NEW FF MAANEET TUJHKO JO PAAYA THD3 UPD pt26 pg120 - Page 19

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetpriyanka

Wow. Dear. Kya khub likha h.
Ofcourse geet sari phnegi. Pr tum kuch gdbd na karo to.
Koi pyar krna to hamare maan se sikhe.

don't worry i won't do any gadbad 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: KINGKHANFAN

first of all hatt's off dear for giving this type of update u r really an awesome writer the way u expressed maan's love in those it was really great when i was reading each and every note i was flying in the air .each words attached with my heart.and u r style of writing is too good.first ur ff i started is TUJHKO JO PAAYA .awesome i have no words to tell u.u r really an awesome writer.i love ur ff








Thanks for your appreciation dear ur comments really made me fell special love u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

oh Piya, i almost chocked with emotions reading this update... U r making me emotional Di 😳

pata nahi kyon, but it just touched me...his unconditional love and everything each and every gift stoodfor...her growing, her needs, her desire...his love and care Di those were not only gifts it was his love
She will definately wear that saree, with those bangles and payals Yes she will
oh i can't wait for next update when he will see her adorned with not his gifts but his love There is some special maaneet moments in the next update Di😳 Socha k 3 shocks dene se pehle kuch achhe scenes de du😲
love u Di

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -knirwal-

hmm finally me commenting..😆...boolo maat muje Late Hone ka AWARD mila hua hai😆 HEHE

Now comes to update...u know... acha nahi pata...Oh kase pata hoga mene abi bataya hi nahi...😆...yaar thoda sa guess to karo...hm nahi pata chala kya?...batao...par kya batao...tum hi boolo kuch...oh yaad aya me to yaha comment karne ayi thi...lol ...bool gayi...wase muje Sabse BOOLNE ka bi award millla hai...😆 KHUSHI MUJHE WAKAI KUCH SAMAJ MEIN NAHI AAYA
Chale me kya baat kar rahi thi...hai...yaar YE UPDATE TJP KI SABSE BEST ,BEAUTIFUL,HEARTTOUCHING UPDATE HAI...👏...God ne tumhe fursat se banaya hai mere lia sirf mere lia🤗... Oh so sweet
yaar ye jo gift wala part thana...me to usme kho hi gayi thi maan kitna sweet hai ...Zahra to upe aur bi lato ho ho jayegi...he is such a great person...so much loving,caring..😳...aur uske pyaar ka kitna sweet gesture...collected gift for his geet from childhood to till now...vo to khud apna bday bhool gayi...but maan ko yaad tha...Zahra latuu ho jaayegi par filhaal usse Dr maan ka bhooth laga hai 😆😆😆
Over all Fablus update yaar...bahot hi badi tha..Precap geet to unpredictable hai...vo jo bi karegi usme koi doubt nahi hoga Kuch romantic honewala hai next update mein 😉
thanks for pm...cont soon
Love u alot
muahhh
ur's Bacha love u my gudiya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: tellyme

Wow... this was beautiful dear... THANKS DI

Wow the gifts were unique... not only unique, they had unique meanings... each touching the heart...YES THEY HAD UNIQUE MEANINGS AND THEY REFLECTED MAAN'S LOVE FOR GEET
how can Geet not melt... Maan's love is so strong that Geet have to bow infront of it...I HOPE SO
wonderful idea... and great... you had put lots of effort dear...😳
My guess geet will wear the saree... itne me to koi bhi pighal jayega... MUJHE BHI YAHI LAGTHA HAI😳
LOVE U DI

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandymore

Omgod di what a beautiful,outstanding prt...
dis update is baap of all updates I hav evr read...awsome n fab ideas 4 gift
too too gud di...aww di aap kitni mehnat krte ho update likhne m wo itna real lgta h kch imagine krne ki zarurat ni hoti sb smne chal raha hota h..
all d pic of gifts n geets emotion .maans love amazingly described
fab fantastic prt di<3<3

O pooja tumne toh mujhe 7ve aasman par paucha diya dear love u darling for such a baeutiful and encouraging comment
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: crazydevil87


awww thank u sooo much for dedicating d most beautiful update of TJP to us sweetu n CONGRATS for d new thread yaar... Anything for u yaar and thanks


wow yaar ye maan na mujhe pakka ek din pagal karke chhodega iske deewanepan mein...iski har ada itni nirali hai hi har ada p mar mitne ko dil karta hai...hes so damn sweet yaar...
Piya better hoga tu yaha se chali jaaye Pari apne maan k khayalo mein busy hai

aur iski har nirali ada ka credit jata hai hamari STAR WRITER PIYA ko u r incredibly brilliant sweetu... Ok abhi tak puri tarah se uske sapno mein dubi nahi hia😆

