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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Ohh...cool...eagerly waiting for the next update...but its ninni time here...will have to read it tomorrow...but still...waiting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
congrats for the new thread muski...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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heyeee main marjawaan muski what an update hot ,wet damn and what not please please update now
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Dhundlae aks

PART 141

Then her lips reached his fiercely, avidly burying her hands in his hair until something unfamiliar need came pouring through her.. breaking all the walls she had erected around herself .. & she kissed him madly not just her lips..but with all her heart & soul.
He stood their losing every inch of his to her.

His hands reached her strands of wet hair & softly pushed them behind.. softly cupping her face. She was no where leaving his lips... nibbling him.. biting him.. her tongue playing with his.. he knew undoubtedly she was only his... he closed his eyes.. tears dripping down with her every unleashed emotion.. her expression of hidden self. Something he probably longed to see..but never expected it would be so much in abundant. Did he deserve any of these.. his heart cried holding her closer not able to even think of anything but holding her in his arms..for he knows morning comes.. & she will be gone away for ever.

He helped her change.. & carried her.. all the while her lips playing with his.. he settled her on the bed wiping her hair.. she didn't let him go away... her legs wrapped him, her fingers dug on his back..not letting him drift away... who was he to complain any way.


Latter at night he slowly pulled away & stood under the shower letting the cold water cool him.. run down the wild emotions.. calming himself... trying to read through the feelings between them. He had no idea how long he stood there.. finally.. managed to pull himself out of the wash room... put his & hers cloths in the washer. Cleaned up the whole mess in the house... & dossed off in the couch in the drawing room holding her snap.

Geet got up in morning holding her head.
Maan came in with lemon juice...
yeh pee lo u will feel better
she had the whole think in a go... & looked at her herself.. once she felt better
shit...shit...shit...phir se...
he looked down... kuch nahi huwa tha geet
she ran crazily.. around the house mumbling.. mujhe phelen hi pata tha tha looking for her purse.. she pulled out her purse & searched the after pills.. if she had any..luckily she had one.. she immediately took glass of water.. & went to eat it..
he held her hand... why don't u trust me
main ne kaha na kuch nahi huwa
yah right
she looked at herself dressed just one of her kurtas
tum beeg gayen thi..
& u helped me change she spat in anger
haan.. bus..aur kuch nahi
she cutely thought inwards... phir bhi kuch nahi
she checked herself.. does she look any different..
she sighed & still went to eat the pill
main ne kaha na kuch nahi... he held her from the hands & shook her
why don't u believe me
he helplessly cupped her face
it took every inch on my control ' to stay away from u last night...
his fingers slipped into her hair
I felt I rather die '
he closed his eyes resting his head on her forehead
plz trust me
for once
he didn't want to embarrass her by telling her how passionate she got last night

she pulled away from him...
nothing wrong in being careful she gulped the medicine down
dammit.. why can't u believe me... he removed his shirt...
even after all this I didn't ' I couldn't
she looked at his red..bluish marked skin in utter shock.. she knew she could get wild but not this '
her face turned all red & shameful
she looked down.. sorry... she said in a meek voice
he cupped her face
I don't want u to be sorry...
he said painfully
she inched away
plz don't be sorry
plz don't be...
he fell on his knees & pleaded plz
she looked away feeling horrible abt herself
Geet plz..
he turned & held her hands in his...
her lips trembled.. I am sorry... I shouldn't be ..
he salienced her keeping his finger on hers
I was never in a relation with prachi
she left his hand instantly & backed away.. looking every where but him
I have called prachi to talk to u too...
she looked at him panickingly wondering wat did he tell prachi

the moment the bell rang Geet looked at him.. nervously
he didn't even think once... just opened & dragged prachi in
prachi ' happy birthday sweety..
Maan didn't let her continue ' prachi, ussen kaho na we were never in a relation, we were always just a good frd
prachi looked at Maan in shock & then looked at Geet confusedly
Geet snapped ' but u proposed to her, u said wat if mama agrees...
Geet could remember every word of it...
Maan ' dammit it was not proposal
Geet bit back ' then wat was it
Maan.. looked at her.. it was.. it was.. it was not..
it was just
Geet ' it was wat..maan
aapki koi zidd!!!
Maan held her arms.. haan.. it was my childish zidd nothing more
tum isse se puchlo we always considered each other as good frds
Geet snapped out angrily.. so how does that change anything between us???
how do I know whether this is not again one of ur zidd???
she was out of her mind.. especially dragging prachi in just pushed it too far .. she didn't know how was she going to explain anything to anyone.
Precap
maans remorse
-PREV part 140 NEXT part 142-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
congrats on the new thread..!!
awsum update 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
😊

awsome as always...but y is she not believing him
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Thanks for the double update..

Finally... maan let out the truth... am just wondering what next...

Geet totally irritated as maan called prachi...

and precap - maan remorse... i am just so anxious to know whats gonna happen...

any chance of more updates??

Muski - yaar.. put FF award nomination thread links in your updates...

First 9 pages no nominations for Maaneet FF...
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
ab yeh kya naya hai...maan ka remorse?????????
pehle jo bhi hua kafi nahi,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.yaar muski tu bahut 😈

amazin update,.,,,,,,teri hato mein jadoo hai...na teri dimag mein jadoo hai
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89
superb update
feeling bad for maan 😭

Thanxx 4 two updates
Waiting 4 next 😍
Edited by dipika009 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#90

thank you muski u r a sweet heart

muaah
2 lovely updates in a row.

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