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Posted: 13 years ago
Muskaan aap kaha thi 2 din tak hum sub ne aapko bohat miss kiya... Plz update b4 12...
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Posted: 13 years ago
daikho chand aaya chand nazar aaya😳
uff my muski aagaye 👏
i cant wait🤗
love u muski
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Posted: 13 years ago
Actually am reading Deewangi... whenever i get time 2 read ff i read Deewangi ... i don knw hw many time i read it ... now just read part 19 ... everytime i fall in love with Deewangi again n again... But 1 que in Deewangi gEET s a mole on her nose..if mAAN see it than why he doubt her after Arohis call??? U didnt clear it here...actually i cant cmnt when u wrote it as wasnt a IF member... so ll ukindly tell me nw ... :))
Edited by sumusumu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sumusumu

Actually am reading Deewangi... whenever i get time 2 read ff i read Deewangi ... i don knw hw many time i read it ... now just read part 19 ... everytime i fall in love with Deewangi again n again... But 1 que in Deewangi gEET s a mole on her nose..if mAAN see it than why he doubt her after Arohis call??? U didnt clear it here...actually i cant cmnt when u wrote it as wasnt a IF member... so ll ukindly tell me nw ... :))


I read deewangi in one go on sunday... i just couldnt stop reading it and leave it mid way... that was such a master piece

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Posted: 13 years ago
Dii good n9 n sd... plz mera previous post padna on 113 page ... :) Waiting 4 ur reply.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nothing was hidden from her family.. they seemed to know everything wat she did there in delhi. Every move of hers. He locked himself in the store room of the kitchen breaking down within a fear..
he could clearly see her as an angel too far from his reach...
so pure white & his breath around her could ruin her sanity.

He rested his head on the wall... & cuddling down crawling into his own misery.. closing his eyes tight. Suddenly he heard some moments outside he almost held his breath... when he could actually make out without any spoken words just..an ehsaas... it was her.
He slowly peeped out through the slight gap between the doors just to prove himself wrong
. no.. but it was her.. her restless eyes looking for something, some one... she took the laddos from the tray & nibbled it cutely still looking for something.. when rano just walked in...
rano ' kuch doondh rahi ho beta
mama Maan
he turned back inside holding himself together.. not able to bare the excitment knowing she was looking for him
rano ' Maan kitchen main kya karega beta, wo tho bhara tha na
nahi mama mujhe laga main ne nuhe yanha aathe huwen dehka
did she actually notice him in the mid of all the fun... he wondered
rano looked at her restless eyes ' Maan kitna sona munda hain na,
geets eyes instantly widen in, sparkling delight happiness, her lips curving in a smile ' haan mama with cute blush
rano - prachi is so lucky
geets heart sunk, washing away the whole happiness in her face
rano ' tum ussen kab mili thi?
Geet mumbled... not able to hide abt puchki bit... wo main..
haan
college main, ragging time pe,
tub mujhe nahi pata tha wo Maan hain. Unhone aapna naam nahi batya tha
rano ' oh.. yah yah.. one of the guy said call him sir.. since others already told u the names
Geet grinned
maan chuckled thinking how she held his hand & said.. don't ask me to propose like this
rano continued to put the gift packs in a box ' u like Maan?.. she said it subtlely
Geet dropped the packet that was in her hand
Maan could feel his heart beating madly .. anxiously awaiting her reply,
she bend down & haphazardly picked the packet while dropping the content down.. fumbling kneeling down & trying to pick them all not look at her mom.. face turning red..
rano sat down cupped her face... its ok..
nothing wrong in liking ur bestfrds BF
beta its just an infatuation
I remember prachi always taking abt Maan
aur yeh kaafi normal bhi hain, especially when both of u r going through a rough phase
I understand u needed some thing to distract urself from that guy with whom...
rano paused
mama wo.. puchki hi she ate her words
she didn't know how to explain her mom it is the same person..
but don't u think it is all too sudden, I mean .. u should give urself some time
he can't believe this.. she actually shared with her mom abt that night.. she actually told everything to her mom. Can anyone be so truthful??? his heart cried out for her... her innocence..
rano sighed seeing her daughter fighting again with some hidden things...
she released for the grip & looked away
mama her voice ached
kya beta rano snapped
aap samjh then kyun nahi ho
Geet looked down
beta Maan & prachi were together right
she was silent
wat they have been together for 2yrs..3 now, aab dixit aunty ne uskin engagement kara di tho
unke feelings khatam hojathen hain kya
instead of helping them to get together u r trying to take advantage of his loneliness. how can do this to ur best frd
They were not in a relation; relation type mama..
Geet snapped
they were just frds
rano almost raised her hand at Geet...& held then her hand back
thats because they know their limits .. they have been brought up like that.
He is yash khurana's son .. he would know his limits
aur wo Mrs dixit ki beti hain .. wo mar jayegi kuch galat nahi karegi
geets eyes flooded... did she made her mom feel ashamed of wat she did...
rano caressed her forehead seeing her daughter getting it all wrong
main tumhe galat nahi kah rahi... main yah kah rahi hoon they r different
geets word choked.. when she cried.. they r not in relation
rano hugged her... even if they r not in relation now beta..
prachi will always remain his first choice
aur tum kitni bhi koshish karlo tum prachi nahi ban sakti
tum Geet ho!!!
& u r best like this
beta u r the best.. & I am sure there will be some one there for u
who will like u for wat u r
not wat u want to be...
this is exactly why I didn't want u to join her college. Aapne dost ki dosti main tum khud ko metati jaa rahi ho. . usken jaisen dress... Uske jaisen college... aur aab maan
rano.. sighed.

He never know uski ek zidd kisi ki dil ko itna thod degi..
how highly principled they were, that he felt himself low... cheap .. he had known it was only a privilege to discover our own self... but he hated himself.. cursed every bit of his own identity.
haan teehk hi tho hain.. why would a pari like her be second in anything.
mano yah na mano.. he did believe & made every one believe prachi was his choice.. seedhi ..saadi..
salwar kameez... studious... perfect to his superficial self.
sorry for being irregular.. me not well
thanks for all the sweet wishes & lovely pic.. & beautiful comments
Precap
silent cry
-PREV part 142 NEXT part 144-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
missed you muskan
take care of yourself
take rest
about update
it is awesome
love it
it is actually very practicle aproach

Aapne dost ki dosti main tum khud ko metati jaa rahi ho. . usken jaisen dress... Uske jaisen college... aur aab maan
(now i truly understand your POV of prachi's character in the story)

this is damm correct
by living with friends we want to be like them
live their life style
in all this we lost ourself
and every mom is not like rano to understand and make her dughter understand the things
love this mom beti relation
wish every mom can be like her
poor maan he traped in his own game

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Edited by pritm - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

evesdroppers never hear good about themselves

bechara maan
rano ko jab pata chalega ke wohi hai puchki
and my poor geetu😭😭😭
muskaan ne bday ke din bhi rulaya😭😭😭
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Poor Maan.. Poor Geet.. Fighting their own fears x
Edited by Saj110 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutheAjay



<font size="4" face="'Times New Roman', Times, serif">I read deewangi in one go on sunday... i just couldnt stop reading it and leave it mid way... that was such a master piece</font>

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