NEW FF MAANEET TUJHKO JO PAAYA THD3 UPD pt26 pg120 - Page 41

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Posted: 13 years ago
excellent shayeri dam good ise sune ke baad kon na karegi

"Jis tarah khushboo k bagair phool ki koi misaal nahi

Jis tarah ghangoor ghata k bagair saawan ki koi shaan nahi

Jis tarah taro k bagair raat k aasman mein koi jhilmilahat nahi

Jis tarah lehro k bagair samunder ki koi pehchaan nahi

Ussi tarah tumhare bagair meri zindagi ka koi mol nahi"

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Posted: 13 years ago
maan ka itne dino se chupa huwa pyaar aaj ubar ke bahar aagaya

Ek baar mujhpar ehsaan kardo

Apne yakeen ka daaman thaamne ki mujhe ijazat de doh

Rakhunga palko par sajakar tumhe tumhari har ek khwaish par mar mitunga

Chaho toh aazmalo piche nahi hatunga tumhari khushi k liye apne wajood ko bhikerdunga

Tumhari nafrat ko bhi apne pyar ki daulat samajkar kabool karlunga

Bus ek baar mujhe apni maafi de doh phir chahe mujhse mera sab kuch le lo uff tak nahi karunga"

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Posted: 13 years ago
perfect confession at perfect timing Maan: Meri zindagi mein bus ek hi ladki thi hai aur humesha rahegi meri kismat mein uska naam bhale hi na ho par main usse humesha utna hi pyar karta rahunga jitna k ab karta hoon
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Posted: 13 years ago
piya sach kahoo each and every time in ur every FF i am flat for maaneet confessions this was 1 of the best ye hui na MSK wala I LOVE U

Maan: Tum toh humesha se hi Maan ki Geet thi par kya tum mujhe iss layak samajthi ho k main GEET KA MAAN bun sakhu

Maan: I love u Geet will u be mine?

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Posted: 13 years ago
pehli baat geet shock hogi next confuse hogi ye mera hi maan hi next mixed expression aakir ma MAAN GEET ka hooga means GEET KI MAAN
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Posted: 13 years ago
who said my confession queen right not good ha

Okay Guys I know the confession was not good but my brain was not working today forgive me for my mistakes.

