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Posted: 13 years ago
Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by piya-

Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by piya-

Hey my darling sis Mona
Thanks for the recap dear I am sorry could not comment on your updates but I promise abhi se u will surely find ur Di's comments in each update of yours...
waiting for the update
love u -Piya

saachi mein i was missing di...btw how was ur exams??i know you would have rocked...
i will update soon di..
love u
Exams were really good 😃 no need to miss me now ab tumhare har ek update par mera comment hoga that's a pakka promise 😛


thank u di..😊
btw i asked to sing tumse hi na..where is that??
love u
yaad hai dear wo bhi gaakar tumhe pm kar dungi haye i just love that song😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by piya-

Originally posted by maneetlover1

Originally posted by piya-

Hey my darling sis Mona
Thanks for the recap dear I am sorry could not comment on your updates but I promise abhi se u will surely find ur Di's comments in each update of yours...
waiting for the update
love u -Piya

saachi mein i was missing di...btw how was ur exams??i know you would have rocked...
i will update soon di..
love u
Exams were really good 😃 no need to miss me now ab tumhare har ek update par mera comment hoga that's a pakka promise 😛


thank u di..😊
btw i asked to sing tumse hi na..where is that??
love u
yaad hai dear wo bhi gaakar tumhe pm kar dungi haye i just love that song😳



wow dinka chika dinka chika..
hey di mein bhi pagal hoon us song ke liye..pata hai aaj kal din mein kam se kam 10 baar sun rahi hoon😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1



wow dinka chika dinka chika..
hey di mein bhi pagal hoon us song ke liye..pata hai aaj kal din mein kam se kam 10 baar sun rahi hoon😆

main toh koi dreamland mein pauch jaathi hoon pata hai ek baar main college se ghar aa rahi thi aur bus mein ye song baj raha tha i was so lost in that song k conductor ticket maang raha hai aur main apne khaylo k duniya mein khoyi hui thi hehe phir finally meri friend ne mera bus paas conductor ko dhika diya 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: piya-

main toh koi dreamland mein pauch jaathi hoon pata hai ek baar main college se ghar aa rahi thi aur bus mein ye song baj raha tha i was so lost in that song k conductor ticket maang raha hai aur main apne khaylo k duniya mein khoyi hui thi hehe phir finally meri friend ne mera bus paas conductor ko dhika diya 😆



ha ha ha😆😆
bechara confuse huwa hoga..use pata nahi na ki song mein kitna magic hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1



ha ha ha😆😆
bechara confuse huwa hoga..use pata nahi na ki song mein kitna magic hai

exactly 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii friends...first of all iam really very sorry for not updating since many days😭😭 plz maaf kardijiye..dekho kaan pakadthi hoon..sorry

before the update ek recap hojaye...
karan is a professional asassinator...(his past is yet to be disclosed)he takes up the contract to kill one political leader no no actually to pretend..he himself contacts karan to pretend to kill him so that he can win with majority as everyone feels pity on him and vote him..karan gets ready with his plan and vikram,his jealous partner also plans escape as it is his job...but on the day of operation some one shoots that political leader fatally before karan could shoot..soon police surrounds the building but karan manages to escape by jumping on running train from sky scrapper...the car in which vikram was waiting for him meets with an accident...

In train he encounters with maan singh khurana who was to visit his family hoshiarpur..he left his house since long time and he narrates his story to karan..he did so becoz of his carefree nature...

but karan disguises himself as maan singh khurana and reached hoshiarpur..he encounters a terrible quarrel with geet in his first meeting..they continue with their nok jhok..

meanwhile,ram kapoor the officer who was spcly appointed to deal the case starts collecting the clues..he finds a bracelet there in the building with the name vikram engraved on it...arjun,one of the cop informs him that vikram is a criminal...they start from mumbai to the place where they are going to find another clue..

where are they going??where is real maan singh khurana??what is the reason for maan's transformation in to a murderer???

guys this was the story till now..i hope this is helpful to new readers too...
will update 2morrow😉
love..
-mona
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Kya Mona phir se recap tumhara tomorrow kab aayega?😭
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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PART-9

Maan is pacing in his room not knowing what to do..he is feeling extremely bored..his life style is totally different from theirs..he never sat at one place like he is doing now…he also felt frustated on himself.."what iam I doing here??why iam not able to reveal my identity to them??they hav the right to know..i cant play with their emotions..ha I'll reveal everything to them..but how can I tell maan's mom that her son is…no no she cant take it…kisse baat karu??geet…no no…aadi..ha aadi is the right person..he is only the one who can listen to me patiently…

He then moved out just to find aadi out who is entering his room..

