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Posted: 13 years ago
i am crying!! i have read almost 50 times again & again...
Thanks for this lovely update!!!! this from my bottom of my heart❤️
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Amazing muski, hope ur feeling better. Me also sick, not a good feelIng
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Posted: 13 years ago
r u fine now dear??? take care of ur health!!!!😃
don't make maan to feel more guilty yar...its really sad now on seeing how their relationship becum...
wish maan will talk to rano about his and prachi's rel...and his lub towards geet😉
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Originally posted by: muskanp

where have u been??


was busy in studies n exam How are you now???😳
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YEAH UPDATING...
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WAITING...

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HAPPY HAPPY

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haan teehk hi tho hain.. why would a pari like her be second in anything.
mano yah na mano.. he did believe & made every one believe prachi was his choice.. seedhi ..saadi..
salwar kameez... studious... perfect to his superficial self.
Wat was he even thinking abt her all this while.. may it be misti or Geet. He just took her for granted & did wat ever he wanted to ' may it be getting anger at or... playing around with her
may it be accusing her or claiming her
slowly banged his head not making any noise, can't hold back his cry.. to his heart, afraid of wat might follow once he starts to... he clenched his fist rather not believe his own feelings.. oh god so much of pain ...he hit his chest just above his heart.. again.. & again..

she held his hand..
he looked at her in disbelieve
she slowly slipped into his arms.. hugging him breaking all the norms, rules.. not knowing any more wat is right or wrong. All she knew was she his !!! & she didn't know how to tell him or ask him. She rested her head on his letting him feel her choked heart beat.. whimpering.. shaking fearing his refusal.. may be he will react differently.

All he did... cuddled up like a baby not able to cry nor speak a word.. slowly losing himself.. his senses in her scent, in her warmth. His hands softly holding her waist.. just resting.. not to let go, unsure she was actually there.. did she feel his ehsaas like he felt hers..
dry tear.. silent cry..something only their hearts could feel.

They sat their for as long as they could with out catching anyone's attention. He took in a deep breath & cupped her face deeply looking only himself in them.
Aap baad main aana
he nodded.
She pretended to take some thing went out.
Thai ji ' tu store room kya kar rahi thi.. suspeciouly looking at the store room.
Geet ' kuch nahi hotty, I was getting this
she dragged her & took her to the main hall.
Maan came out & stood in the corner watching her as she kissed every one good bye.

Maan said to bye to every one.
While parting rano ..she softly patted his cheek
wo abhi bachi hain
uski batoon ka galat mat samjh na. She doesn't mean to be mean

Maan nodded, not failing to read the fear in her moms eyes..
fear of not some one thinking low of her daughter
she gave the keys to him. He drove back to delhi.. every now & then catching glimpse of her
a tear drop setting as the car moved away from the house. How she tried to fight that emotion...
like a baby her face reflected her emotion. Her mom.. her hotty.. her sis.. her baby frds.. all of them waving... & as they hit the high way just them.. & the silence between them.


She rested her head on the window & her eyes gave in to the tiredness...
when they reached the her apartment, he parked the car. He thought for a moment before waking her up. He took a deep breath in & came around & carried her to her flat.

He tugged in the spread.. she herself cuddled into the spread looking for the his pillow...his heart ached to see how dearly she held the pillow. He smiled placing a kiss on her forehead & switched off the light.
Good night puchki
he smiled shaking his head
tum soyen nahi
she sat up cutely cuddling grinning shaking her head cutely naughtily
natak kar rahi thi
she grinned... natak nahi karti tho aap muje princess style main yanha taak nahi laathen
he chuckled
good night
so javoo
aab kaisen neind aayegi
.. she winked
he shook his head .. bye..
she pulled the spread over head & fell thud back on the bed hugging the big pillow of his.

Maan switched off the lights in the hall & closed the self locking door & left.
Precap
raj taunting !!!
-PREV part 144 NEXT LINK THREAD 23-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
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muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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