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Posted: 13 years ago

Geet snapped out angrily.. so how does that change anything between us???
how do I know whether this is not again one of ur zidd???

she was out of her mind.. especially dragging prachi in just pushed it too far .. she didn't know how was she going to explain anything to anyone. At that moment she totally lost it..
geets restlessly looked at her phone... switching it on
prachi ' Geet we were always frds
I mean.. we never spoke like couples.. sachi yaar.. tujhe tho sab pata hain
Geet glared at her ' prachi yaar plz just stay out of this
prachi looked at Maan still unsure wat happening between them...
Geet kept cutting her call '.
Maan looked at the display clenched his fist seeing hotty... & looked at her.
She went in & changed into her jeans & t-shirt
the phone rang again
Maan ' why don't u tell hotty to stay off for once.
she glared at him angrily & dragged him out of the apartment taking her keys & purse
prachi just followed them silently
Geet hugged prachi & whispered in her ears... I am sorry main tujhe se baad main baat karti hoon
prachi hugged her dearly... I understand
Geet sat in the car & waited for him. He didn't know wat was she planning & wat in her mind.
She drove silently to HP
initially he thought probably was her hotty karans party.. but then as the went out of the city he was unsure.
Soon the car turned into a some town.. may be village .. he just looked around
They pulled in front of a huge hawali, that was beautifully decorated with lights & flowers.. written happy birthday Geet
probably it was her home ' reality stuck him...
the whole district seem to celebrate. Kids came running behind the car..
geets didi.. yeh aap ki naye waali car hain
she sweetly lifted the kid.. & kissed him.. umm
happy birthday didi
then the whole bunch of kids reached... screaming.. happy birthday Geet didi
she smiled hugging each one of them & kissing them
few ladies came out running with pooja thali & teeka..
rano ' ek min beta.. aisen nahi
she took the aarti & put teeka
kisi ki naraz na lagen meri lado ko
Geet hugged her..mama..
rano ' happy birthday beta
Maan stood rooted unsure how to react .. no one even seem to notice him.. they were all so lost in welcoming geet like a princess
raji came out running & hugged her.. happy birthday Geet di
raji peeped ' yeh kaun hain?
Karan kanha hain?
Pheclen bday main kitna maza aaya tha
just then thai ji came dressed in all happening tight salwar kamzeez...
Geet hugged her... thai ji...
thai ' call me hotty
Geet looked at Maan once at that from corner of her eyes ' he caressed his forehead, standing away in a corner ' yet again he jumped into conclusion without knowing ' so she didn't go to karans party on her bday that day... she came here with karan.. dam.. he dropped his head backward.
Thai... scanned him top to bottom.. yeh munda kaun hain??
Geet ' yeh Maan hain thai ji
raji ' kaun prachi di ki BF?
oh..ho...
raji made a very sorry face
raji cutely patted his back tusi na phifar sikar na karoon '
dixit aunty aisen thoda gussa karti hain..lekin man jayegi
Maan made a horrified face & looked at Geet wondering.. yeh log tho sach main meri shaadi prachi se karaden.
rano waked raji's head... aavo beta..wo aisen aapne ummar se badoon jaisen baat karti hain

few guys came & started talking to Maan. While rano took Geet in... subha se tumhara phone kyun off hain.
Geet ' wo mama
rano ' armaan ke wajah se na
Geet pouted cutely
Maan watched her from far, her mom, her family, how every one seemed to wait to get a chance to speak to her.
He felt really horible.. thai ji was hotty... wat was he even thinking all this while...
every day he seemed to learn something totally different her!!!... some side he has never bothered to see or understand.
The whole evening had passed he didn't even get a chance to see a glimpse of hers. His eyes wandered restlessly...
thai ji.. came & snapped.. kisen toond rahen ho?
He awkwardly scratched his head
thai ji plunked one hand on her hip & pulled his ears with other.. aur hume laaga ki tume prachi ki BF
Maan cutely tried to free himself
just then Geet came down wearing her salwar kameeez... her dupata.. flying in one end... mama aur kuch nahi.. bus hogaya
she rushed down the steps... tripping & landing straight in his arms.. he looked at mesmerized... her scared eyes.. fluttering lashes. cutely trembling in his arms..(typical mahi moment 😉😆)
Thaiji.. came around.. & cleared her throat.. umm...umm
Geet immediately straightening herself checking her dupatta, blushing a bit
raji came & called Geet ' di cake cut karthen hain aajavo
Geet ' mama, veerji, papa aur darji kanha hain
rano ' koi party meeting hain beta
Geet made a cute baby face
thai came around making a cute angry face.. humari tho importance hi nahi hain
Geet made a baby face.. nahi hotty...
hotty word itself melted her
they had the elaborate cake cutting ceremony, Maan was no where allowed near her... she was lost surrounded with her family & probably the extended family
after the cermony they all sat around & asked her all abt her college & work...
thai ji ' tum logone water world walen pics kyun nahi behejen
Maan looked at them in shock
raji ' aap dono saat gayen then na
Maan nodded .. reminded of his words then.
all of them sat around ..& teased Geet with karan & then Maan..
raji promptly ' nahi mujhe tho karan hi jada hot lagethen hain
hain.. kitna cute hain
Maan made all kind of faces ' ek kaam karten hain na.. karan ko hum tumharen liyen chod dethen hain
rano protectively cuddled Geet... & told maan
tumahri liyen tho main khud mrs dixit se baat karthi hoon
Maan looked down losing even the little hope.
Rano didn't fail to notice the looks Geet had in her eyes every time she looked at Maan.

