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Recap:

karan accepts the deal offered by ss that he should shoot his friend Rajeev sharma but not fatally'and he reaches the spot to carry out his operatin but however someone else shoots Rajeev sharma that too fatally'karan some how manages to escape from the cops who were behind him by jumping in to a running train from a sky scrapper..

here at hoshiar pur geet and her family will be eagerly waiting for maan's arrival who left the home long back'.s.d says that she will accompany aadi and lucky to railway station so that maan could recognize her easily and vice versa..

s.d,lucky and aadi reaches the station and start searching for maan as soon as the train arrives'they check the reservation list in which they find the name of maan singh khurana and instantly jumps in top the compartment in which maan's seat was reserved'

they search the whole compartment but they fails to find him'.

even they enquire others in the compartment about maan but the result is same...

finally they step out of the compartment...

s.d becomes restless for not having maan with her,for whom she was waiting since 12 years,who is the only hope to her to lead her life'tears of hopelessness and fear of not getting him back rolls down her check'aadi notices her buwaji aap pls mat royiye maan zaroor agaya hoga lekin shayad hum unhe doond nahi paa rahe hai"

agar o agaya tho hume mil kyun nahi rahe hai bete?"hum ab aur door nahi reh sakthe hamare bete se..i cant live without him anymore"

and she starts sobbing'.

Buwaji u don't worry I'll search maan'u do one thing u go home and wait there for us..i'll be back with maan'he signals lucky to take her to home with his eyes'

aadi searches the entire station again but he could not able to find him...he also returns back sadly...

Meanwhile,at home geet and meera are working in kitchen..geet who was chopping vegetables gets lost in her own world..and this doesn't become unnoticed by meera'

She tries to call her geet'..(no response)geet'..(no response)..

She beats geet on her head with her palm and geet soon comes to the reality'

Kya hua di?y are u shouting like that and wat u did now?cant u call me without beating'

Meera frowns'accha bacchu..i was calling ur name like a mad and u were in no mood to respond..mere paas aur koi chahra nahi tha tumhe apni khayalo se bahar lane ka..

Geet smirks'

waise tum kaam ko chod kar kiski khayalo mein kho gayi thi ha?

She starts chopping vegetables which were left by her'

Meera looks at her with amused expression'.Oye geet tu pagal hai kya?'abhi tak maan aaya bhi nahi aur tu shaadi ke bhare mein soch rahi hai aur wo use dekhe bina''

tabhi tho'mein ne buwaji se promise kiya tha ki maan se shaadi karungi '

Meera frowns'.chup kar'tumna pagal ho bilkul..tumhari shaadi maan se hogi ki nahi ye mein nahi jaanti par agar maa agayi na tho tumhari khair nahi'.

Par di'..(paused)

they hears the knock of the door'

Mein dekthi hoon di'.

Geet comes and opens the door and finds s.d ,lucky'

Are buwaji aap log agaye?where is aadi and maan??where is he?

She notices the sad expression on sd's face and asks lucky about the reason by slightly raising her eyebrows and with questioning eyes'''

Woh di aadi lekar aaraha hai maan ko..says lucky but geet finds something fishy'

Buwaji aap kamre mein chaliye mein aap ke liye pani lekar aathi hoon..says geet and signals lucky to take to her room'.

She takes water and starts heading towards sd's room. And again she hears the knock'.

Hey babaji ab koun hai'suddenly she remembers lucky's words'

o teri kahi aadi toh nahi'.ha aadi hi hoga shayad maan ko lekar aagaya hoga..

she goes and opens the door just to find a dark man in his formal wear smiling to geet with his big big teeth'.

she gives him a weak smile...

Ji aap koun??

gud mrng ma'm...aap ye dekhiye *****soap..agar aap is soap ko use karegi na aur sundar banjayegi...aapki skin aur glow karegi...

geet looks at him confusingly..."oh tho a sales man hai..."

dekhiye hume kuch nahi chahiye aap yaha se jaayiye"

ma'm plz aap ek baar try bhi kar sakthe hai if u wish...aur pata hai 2 soaps ke saath 3 soaps free...aur ma'm ek soap sirf 10rs/- hai...and again he starts saying something which is irritating geet to the core...

hey babaji ye kaha se aaya hai mera dimag karne...aisa lag raha hai ye koi seminar de raha hai...

she again gathers patience and says to hi politely...

Dekho muje kuch nahi chahiye tum yaha se jao'.

geet frowns..

Dekho mera dimag kharaab mat karo'yaha se jao'she wont wait for his reply and closes the door on his face leaving a bang'.

She again starts heading towards s.d's room..hey babaji pata nahi kaha kaha se aathe hai ye log muje tang karne'ek to muje itna saara kaam karma hai aur upar se buwaji pareshan hai maan ke liye..pata nahi ye banda kaha se toot pada mera mood kharab karne'.

