives her a big kiss on her tummy... the baby opens her doe shaped eyes and flutters her legs.. give a watery smile...

mera pari.. happy birthday ... tere nalayak papa office chale gaye kya?...

turns and looks at the big foto and turns and walks away...

In the dining table, maan is already ready for office... and dadi comes and says...

aaj bhi jaa rahe ho beta... aaj tho apni pari ki pehle janamdin hai...Daadi.. mujhe aaj ek important meeting hai...

woh mujhe tumse ek baat karni thi

... haan bolo daadi...woh 2 saal ho gaye hai..aur.. geet ki kuch khabar nahi hai tho ( Maan looks at her)...tho...main soch rahi thi ki... what daadi...ab pari bhi itni choti hai.. use apni maa chahiye hogi na... tho..

NO daadi NO

... and without turning he leaves to teh office...Ab mujhe hi kuch kadam uttana padega...Maan ki aur pari ki zindagi ka sawaal hai

Meanwhile, Geet goes to each room and gives her byes to all the other room mates..gives them a kiss and a hug...

we will miss u geet... aati rahna humse milne..Geet has tears in her eyes... this was my family for 2 years... ji aunty i will come apni beti aur pati ke saath aaungi... She goes and packs her her clothes, then Raj comes in... Geet aaj raat ki flight hai... tayyar rahna... ok... tum ready hona...Haan Raj... ab mujhe jaana hai... Maan ke paas... apni baby ke paas kaisi hogi woh.. kaisi dikth hogi... bilkul apne papa ke pari hogi i am sure...Raj goes over to her and hugs her...I am with u always... u know that right dont worry sab tikh ho jayega...but i want u to be ready for anything... ok Geet!.. hmmm. Raj...(apne khayalon main khoyi hui...)

Geet and Raj reaches Delhi...

chalo mujhe ghar drop karo.. please maan se milna hai....nahi Geet jaldbaazi mat karo... ab mere saath ghar chalo... jab tak sab solve nahi hotha... chalo abhi...

lekin Raj... nahi Geet please meri baat suno...please..

Please click the like button and please do post comments...

Luv

Deepti
Edited by craziekudi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#35
Sakshi dancing to b the first one to comment... :-D:-D:-D:-D
lovely update di ...
bt di agar phn se comment nhi kar rhi hoti to khub sare *confused* emoticon daalti..
Who is this Raj? And where had Geet disappeared? Which place was that? Phew mai thak gayi inne saare questions puchhte puchhte...
Continue soon di... :-| luv u... :-*
Edited by sakshi.ekansh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: --aarthi--

deepz why did u do this me crying

why crying dear????
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: maan-ki-sanjana

Interesting start darling!
😃

thanks sanjana
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Posted: 13 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai

Nice start..
geet maan ko chodkar kahan chali gayi?
waiting for the main story..

😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
please continue reading
😃

Originally posted by: tamanna1391

interestin part contin ue soon

thanks tammana
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
thanks dear
thanks sammy

Originally posted by: muraadlovesdd

awesome add me in ur pm list

thanks dear😃

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

nyc prologue...so geet is dead giving birth to baby???? bcoz i felt so...

thanks dear.. no she is alive dear...

Originally posted by: -Nilam-

Congrats on your new SS...😛
Interesting...
please update soon...😳

thanks Nilam...😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: namita25

nice start...

but where is my kudi...

thanks namita
thanks jass

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awesome start
interesting
where is geet now
continue soon

thanks dear...
geet is very much alive..😆

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