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely confession😛
but you are so evil you had to stop it at the right moment 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 22
Maan: Tum toh humesha se hi Maan ki Geet thi par kya tum mujhe iss layak samajthi ho k main GEET KA MAAN bun sakhu? [U were always Maan's Geet but am I capable enough to become Geet's Maan?]
Maan: I love u Geet would u be mine?
Shilpa: Aise confession k baad toh koi bhi ladki haan hi kahegi kaash Geet ki jagah main hothi toh fauran hi Maan ko jaakar hug karlethi [ Any Girl would say yes after listening to such a hearttouching confession if I would have been in Geet's place I would have hugged Maan immediately]
Everyone was waiting for Geet's reply
Meera: kaash Geet haan karde [I hope Geet accepts the proposal]
Geet got up from her chair and starts walking towards Maan
She had a smile on her face
Geet: Jaante ho Maan main iss din ka kabse intezaar kar rahi thi? [Do you have an idea Maan for how long was I waiting for this moment?]
Maan: Jaanta hoon [Yes]
Geet: Tum kuch nahi jaante Maan tum kuch nahi jaante [You are totally unaware Maan]
Geet: Main tumhe batathi hoon mujhe iss lamhe ko apni aakhon k saamne dekhne k liye najane kya kuch nahi karna pada [ Let me make u realize what all I had to do to see all this in front of my eyes]
Maan: Main sun raha hoon [Go ahead I am listening]
Geet: Pehle toh mujhe tumse dosti karni padi na na galti ho gayi mera matlab hai DOSTI KA NAATAK karna pada [ First I became your friend oops I mean I pretended to be your friend]
Geet (smirks) Kya hua jhatka laga na ye sunkar? [Shocked after hearing this?]
Geet: Wo kya haina tumne sabke saamne apna dil kholkar rakh diya toh maine bhi socha k kyun na aaj main bhi saari duniya k saamne sabkuch tumhe sach sach batadu [You confessed your feelings in front of the whole world so I thought that I should also tell u the truth in front of everyone]
Geet: Haan toh main kaha thi DOSTI haina? Hmm... Dosti toh bus ek seedi thi, mera main mission toh kuch aur hi tha nahi samjhe mera mission tha tumhe nicha dhikana tumhari izzat ko tehes nehes karna [So where was I? Oh yes friendship hmm... friendship was the ladder for my main MISSION didn't get it? My mission was to destroy your image in public to HUMILIATE u in front of the entire world]
Geet: Ab tum sochoge k main tumhe neecha kyun dhikana chahthi thi? [Now u might be thinking why did I want to humiliate u?]
Geet: Yaad hai uss raat tumne mujhe thappad maara tha aur uske baad agle din main tumse milne aayi thi tumne pucha tha k main tumse kyun milne aayi hoon [You had slapped me once and the very next day I came to meet u do u remember u were asking me the reason behind my sudden visit?]
Geet: Main tumhe sabak shikane aayi thi par waha aakar toh maine dekha k janab khud ko takleef paucha rahe hai phir maine socha k tumhe physically nahi balki emotionally todna hoga tab jaakar mujhe chain milega [I had come to teach u a lesson but then I realized that u were torturing yourself on your own it striked me that there is no use to give u a physical pain the punishment should be an emotional one]
Geet: Aur waise bhi meri har baat ka jawab toh tum pyar se hi dethe the toh maine tumhare so called dhikawe k pyar ko hi apna hatiyar banaya aur dekho tum the great MSK meri bholi bhali baato mein aa gaye [ You always replied me with your so called love and I decided to use your love as a weapon in my mission and look u the great MSK got easily trapped in my sweet talks]
Geet: Par mujhe kafi mehnat karni padi sach keh rahi hoon tumhe yakeen jo dilana tha k main ab pehli wali Geet nahi rahi agar tumhe zara sa bhi shaqh ho jaata toh shayad tum mere jhaase mein nahi aate [But this was not an easy task I really had to work hard inorder to convince you that Geet is really changing otherwise how would I have been successful in trapping u in my plan?]
Geet: Tum kuch bolthe kyun nahi Maan ab bhi mujhpar gussa nahi karoge? [Why aren't you speaking Maan won't you shout at me?]
Maan was totally calm there was a pain yet a different kind of glow on his face
Geet was getting disturbed as Maan was not reacting
Geet: Maan mera matlab hai iss college k trustee sahab badi sharam aa rahi hogina k tumhara proposal ek ladki ne reject kar diya agar sharam aa rahi hai toh kuch bolo Maan itne der se badi badi baate kar rahe the ab yun achanak se chup kyun ho gaye? [Maan I mean the Trustee of this College r u feeling humiliated as your proposal has been rejected if this is the case then why don't you share your feelings with us common Maan u were speaking nonstop for such a long time I want u to speak right now as well]
Geet: Kuch toh bolo Maan aaj mere bina haath uthaye hi jo tumhare chehre par maine ek taamcha maara hai uss tamache ko khakar kaisa mehsoos ho raha hai bolo [ Speak something Maan today without touching you I have slapped you on your face how does it feel tell me about it]
Maan had a smile on his face which was driving Geet crazy
Geet: Tum muskura kyun rahe ho main toh tumhe rotha hua dekhna chahthi thi [Why are u smiling I want u to cry I want to see tears in your eyes]
Geet: Kahi tum paagal toh nahi ho gaye [ Have you lost your mind?]
Geet: Tumhari khaamoshi mujhe apne haar ka ehsaas dila rahi hai aur Geet kabhi haar nahi sakthi tumhe bolna hoga tumhe bolna hoga [Your silence is giving me a hint of my defeat no this is not possible Geet cannot lose you have to speak yes u have to speak]
Maan: Tum kabhi haar nahi sakthi Geet. Maan k rehthe hue Geet sirf jeet sakthi hai aur wo humesha jeetthi rahegi [You can never lose Geet as long as Maan is there u will always win]
Maan: Tumhare saare sawalo k jawab iss khat mein hai khat ko phadkar phekne se pehle ek baar isse zarur pad lena [You will get all your answers in this letter before tearing this letter do read it once]
Maan caressed her face with utmost love
Maan: Apna khayal rakhna [Take care of yourself]
He simply walks out from the room
All the students give a disgusted look to Geet and they too leave the place
Geet was left all alone her only companion was that letter
PRECAP: What was written in the letter that finally Maan's love emerged victorious as he was successful to demolish the strong walls that Geet had built around herself
So Guys this was the FIRST TWIST the next update would be the SECOND TWIST
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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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piya u know reading the update i had tears in my eyes...
what a heart wrenching update that was...