Suddenly she remembers s.d's sad face''

Hey babaji plz don't test my buwaji any more nw and give back her son'plz send back maan to us'.

She finally enters s.d's room and finds her sobbing'

She goes to her and hugs her'buwaji don't worry everything will be ok'aadi will definitely come with maan'u don't worry babaji will do bad with good people'

She make her drink water'..and and again she hears the knock'.

geet frowns...shayad o ladka phir se aagya..isko ek baat mein samaj mein nahi aathi na...ruko abhi dikhathi hoon...

she comes out to open the door'.

She opens the door very quickly and says.."cant u understand''.(paused).she cant able to say a word as soon as she finds a strong well built man there'.wearing a dark brown jacket and blue jeans'he's carrying a bag with him and he wears goggles'.

Geet just stands there dumbstruck esteeming him'

when she wont speak out anything...

He tries to call her hello excuse are u listening??hello miss'

Now wat happened to her?y she is looking at me like this'.

He again tries to call her but he the result is same'finally he waves his hand in front of her in a hope that at least she will speak out now'..

Geet jerks with his wave and comes to reality'.

Oye geet tu jalli hogayi hai'tu use aisa kyun goor rahi thi?maana ki o teri dream boy jaisa hai bt don't forget that u should marry maan and only love him'samji..ha haina'haa

jiii??

maan who is already annoyed with her says...

i was calling u since 5 minutes and u were lost in ur ownworld'can u listen??

Geet frowns..kya kaha aapne??aap hote koun hai mujse aise baat karne wale'waise aap hai koun?

man(st):wat is this girl up to?when i was shouting like mad she was standing like a statue and now...hmmm anyways..

dekho woh actually mein...

Geet interrupts'ha ha mein samaj gayi'tum koun si product bhejne aaye ho? Iam saying u now..we don't want anything and u just get lost now'.

Maan frowns'how dare is she to talk to me like that?

Kya matlab?mein tumhe sales man diktha hoon'

Aur nahi tho kya?aise formal kapde pehenkar,haat mein bag lekar sales man hi tho aathe hai'.

Wat????he looks at her with amused expression'.

He gasps'dekho'mein o nahi hoon jo tum samaj rahi hai..actually mein'.

Mein ne kaha na jao'.ab tum jaathe ki nahi'

Are wat is this girl up to???she don't even want to listen to me?anyways I should tell her who iam I then she shuts her mouth automatically'.

See'let me speak'.actually iam'

Meanwhile,aadi comes home and enters the main gate which gets noticed by geet'she simply avoids him and moves towards aadi...

this annoys that man more...

now this is avoiding me???no one dared to talk to me like this and this girl??

he continuosly glares at her but geet is busy with aadi there...

Aadi kya huwa?maan nahi mila'..she looks at him with questioning eyes'.

Nahi di...and starts expalining whatever happened in the station...

man:ajeeb ladki hai...mein yaha pagalo ki tarah 20 minute ne khada hoon aur ye ladki apni bak bak mein busy hai...ek kaam kartha hoon is aadmi se baat kartha hoon...i hope he listens to me...

Dekho iam saying u that iam'..

Chup!!bilkul chup mein ne kaha yaha se jao'

that man gets frustrated with her behaviour and starts glaring her'.tum muje goor kyun rahe ho'tumhe kya lagtha hai aisa goorne se mein tumhare products kareedungi?kabhi nahi''.

now there is no bounds to his anger now..."tumhari itni himmat ki tum mujse aise baat kar rahi ho..pata hai mein koun hoon...?

geet gets scared but tries to supress her fear...ha koun ho tum?

Aadi who is confused with their talk interrupts...he tries to calm down his di..

Dekhiye bhai sahab aap plz yaha se jaayiye..humpehle hi pareshan hai hamare maan ko lekar'he looks at him with pleading eyes'

Maan sniffs..dekho mein pichle 20 minute se us ladki ko yehi samjane ki koshish kar raha hoon ki mein maan'''.

Aadi and geet gasps and says lodly in unison maannn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

maan confusingly looks at them and says...ha mein maan...

buwaji'di'maa'dadaji'.lucky'

Maan aagaye'''''maan aagaya'''''

she quickly runs inside to inform her buwa about maan's arrival...

meanwhile,aadi looks at maan with teary eyes...but maan maintains his same serious face without any expression in it...

aadi:maan tu agaya...muje pata tha tu zaroor aaoge...

but maan still looks at him with blank expressions...

aadi:tu ne muje pehchana nahi..are mein hoon aadi..tera best friend...

atlast maan smiles at him weakly...aadi immediately hugs him tight...

meanwhile,s.d,meera,rano comes out along with geet...