"good morning maan"wished aadi while smiling…maan smiled back nervously and wished good morning……..

Maan:muje tumse kuch zaroori baat karni hai…plz can we

[aadi I wanna talk to u something important..can we?]

Aadi:are maan ismein request karne ki kya baat hai..u can talk to whenever u want and whatever we u want…bolo..kya baat hai..

Maan:umm..wo..fumbles..

Aadi hum kahi bahar jaa kar baat karthe hai na..waise bhi mein ghar pe bore ho raha hoon..

[aadi shall we have a talk somewhere outside..however iam feeling bored here]

Aadi nods and both comes downstairs…meanwhile,aadi gets a call and he excuses for a second…

Maan is waiting for aadi to come..he is feeling very restless rather say guilty..he wants to tell everything to them…he don't want to cheat the good people like them..so he decided to reveal his identity to aadi as maan estimated aadi to be the right person who can endure the bitter truth….he is pacing there in the living room waiting for aadi…

Meanwhile,geet…geet puttar kaha ho?? Maan hears rano's voice…

[geet…geet dear where are u??]

Maan looks up when he finds that the voice is coming from upstairs….

Rano who dipped her head down while taking geet's name saw maan there and smiled at him..

Rano:beta did u see geet anywhere??pata nahi subah subah kaha gayab hogayi hai..use dance school bhi toh jaana hai na..beta zara dekho toh kahi o kamre mein toh nahi…asked rano very kindly..

[beta did u see geet anywhere??god knows where she is..she have to go to dance school na..can u plz check whether she is in her room]

Maan:ji..

She then shows the direction to geet's room..maan entered the room just to find the innocent beauty sleeping peacefully hugging her pillow..she had a smile on her face…maan lost in sleeping beauty and a smile crept on his lips..unknowingly he took steps towards her and sat on the bed beside her…his hand automatically reached her face..he touched her soft cheek and felt a magical sensation…geet frowned when a hair strand is disturbing her sleep..maan smiled and removed the strand from her face and tugged behind her ear…….she pouted her lips in her sleep when she felt someone touching her….he felt like pulling her cheeks..she looked very cute with her pouting lips..maan still admiring her whilst geet opened her eyes slowly rubbing her eyes..she first smiled at maan but the next moment shouted "aap!!!!!"

Maan instantly came out of his dream land and got up from the bed adjusting himself again….

Geet:aap yaha kya kar rahe the??

[what were you doing here??]

Maan:wo…mein…fumbles as he is still confused why he did that…

Geet:oh!!aap sorry kehne aaye ho na..asked geet excitedly..

[oh!!you are here to ask for sorry..right!]

Maan:sorry kyun???

Geet:kal ke liye…

[for yesterday's deed]

Maan:kal ke liye..mein ne kya kiya??sorry toh tumhe bolni chahiye mujse batameezi se baat karne ke liye..kya kaha tha..mein sales man hoon…said maan while glaring at her with his big big eyes…

[for yesterday???but what was my mistake??infact you have to ask for sorry as u were rude to me..what you was saying..iam a sales man right!]

Geet:wo toh mein galti se…isiliye toh sorry kehne aayi thi par aap ne muje bahar phenk diya na..aapne galat kiya..aisa koi kartha hai kya??chaliye sorry boliye..she demands..

[that was just a mistake…that was the reason I asked for sorry but u threw me out of the room..you were wrong..so ask for sorry now]

Maan smirks…mein… tumse… sorry..never..waise bhi mein jaan bhujkar nahi kiya tha…

Geet glares at him.."iski akad toh dekho…ladkiyon se kese baat karni chahiye ye bhi nahi pata..huh"

Maan:kya kaha tumne…

Geet:kuch nahi..waise aap yaha kar kya rahe the??she asks again to divert his mind as she hav some thing in her mind..

