MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 1 - Page 21

great part

wow...beautiful starting...
geet n biker...its awesome news...
age age dekhte hai hota kya hai...
plz add me 2 ur pm...

sabse pehle m extremely sry for not replying or being late di...
di i luved d thrilling start u gv to d story never thought dis wud start dis but di i really really luved d whole bike race...
bikes se to mujhe waise hi pyar h so mere liye it was a real fun to read d whole race...muah for dis...
luved d astonished look on d new spectator's faces seeing a girl being member of RAGE n i sooo luved d name RAGE n d way u've used d first two letters of deir name awsome...
i truly luved d bro sis jugalbandi team...
it was really cute d way both of dem were trying to hide things from deir parents lol...
but geet's nautanki to pataofy their father was super cute n mom ka pakadna n backpack mein se trophy nikalna lol...bachchoo mom sab janti hain...hehe d whole part was real funny...
n den d way dey cutely pataofy deir mom awww...
dad to bade romantic hain kya baat h but i luved geet's comment d most 'hum kahan se aaye wala' ROFL...
it was funny d way rahul reminded DTPH dialogue n geet started singing DDLJ song LOL...
the first half was thrilling astonishing n d second part was cute sweet n hilarious...
u r an awsome writer di n i luv every bit of ur updates...
luvya di...

wow Ritzy di... Neva expectd a start lyk dis sachhi...
Hats off 2 u 2...
I absolutely luvd readin it.. D update ws sooo energetic... Luvd it..

OMG.. Geet d best biker... Kya baat hai... M luvin dis avtar of Geet... Cz i luv bikes ... Hehhehhe...

I luvd d way Geet pataofyed Mohinder... Hehehehe... Dat ws sooo funny... By God.. Geet to full on nautanki hai... Heheheh...

But Rano ne nautanki pakad li.. Hehehhe... Trophy bhi nikal li...
Chodo na rano aunty.. Bachhe trophy jeetke laaen hain... Chot wot ka baad me sochna... Hehhehe...

Yipppeee... Rahul n Geet ne Rano ko mana lia...

'Pyaari mumma pyaari mumma maan jao..
Chodo bhi ye rusa rusi maan jao...'
Hehhehehehe...

Den i luvd d way Mohinder teased Rano sayin wo gusse me bohot sexy lgti h... Hehhehe... N den way Rano said to Mohinder ki ghar me jawaan bachhe hain... Hehehhe...
N den Geet ka dialogue ws sooo CLASSIC... 'jawaan hain tbhi to pata hai ki kaise aae dunia me'... Hahahahahahahha... I sooo rolled dwn laughing on dis dialogue... Hahahahahhahaha...

Maza aa gya Ritzy di...

Maan ki entry... Wow... Me sooo excited... 😃
Geet ka naya roop... Waah... Do roop.. 1 din me 1 raat me... Hehehehehehehe...
Eager to read d next...

Luvya Ritzy di... ❤️

ritzy dear plz update na...
waiting...

awsmmm update dear...
loved it...😃

loved the update ritzy di
well rano aunty aapki bei geet se maan shaadi karega
pakkaa
and then um so waiting for maan's entry and yes geet's new avatar as well

loved the start di...liked the racing part
continue soon di