Maan went into the kitchen clearly feeling distanced from her in a strange way. Looking at her in whole he only realized how different simple yet beautiful person she is from heart, nothing impure.. nothing disguising ..no cheating... not a tinge of lies.. masumyat is bhari.. aapne ghar wallon ki pari
frds ki jaan...
how could he be so dam wrong abt her.. everything... dam... he was wrong..never was she!!!
Nothing was hidden from her family.. they seemed to know everything wat she did there in delhi. Every move of hers. He locked himself in the store room of the kitchen breaking down within a fear..
he could clearly see her as an angel too far from his reach...
so pure white & his breath around her could ruin her sanity.
Precap
rano confronting geet
-PREV part 141 NEXT part 143-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago


i am fine shruti

how are u dear🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Maan went into the kitchen clearly feeling distanced from her in a strange way. Looking at her in whole he only realized how different simple yet beautiful person she is from heart, nothing impure.. nothing disguising ..no cheating... not a tinge of lies.. masumyat is bhari.. aapne ghar wallon ki pari
frds ki jaan...
how could he be so dam wrong abt her.. everything... dam... he was wrong..never was she!!!
Nothing was hidden from her family.. they seemed to know everything wat she did there in delhi. Every move of hers. He locked himself in the store room of the kitchen breaking down within a fear..
he could clearly see her as an angel too far from his reach...
so pure white & his breath around her could ruin her sanity.


di this para made me cry...how much poor Maan mite have felt.. he is regretting for not understanding her not knowing her OMG...di lovely update i loved it to the core...hope Rano understands their feelings and make them think..clear.who's mind is now misted

Poor Maan is dropping all the hints he cud tat he is not in relation with Prachi and Karan no way is going to get near Geet his Misthi ...
Edited by --aarthi-- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWW.. That was not expected ...😕😲

So finally truth is out..😲
Nice update dear...👏

All guilty Maan... and confused Geet...😭

Loved the Geet's family bonding...😊

waiting For mom- daughter confrontation.
Edited by PoojaMishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum di
lovely
truly ossum
she is angel
lovely di
wItingm rano.to.talk once with maan
and makr him.undrstand eveything
pls give one more di
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the update muskaan...
loved geet's family members...their bonding❤️
geet actually told every thing to them...so nice..loved her...

muskaan mujhe maan ka fikar ho raha hey...
geet key saath kitne log hey...
par maan is alone suffering a lot...😭😭
thank u for beautiful updates dear...

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...loved the hotty.
So many surprises...!
You dont leave a single chance to surprise us.
Lovely part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
poor maan...bechara...actually he deserves these...but always mujhe uske liye bura lagta hain...wo v kya kare...character ki mara...egowala...confusedwala...rano k sath maan ki ek meeting de do plz...usko v ma ka ehsas ho jaye aur shayed uske mann k confusion dur ho jaye jaise wo pyar kadte hai geet se...
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Posted: 13 years ago
SWEET UPDATE
PLEASE MAKE MAAN SAY IN FRONT OF EVERY ONE [GEETFAMILY] THAT HE IS NOT PRACHI BF AND DONT WANT TO BE WITH HER EVER
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update.
thank god nothing drastic happen😆😆😆
aweee love geet's family
yaar poori filmy hain😆😆😆 hotty thai ji, raji karan pe lattoo, rano mum spying on geet😆😆
yaar maan is in store and thinking that he can;t even reach geet😭😭😭
hayeee aisa kyun😕😕
yaar muski mere changge bhale munde ko kyun rula diya
I am sad because maan is sad😭😭

now i am waiting for next update😆😆
woh kab milegee😉😉

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