Before maan could say anything she notices that maan is standing very near to bed..she stamped her foot on maan's..

"ouchh!!!are u mad"says maan who was wincing in pain..

Geet:hawww…aapko lag gayi kya..mein jaan bhooj kar nahi ki…says innocently and smirks at him…

Maan glares at her still wincing in pain…

Geet:aap aise goor kyun rahe ho muje..muje aapse dar nahi lagtha..samje aap..says geet while pointing her finger towards maan…

Maan:accha!!dar nahi lagtha asks maan who noticed that geet gulped her saliva when maan glared her…

Geet:nahi..she says in low voice while taking back steps…

Maan took steps towards her and geet took back steps…geet collided with bed and lost her control..inorder to save herself from falling she held maan's shirt which made him also loose his control..both of them landed on bed with maan on top of geet..in this quick process maan's lips slightly touched geet's..actually they shared their first kiss that too soundable kiss😳..geet widened her eyes in shock..maan also looked at her shocked..he got up embarassingly and quickly left the place….

[guys remember from now maan is only karan and karan is none other than maan…don't get confused ok😳]

Maan(st): karan..ye kya kar tha tum..geet ko dekkar aisa kyun ho gaya tha…why you lost control on u??no karan…you cant do this..pata nahi o mere baare mein kya soch rahi hogi..

When maan is busy in his thoughts aadi came there who completed his call…

Aadi:chale…

Maan:hmmm….

Then both of them reached some place where aadi and his friends meets regularly…as soon as they reach there lucky came to them and wished hiii…

Here maan wants to reveal every thing to aadi but they both are busy in their own world…they are doing their own maza….maan is irked but kept mum..finally maan decided to intrude between their silly talks,before he could say anything another guy came there and hugged aadi…

"hey hii dude..how are you??waise kya decide kiya tune..you are writing exams na..dude don't waste your year..plz try to arrange money to pay ur fees"

Maan listened this and sensed something wrong when he noticed aadi's pale face…his friend bid gud bye and left the place…

Maan:aadi..oh kya keh raha tha..you are not giving your exams??why??

Aadi:maan..tumhe pata nahi papa ji ke jaane ke baad sab kuch badal gaya..pata hai hum kitne mushkil se ghar chala rahe hai..meera di job kar rahi hai…geet bhi dance sikha rahi hai bacchon ko..aisa kab tak chalega..muje bhi kuch karna chahiye na…kash mein ye year complete kar pata toh muje acchi job mil jaathi…koi baat nahi koi toh job mil jayegi na said aadi with sad face..

[maan…u don't know..everything is changed after paps ji's death..we are going through very worst situations..meera sis is doing job also geet is teaching dance to students..i also have some responsibility towards my family na…I wish I could complete this year then I'll have good job in my hand]

Lucky:ha yar..par 20 lakhs kaha se…said lucky whose face also turned sad…

Maan(st):oh god!!ye log toh pehle se hi mushkil mein hai..ab mein inlogo ko maan(real wala)ke bhare mein kese batau…I think I should help them and should not tell anything about him…

Maan:aadi..how much you have to pay??i'll give you…

Aadi:are maan nahi…tum kese??

Maan:why??why cant I help u??i don't want to listen anything now…u are going to college from 2morrow..is that clear..said maan sternly…

Aadi hugged maan who eyes were wet…

Aadi:thank u maan..and sorry too..

Maan looked at him questioningly…

Aadi:maan pata hai papaji was murded….

