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afsha

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+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#251

Loved the part

The way Geet opened the door without him knocking

Their silent talk

All were fab

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

part 131: raj kya kamaal ka sketch kia geet ki char ko superb hi

Raj looked for Geet she was in the back stage her usual place helping the dancers with the costumes. He watched her silently. She was prettier than he could imagine after hearing her voice that night. She was full of life, fun, happiness like walks with her.. she was full of spirits.. how she played with every one always masti..mazak.. !! he sighed slippimg his hands in the pockets.

then he noticed her eyes.. especially by chance if it fell on Maan..how darkness surrounds suddenly followed with fear. Though not once did she speak against him but never did he see them together it was very obvious she did intentionally. & Maan..

he chuckled.. Maan Singh Khurana obediently take her orders.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

part 131:geet ka ye poochna ki raj se kya chahiye raj ka ye kehna ki maan wow Geet ' kuch chahiyen tha aap ko
raj ' umm.. he nodded thoughtfully
raj ' Maan
she queasily looked away, like she knew he meant Maan being different, she looked down.. left & then right.. shuddered a bit.. nahi wo yanha tho nahi aayen..

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Awsome update di.. ooh la la 😊 con soon waiting

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

part 132: raj na maan ke saath saath geet ka haal bi dek raha hi Geet smiled..changing the costume.. I am really getting confused with all this. Isko.. white.. unko pink.. uff.. its all so confusing na..
he continued to look at her
she very defensively fought back ' aap aisen kya dehk rahen ho?
He grined weakly ' dehk raha hoon kya yahi wohi Geet hain jisne mujhe se usdin phone main baa ki thi
she tried to ease off the dense clouds ' u never know!!
she smiled teasingly & walked away with the dresses.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

part 131: i can understand how much geet is getting pain in her heart with all this She went in dumped the cloths & rushed home.. she couldn't take all this any longer. The guilt of getting s close to someone, without being in a relation, after knowing all the facts still not stop herself.. why it hurt so much..

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

part 132:
geet ore uski mo ki conv badiya hi

geet brokning down in fron of het mom heart breaking laga muje

I am wrong mama...mujhe se galti hogayen mama..she cried

nahi mama I am sorry .. I am really .. I broke ur trust she cried..
rano felt choked with emotions & a bit of fear..with anxiety, realizing she meant something else

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

part 132: hey di aapne part kaise liki i mean bahut emotional hi mama.. I ..I ..she was so shameful to accept she lost her virginity..
I..mama.. I broke urs & papa's trust..I did wat I am not supposed to
she hugged mama tighter scared she will hate her, disown her.. her heart feared, dreaded losing her warmth. rano mama kitna sweet hi sweetly kissing her.. mera bacha.. mera sona.. its ok..beta..
papa- mama ka pata hain..
aaj kal
aap log aisen mahal main ho.. then u have more freedom..
she kissed her again..

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Loquacious_Aash

@Loquacious_Aash

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#259

shaaadi...SRl...fir proporsal...aur abhi FRIENDS??????😆

mai ti bhol hi gayee..introduction to abhi baaki hai😆😆😆

loved it😳

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

part 132: really geet mom was so nice cold hearted geet unki marji ke bina aayee firbi gete ki pain ko kitna samaj rahi hi best mom i can understand geet is baat pe bahut dard mehsoos kar rahi hi ki they r not in relation
next he hates her ye samaj ke

rano cupped her face dearly.. tho humri pyari si baby ke life main koi hain
Geet looked down ..couldn't dare to accept
its ok beta if ur in a relation. Just be careful,
waisen bhi..main abhi nanai nahi khalwana chah thi
Geet hugged & cried breaking down completely, nothing left in her to hide..to shy away.. but the ugly truth ..they were not in any relation..

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