NEW FF MAANEET TUJHKO JO PAAYA THD3 UPD pt26 pg120

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#351

awesome part loved it maan pouring his heart for everyone to see hope she is not going to hurt him love it the confession was so cute thanks for the translations and the pm can't wait for the next part

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago

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MystiqueDew

@MystiqueDew

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#352

More than the confession i liked ur poems ...Beautiful one ...it brings out the real feel,Great work hun...:)

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abinash079

@abinash079

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#353

awesome update dear loved it
who told that the confession was not good it was out of the world
continue soon

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AvNeil123

@AvNeil123

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#354

Beautiful update PIYA!!!
What a lovely confession once again!!
Am a lil worried about Geet's reaction in the nest update as u said there will b a twist

But tje update was simply superb

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ammu5

@ammu5

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#355

fabuls update. maan is simply mindblowing

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Mishu

@-Mishu-

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#356

awesome yar
its really awesome
loved it

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Abgina

@crazydevil87

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#357

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***edit***
sweetu ummmaahhh for dis...🤗aur bada wala hug bhi...
this is d most beautiful enchanting and mesmerising proposal i've ever read...
dekha Pihu mere maan ka to proposal bhi out of d world h...hehe...
but maan dear d whole credit goes to ma sweetu afterall ye amazing aur dil choo lene wale dialogues tumhare liye meri "talent ki dukan" sweetu ne likhe hain...
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
loadzzz of applauds for d lovely proposal...
wow yaar main to pyar ki definition mein hi kho gayi "kehne ko chota aur sadharan but dekha jaye to sagar se gehra aur falak se bada... wow Pihu pat for d amazing thought...
wow yaar maan ne kitni khoobsurati se bayan kar diya ki unka alag hona uske liye kabhii matter nai kar sakta tha kyunki uske khayalon aur ehsaason mein uski shehzadi hamesha uske saath thi...👍🏼
usne kitne pyare andaaz mein ye kaha ki uski shehzadi ki har ada har pahlu use jeene ka hausla deta h...👏👏
n d part where he felt guilty for not being wid her n made those promises any girl wud die for actually made me cry...n take a note dear dats a toughie!!!!
oh yaar kaash maan ne ye promises mere liye kiye hote main to jaan de deti...
par sachchi yaar har promise jin khoobsurat lafzon mein piro kar tune likha hai...hats off!!!!!!
oh d poem was incredibly beautiful marvelous piece of writing...maan ke dil ki har gehrai un chand lafzon mein badi khoobsurati se bayan ho gayi...standing ovation for d incredible work sweetu...
Tum toh humesha se hi Maan ki Geet thi par kya tum mujhe iss layak samajthi ho k main GEET KA MAAN bun sakhu
ye line ne to bas ghayal kar diya yaar kya kahoon iske aage i don't hv words to tell u how amazing every line of dis update was...
U R A BORN ⭐️ SWEETU!!!!!!
n hey don't u dare call dis update ainvayi types dis was truly a masterpiece...SAMJHI!!!!!!!!

Edited by crazydevil87 - 13 years ago

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Zohamaaneet

@Zohamaaneet

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#358

ohhh gosh i have never seen like this proposal yaar piya
u made me cry with ur wording
i feel like i sh;d geet my soul mate like maan kas ais ehota toh achcha hota

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kahkashansakina

@kahkashansakina

Sparkler

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#359

Beautiful part

wow maan

Loved it

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Mounika sharma

@-Mounika-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#360

Who said that it's nt gud?it was awesme di..just lovd it.
Maan ke zuban se nikle hue har ek lafz heart touchng the..really it's a unique confessn..i hope ki geet ha karde..but iam afraid that she might say no as u said that there is a twist.i hope ki wo twist ye nahi ho..waitng 4 next part.sach kahu agar geet ki jagah mein hoti na bhagkar maan ko hug karti...hayee itna pyar kabhi koi real life mein kartha hai kya...
Aur di aap phir se apki poetic style se muje maar hi daala..infact i voted u 4 best poetic writer...oops!mein ne reveal kar di..
Anyway waitng 4 next part.
Love u loads di..
Mona