Maan is not shocked as he is familiar with the word murder but looked at him questioningly…

Aadi:ha maan…tumhe laga tha papaji ki accident tumhari wajah se huwa tha lekin nahi jaan bhuj kar kar waya gaya tha..pata hai kisne karwaya papaji aur mamaji ke business partner…

[ha maan..u thought that papa met with accident becoz of u but no..it was a murder..papa's business partner did this]

Maan didn't understand anything but sensed that some thing happened in the past…

Lucky:are yar ye sab kya hai..muje bhi toh batao koi…

Aadi:lucky pata hai bachpan mein mamaji ke chale jane ke baad buwaji hamare saath reh rahi hai..papa maan se bahuth pyar karthe the..uski har zid poora karthe the…aur pata hai mamaji ka construction company I mean khurana constructions papa sambhalthe the…ek din maan ne zid kiya ki usko gulab jamun(his fav sweet) chahiye o bhi raat ko..papaji maan ko na nahi keh sakthe the na..toh o lene gaye the..par wapis nahi aaya..subah hume pata chala ki papa ki mauth hogayi hai accident mein..maan ko laga uski wajah se ye sab huwa..o bahuth guilty feel kiya..aur ghar chod kar chale gaye the…par sach toh ye hai ki o nalayak(business partner) papa ka accident karwaya tha tha ki papa uske raathe mein na aa sake..o khud humare paas aaya tha aur hume damki bhi di thi…zabardasti buwaji se sign karwakar company apne naam karwaliya….completed aadi while wiping his tears…..

[lucky! u know after my uncle's death buwaji is staying with us..papa used to look after his business..he used to pamper maan a lot..he used to fulfill his every wish with out denying it..one day maan asked for his fav sweet gulab jamun that too at nite..papa couldn't deny him and went to get them..next morning we came to know that pap is no more and he lost his life in an accident..maan felt guilty and held himself responsible for papa's death..so he left the house..but actually that idiot(partner)did this..he threatened us and took buwaji's signatures..khurana constructions in under his name now]

Maan also had tears as he remmebered his past also he felt bad for maan's(real)family…

Maan:tumlog police mein complaint nahi ki??

Aadi:kya faida??o sab toh us nalayak ke haath ke katputli ban chuke the..ladne ke liye hamare paas kuch nahi hai…isliye aise hi jee rahe hai chup chap..

[what's the use??they already was dancing according to his tune like a doll.we don't even have money to fight further..so we were silent]

Maan thought it's not right time to reveal now..so he went back to home….when aadi asked him that he wanted to talk him..maan simply shrugged it off saying it's just casual talk……….

*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Ram kapoor and arjun reached the railyway station…they entered inside and ram already started observing the things keenly..

Ram:so mr.arjun..what actually happened that day??

Arjun:sir that criminal escaped from us by jumping on train and we too followed the train..we estimated that he must have hid in train and we were right..we didn't saw his face but I remember color of his jacket..when I saw him I mean the person who wore that jacket…I was sure he was the culprit..i took out my revolver and released the bullet but unfortunately another person bent at the same time and bullet hit him..

Ram:oh no!!is he alive??

Arjun:no sir..he is dead…he is in mortuary….

Ram:really bad..btw why did u shoot him??what was the need??you would have catched him without giving any clue?? Said ram raising his eye brows…

"sir actually..wo..wo..arjun fumbles…

Ram:ok k.cool!mr.arjun I want the details of that dead man..collect the details from railyway department….quick!!

Arjun nodded and went to bring the info leaving ram who lost in his thoughts….

SO GUYS REAL MAAN SINGH KHURANA IS DEAD😭…THE MAN WHOM ARJUN SHOT WAS MAAN…IF U HAV ANY DOUBT REFER PREVIOUS PART

Precap:

Maaneet moments………😳

Maan finds one truth about khurana constructions owner……

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Love..

mona😳


Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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------edited----

Sorry Mona woh subah lights chali gayi thi aur bus abhi abhi lauti hai issliye late ho gayi
waise I loved the comment yaar aww...Maan is a sweetheart hai toh wo assasinator par dil sone ka hai he does not want to cheat the innocent family
par par par sabse best part was that kissi 😳 muahh haye main toh kehti hoon baar baar aisi galthi hua kare haha
oh real maan is dead hmm... precap is interesting dekhthe hai kya hotha hai

continue soon

-Piya
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ohh ot was superb...
Their 1st kiss... Oh ho itne jaldi.. So love story starts...
N real maan dead omg... I think this karan has sumthimg to do with KC... I think sooo...

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