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Awsome prt,glad to see progression in deir reltnshp.
grt prt dear.

superb update dear

superb!

awesome part

all those who are writing this SS.. well written...👏

Excellent part dear...
waiting to know the next...

awsum update Reni... You're simply awsum...

Though honestly..i wantd d part 2 b a lil longer..bt still jitna bhi likha u wrote it beautifully... 😃

M sooo happy dat Geet realised d importance of Geet in his life...
Making brkfast 4 her ws sucha sweet gesture...
Even Geet ws shocked ...bt i wud rather say surprised... Sounds mor positive.. Ryt Reni... 😉
I luvd it dat he gifted her a diamond set n put forward his wish to giv a chance to dis rltnshp... Dats ws sweet...😊

Haahha... M sure Maan's employees must hv fainted seeing the MSK grin to himself... Hehehehhe... A shocking treat for evry1... Hahahaha... 😆😆

Ahaann.. MSK d perfectionist... He neva wants ne faults in wateva he does n dats y he arrangd a perfect date... Whoaaa... 😃

Vicky teasin Maan ahaan... Kya baat hai.. Vicky to Maan k achhe mood ka faeda utha rha hai... 😉
N kya baat hai Maan ko Geet se milne ki itni jldi hai ki Vicky ki demand bhi fulfill kr di... Kya baat hai... Geet ka jadoo..par faeda to Vicky ka ho gya... Hahhaha... 😆

M sure Geet red sari me bohot hi amazin lag rhi hogi... Upar se chehre par wo sharmeeli si muskurahat... Haaaeee... Tbhi to hamara MSK bhi clean bold ho gya.. 😉

Ahaan... MSK ki rqst wid a note... Ab itne pyar se agar Maan puchega to Geet mana kaise kr skti hai... Haaeee... Dat ws dreamy...

At d end .. i luvd d poem... It described d scenario perfectly..

N ab meri taraf se 1 poem...

Tumhari muskurat se
Khil utha hai mera dil..
Jis tarah os ki ek boond se
Khil uthta hai phool ka til..

Tumhare achai se toot gyi
Jo galatfaimi thi mujhe..
Tumhare pyar ne dikhai
Ek roshni si mujhe..

Ye rishta tha
Ek majboori ki dor
Par ab dil chahta hai
Ye rishta ho ek atoot dor..

Dats ol I cud say bout d feelings of Maan from my perspective..
Fab update Reni...

Luvya... ❤️

beautiful update
loved it
thanks 4 PM..