s.d comes to maan with teary eyes and starts cupping his face lovingle...

s.d:maan bete aap aagaye apni maa ke paas...hume pata tha aap zaroor aayenge apni ke liye...hume pata tha...

she hugs him tight and starts crying loudly...everyone have tears in their eyes...maan also but he is not letting them out...he simply hugs her caresses her back just to calm down her...

she breaks the hug and again cups his face...

rano:andar nahi chal na hai kya?yahi khade hone ka iraada hai?

everyone smiles except maan and moves inside...

maan sits in a couch silently...rano orders geet and meera to bring tea and snacks for maan...

rano comes and sits beside maan and brushes his hair lovingly...

rano:kitne saalo baad hum aapko dekh rahe hai...kese ho beta?

maan simply nods as yes...

rano:hume maaf kardo beta humari wajah se aapko apni parivaar se door rehna pada...hum...

s.d intrudes and glares at rano...

s.d:rano hum aapse kitni baar kaha ki...(she nods her head in sadness)phir bi aap...

rano:par...

s.d:bas...aap kuch mat kahiye...

maan silently sits there without uttering a single word and ha..as usual with his serious face...

meanwhile...

meera:oye geet jaldi jaldi kar...tu kya soch rahi hai...(she notices her worried face)kya hua??

geet:di mujhe dar lag raha hai...

meera:dar???kyun?

geet makes puppy face and expalins the whole incident to meera that happend between her and maan...

meera:geet tu sach mein jalli hai...kya zaroorat thi aisa bak bak karne ki...pata nahi maan kya soch raha hoga...

geet:wahi tho di...mein ek kaam karthi hoon maan se jaakar sorry kehthi hoon...

meera:ye teek rahega...thodi der baad ja kar kehdena...ab chal bahar...

meera goes with some snacks...

geet:di ko tho kehdiya hi ki mein maan se sorry boldungi...par kese kahu?muje uska gussa wala dekkar dar lag raha hai...pata nahi kya karega...abhi thodi der pehle kese goor raha muje jaise muje kha jaayega...(gulps)aur uske baadi baadi aankein..par kya kare sorry tho bolna hi padega na...ek kaam karthi hoon mein unse sorry kehkar waha se bhaag jaathi hoon...hai na haan...hey babaji aapki bacchi ki raksha karna..

meanwhile,she hears meera's voice who is calling her to bring water...

geet:ha di aayi...

hey babaji meri raksha karna..ha mat booliye ga...

waise babaji muje aapse tanku kehni thi...kyun ki maan ko bilkul mera dreamboy jaisa banane ke liye...she smiles and goes out...

meanwhile,s.d and rano takes maan to daarji's room...

daarji is sitting quietly in his couch with his head resting back...

s.d:bauji...mera maan aagaya...dekhiye o aapke saamne khada hai...

she signals maan to go to him...

maan goes to him with the same expressionless face...he stands there for two minutes and touches his feet when s.d signalls him to do...

but daarji is daarji...he also sits quietly without responding to maan...

maan immediately gets up and moves out of the room...

s.d:bauji yeh kya hai...aapne maan se ek baar baat bhi nahi ki?o itne saalon baad lauta hai...aur aap usse mooh mod rahe hai...

daarji:humne maan ke liye 12 saal intezar ki hai aur o 12 minute nahi kar saktha tha...chala gaya...mujse ek baar bhi nahi poocha ki mein usse baat kyun nahi kar raha hoon..hum bhi unke daarji hai...hum bhi ziddi hai...(his eyes turns teary)bas..chala gaya...

s.d and rano also leaves the room with sad faces...

rano:didi..phikr mat kijiye...sab teek hojayega...chaliye maan ko apna kamra dhikathe hai...aur aapko khana nahi khilana hai aapne bete ko...

s.d smiles at rano...

precap:

geet:maan iam sorry...wo mein...

maan:get out!!!!!!!

maaneet nokjhok starts...

guys i know upadate was not that good and boring...but i promise u..u'll get many surprises and many secrets will be reavealed in future updates...and ha along with maaneet cute cute nokjhoks...plz bear with me this time...iam so sorry for boring update😭

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Originally posted by: Jass.KN

too much Dear..tumhara sales man concept really amazing...I lovin it..mujhe hamare yahan aane wale sales man ki yaad aa gayi😆..Blank man sealing fairness soap...hehehehe...Really ur Maan is too mysterious...mere agay to uski haunted image aa rahi hai..but great going...evn when I read ur OS..I was thinkin about this

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

wow mona... awesome update...
loved it...
wow... salesman wala part was funny... n geet thought our maan as salesman...
hahaha...
omg.. loved geet's bak bak wth her babaji... maan angry n adi n geet convo...
darji is angry on maan... so sad...
precap is interesting..
continue soon dear...
love u yaar.