MG FF-VIVAH - Thread 1

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

Hi thanks 4 da pm n fab update! Geet had a rocking entry! Well written! Update soon! sorry 4 late likes n comments! Precap is awesum.

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Tamanna_TJ

@Tamanna_TJ

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

Wow Ritzy Di,
Awesome beginning...
Geet as bike racer... N also an engineer...
M loving it... Precap me Maan ki entry...
Desperately waiting for it...
Continue soon... Wud be waiting...

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Cyberlife

@Cyberlife

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

What perfect piece of writing! At this rate, you can definitely give a run for their money to the best of the dialogue writers in Bollywood and the TV world.

Sampling of dialogues that made me chuckle ...

- Rahul's "nautanki"

- Mohinder's "Kahan se aa rahe ho janab"

- Geet shouting from the room ""Koi gal na mummy….jawan hai tabhi to pata hain kaise aayein hain is duniya mein" .

Keep writing and weaving your magic with words.

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

Geet is just bindaaz!!! loved her this style😉

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

Geet looks a really fiery character in this story !

Love the parental bonding you include in all plots of yours..it gives a comfortable and soothing feel to the whole story even while keeping LOVE as the main protagonist !

All the best for this new one and looking forward to the next chapter 😃

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nagajyothi

@_Jyothi_

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

omg... what an awesome update...
loved it loved it...
dii u r awesome...
wow... geet's nautanki... n teasing her mom was wonderful...
cant wait to read more...
maan's entry... yay...
continue soon di..
thanks 4 the pm