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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago
WRITTEN BY DEEPTI(craziekudi)
Part 9

Geet was roaming around KM getting to know all the rooms and the mansion... and hears daadi calling her...

Daadi says, 'Geet beta your tai jee called.. aapko kal pagphere keliye jaana hai na...main tayyari kar deti hoon ok?

Geet: ji daadi..

Geet went to the kitchen to help with dinner.. Annie and Vicky were as usual busy in their fighting and leg pulling session..

Daadi said.. yeh Maan abhi tak kyu nahi aye? humne socha tha shaadi ke baad yeh sudhar jayega... par nahi...'..

Daadi called up maan,and saia 'Maan bete aap kahan hain... aaj kitna late kar diya..

Maan: Daadi I am coming in an hr and cuts the call...

Maan reached KM.. He freshened up and came for dinner..

Daadi: Maan bete... tomorrow u need to go with geet to her house for pagphere rasam. So be ready aur Geet ... aap bhi... Geet noded

Maan gave an angry look to Geet and walked out..

Geet standing outside the room thinking.. Oh babaji please save me.. she gives a sudden prayer and enters and the room but maan was nowhere to be seen..

She goes to the room, knows that maan is angry with her fastly changes to her nightsuit and slips under the cover before maan comes to the room.

Maan comes inside later sees her sleeping and thinks.. soi gayi ...kal dekh loonga main isse...

In the morning when Maan was about to go for his gym sessions, he sees geet sleeping ... thinks ... looking at her face...'chup chaap sote huye kitni aachi lag rahi hai.. aur utthe hai.. kuch aur... hmmm'...suddenly his fone rings and sees its adi...He picks the call and goes outside the room.

Adi says that there is a meeting lined up at 10 am.. and he needs to be in offce.Maan gets ready and comes to the dining room and sees Daadi preparing so many things and geet was nowhere around.

Daadi turns sees Maan:.. Good Morning Maan tayyar ho gaye aap...

Maan smiles hearing this .. Good Morning Dadi I am leaving for office early today...Nakulll...bring my breakfast fast!!

Daadi hears this and gets angry and says...office???? nahi.. aaj aap office nahi jaa sakthe.. Geet ko pagphere keliye leke jaana hai aur aap dono ko kahi aur bhi jaan hai uske baad...

Annie beta dekho Geet tayyar hui ki nahi...Annie shouts. we are coming daadi...Chalo bhaabi

Geet comes down with Annie wearing a white and red saree looking beautiful and Maan turns and sees her and keep looking at her!!

Daadi looks at geet and says.. geet.bete.. u are looking so beautiful today... nazar na lage and puta kala tika behind her ear.. sada khush raho.

waise i have a surprise for both of you from me, annie and vicky...

Daadi smiles and says.. Geet and Maan.. this is for you... and hands in a envelope...to Geet...

Maan takes it from her hand and opens sees two tickets to Darjeeling... Aap dono ke honeymoon trip ki tickets hai...

Maan says 'lekin dadi... for 1 week, no ways daadi not possbile office chodke...'

Daadi smiles and says... ab bahane mat banao Maan... main hoon yahan pe urgent matters keliye, don't worry and enjoy yourself...

Maan thinks and says.. likein Dadi..

Daadi hugs Geet and says...No more arguments Maan.. and now take Geet to her home..

And Maan and Geet leaves for Handa house. In the car, geet turns and looks at him and sees that he is really angry with everything. 'aap soch rahenge ki i did all this.. but no.. i didnt even utter a word. sab daadi ki planning hai... Maan gives her an angry glare and continue to drive..

geet pouts and turns and looks outside.Maan keep stealing glances at her angrily cribbing in her mind to take revenge from her...

As soon as they reach the handa house, tayyaji and tayiji comes out welcomes Aaajo bete...both of them enters th house and Geet is taken by her cousins.. Maan and others were seated in the hall Tayyaji says.. Maan bete.. thanks for taking care of our Geet...

Maan smiles.
All of the family members sat there and chatted for a while. Everyone was asking Maan this and that... making him eat sweets and drink lassi .. Maan was getting occasional calls from Adi reminding about the meeting, but he couldn't go and was stuck up with Geet's cousins and relatives.

After the lunch Geet ran to her room, where she spend her childhood with Nainatara, She opens the room and all the memories and happy moments flashed in her mind..She goes to her cuboard and opens and takes the album with naintara's and her childhood fotos.

She smile with tears in her eyes..

She was lying on her bed going through the fotos, suddenly Maan opens the door and sees Geeton bed with some fotos and her eyes shimmering with tears.. Maan keeps looking at her...

She looks at some foto and says.. Miss you...
Maan.looks at her and says... are you ok Geet?

Geet turns and sees maan gets up from the bed and nods no and they walked towards the main hall.. Maan thinks anout her!

Took blessings from all the elders and bid goodbye and returned to KM..

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Edited by craziekudi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
best of luck deepu
me gonna read it right now
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part already waitng for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update
like your style of writing
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...waiting for next part😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update.

love it and dadi planning honeymoon😆😆😆😆😆
yeh dadi bhi naa
hayeee geet missing nt. and crying😭😭😭😭
love the way maan asked her if she is ok

very good deepti. u wrote really good👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update...

Geet's maturity and maan's change in his behavior towards Geet were awesome...

Loved the turn up of events... these are giving in more space for maaneet to come out of their stands and give up their ego...

continue soon...
Edited by shrutheAjay - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART : 9

Geet and Maan going to geet's home for pag phereand Maan was giving her glaresGeet quickly enters the room n slept before himchup chaap sote hoey kitni achi lagti haiDadi gave them honeymoon ticketsAwww cutie geet tried to tell him k os ka koi kasoor nahin haiShe was missing NT
Edited by Speechless - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow 2 updates me supr hapy

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