so finally geet accepted that she was just playing a game with him...u know what i was quite hurt but ya then geet also had suffered so much...par why couldn't she feel the love for her in maan's eyes...

kitna kuch suna dia usne maan ko and on the other hand maan was so sweet chup chap chala gaya ek letter deke

really felt bad for both maan and geet...

awesome update
loved it
god bless u
Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Piya di... Wht a heart wrenching update... Though I realy realy luvd it...
Beautifully written n gr8 execution... M in luv wd it...

I knew ki Geet mana karegi bt aise... Uaannn uaaannn... Me cryin...
I mean ye sara uska plan tha.. Wo pyar ... Wo dosti... Sab naatak... Itna bada naatak... Maan se badla lene k lie... Wo bhi us thappar k lie jo Maan ne usi ki jaan bachane k lie mara tha... Kaash wo Maan ki aankhon me wo dard dekhti jo use hua tha apne hi haanthon se apni Geet ko hurt krke... Kaash usne Maan ki us takleef ko samjha hota... Usne thori na shauk me thappar mara tha.. Wo to haalaat ki maang thi... Par ye Geet kon kon smjhae...
Wo to us mamuli se thappar ka badla le rhi h...

OMG... Maan didnt react nethin... He ws calm n smilin... Maan ne sach hi kaha tha.. Usne to uski nafrat ko bhi haske apna lia... Ek uff tk nhi ki jbki Geet ne is tarah uske emotions k sath khilwad kia..
He gave her dat letter.. Chalo is sab me kuch to acha hua...
Nw Geet wud knw ki Maan use kitni shiddat se chahta hai... Wo hamesha se usse pyar karta tha..karta hai aur karta rahega...

Meri mohobbat me hai shiddat aisi
Ki nafrat bhi pheeki hai pad jati
Is pyar me hai taaqat aisi
Ki pathhar us dil ko bhi hila jati..

Karta hun mohobbat mai itni tumse
Ki tumhari nafrat ko bhi haske gale laga lun
Mere pyar me hai aag itni
Ki nafrat ke us mom ko pighla dun..

Karta hun pyar aur hamesha karunga
Tumhari yaadon me tumhe mehsoos karunga
Na gila hai tumse na koi shikayat
Is dil me tumhe hamesha basa ke rakhunga..

Maan ki chuppi ne Geet ko uski haar ka ehsaas dilaya.. Wo haar bhi kaha... Maan ne kaha na.. Maan ke zinda hote Geet kbhi nhi aar sakti.. Kbhi nhi..

I don't hate Geet.. She has turned out lyk dis bcz she has forgotten wht it is to luv.. But m sure Maan ka pyar use zaroor wapas wohi pyari si Geet bana dega...

Lovely update Piya di..
Luv u...
Continue soon...
Edited by AbbyluvsMaan - 13 years ago

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