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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#181

yummy me 1st

nice update

feeling sad for maan

hope in next part he will correct himself and win geet heart again

Edited by maaneet5 - 13 years ago

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#182

as usual geet ne acha jerk di

Khushi goes back to her dada dadi happily announcing them about her trip. Maan look at geet smirking. So. What's the surprise? She stood up and takes his cloths. Nothing. I just wanted you to say yes. He gasped sitting and look at her shocked. What? She simply shrugs her shoulder opening the cupboard and hangs his cloths. He comes from behind.

maan ka haal dekne layak tha

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#183

maan cute complaining
That's cheating.. he pout cutely , but she didn't says anything and continue to do her work. Jaan.. you have to give me something..
he want something dedona geet

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#184

awsem update no surprise and geet make him realise his mistake to trust rajat and broke her trust once again

Edited by tamanna1391 - 13 years ago

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#185

geet is angry maan have something for her
It's ok. I have you. With that he hugs her tight from back kissing her cheek. She turns around but looks down only. He leans down to kiss her but she stop him holding his shoulder and push him little away. He frowned by her behavior. She never has pushed him, not even when she will be angry with him. Never she tried to stop him than what have happened now??

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#186

maan its not that easy as u said to a woman

Putting his finger under her chin he made her looks up. What's wrong jaan? She shakes her head lightly. Are you still thinking about Rahul? She looks up in his eyes. He smiles cupping her face. It's over, trust me. Everything is over.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#187

its an awsem update maan realise his mistake and geet not giving him surprise

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#188

sach hi to keh rahi geet ek baar firse trust tod di She sighed looking down holding his shirt. Trust you. She smile sadly looking up in his eyes. You told me to trust you once, look what happened. The colors from his face become pale. His smile vanishes realizing his mistake. Again he have made the same mistake and made her suffer. Again he have given someone else so much importance that ger didn't even once listen to her.

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#189

maan was affraid ki is baar geet firse na chod ke chali jaye Once again he has failed to win her trust and this time he knows, things will get worse. The thought even scared him, what if she again leaves him for his stupid mistake.