maan apni shehzadi ko kitne achche se janta h so he asked in d note to first open d box...how sweet...
awww d whole barbie doll story was really cute n reminded me of someone...dat was sooo sensitive n loving of maan n dat also at such a young age...
awww d chocolate note was really cute n so innocently he kept all dose wrappers since so many yrs just to tell her what he got for her 11th birthday...hes such a cutie na...
d bangles note reflected his selfless luv n emotions of dat tender age...awww hes such a darling...
only ma Pihu can giv such a beautiful reason behind dat dry rose...luved dis 1 to d core yaar...u r truly fab... This was my favourite gift 😳
d note wid d kajal reflected how deeply he notices every bit of her n how he eyes seem to be stuck on her always...
wow diary ka idea out of d world...how cute...lucky geet yaar...
wow i luved d note wid d payal...sahi baat h geet ki khankhanahat mein maan ki dhadkan basti h...
awww how lovingly his said ki if geet will use d ordinary bag it'll itself become extraordinary but maan geet ke liye to tumhara diya har tohfa anmol h...
dupatta on 18th birthday...gr8 idea yaar...luved d note wid dat...an awsomely romantic one...
haye 19th birthday pe to dil hi tohfe mein de diya...so damn sweet...
wow yaadein in those frames...amazing yaar ye maan kitna innovative h n hats off Pihu afterall d whole credit id urs... Ab main kya kahu tune har gift ki gehrai ko itne achhe se samjha hai k mere paas reply dene k liye kuch baaki hi nahi raha

n wow its geet's birthday such a pleasant surprise yaar...excellent Pihu tera ek ek idea kamaal ka tha n har tohfe p geet ka reaction tune brilliantly likha...hats off for dat... Ya this part was thoda diff haina😳

yaar waise to tu har update amazing deti h but dis was something extraordinary n i completely agree wid abi geet season 2 ka writer tujhe hi hona chahiye...luvya sweetu... Piya chal jaate hai ab naajne sabko kya ho gaya hai sab milkar teri taang keech rahe hai. love u

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends. I have replied to ur comments and I am very happy that all of you enjoyed the last update. Very soon there would be 3 twists coming up so be prepared for it.
HAPPY NEW YEAR FRIENDS
love-Piya
PART 19

Khurana Mansion

Adi had got Meera to his house they were busy making notes on a particular chapter

Dadima was reading some magazine

Meera: Adi tumhare paas iss chapter k references ki list haina zara mujhe dhikana toh [Adi show me the list of references for this particular chapter]

Adi: Haan main lekar aata hoon [Yes I'll just get it]

Adi gets up but he stands there like a statue as if he has seen something that can never be true

Meera: Adi tum yaha khade kyun ho jaakar list lekar aaona [Adi why are u still standing here go and get the list]

Adi did not move

Meera: Offho isse kya hogaya [What's wrong with him?]

Meera also gets up and now she too reacts in a similar manner

Dadima: Ye dono achanak se chup kyun ho gaye [What happened why both of them have suddenly stopped talking]

Dadima has a huge smile on her face when she gets to know the real reason behind the sudden silence

There was a beautiful angel standing in front of them

Dadima: Geet bete aaj iss saaree mein aap kafi khoobsurat lag rahi hai samaj nahi aa raha k kin lafzo mein aapki taareef kare [Geet you are looking gorgeous in this saree I am falling short of words to express your beauty]

Maan:

"Aasman bhi aaj sharmajaayega tumhare iss roop ko dekhar

Samunder ki lehro k kadam bhi dagmaga jaayenge tumhare iss noor ko dekhkar

Jis rang pe unhe gumha hotha tha aaj uss rang se unhe darr lag raha hai

Sachhai k aaiyine se rubaruh hokar unka gurur chaknachoor ho raha hai

Kaun kehta hai k aasmani rang kudrat ki parchahyi hai

Iss rang mein tumhe saja dekkar mujhe yakeen ho gaya hai k kudrat tumhari parchayi hai"

[Seeing your beauty even the sky will shy away

Sea waves will falter after seeing your shimmer

They are scared of the color today which they used to be proud of

Facing the mirror of truth their ego is breaking into pieces

Who says blue color is the shadow of nature'

I am sure that seeing you in this color that nature is your shadow]

Geet had tears in her eyes she runs towards him and hugs him passionately

Maan: Happy birthday Shehzadi [Happy birthday Princess]

Geet: Thank you Maan thank you so much

Geet: aaj tak mere liye itna kisine nahi socha [No one has done anything like this for me before]

Maan: Tumhare liye sochne ka haq sirf mera hai Geet tum mano ya na mano par yahi sach hai [You might disagree Geet but the right to think about you belongs only to me]

Geet: Mujhe kuch nahi samajna bus thodi der k liye mujhe apne baho mein samete rakho [I don't want to understand anything just let me stay in your arms for sometime]

Maan: Thodi der nahi Geet tum humesha khud ko mere baho mein mehfoos paayogi haalat chahe jobhi ho jaaye ye bahe humesha tumhara intezaar karti rahegi [Not just for a while Geet you will always find yourself safe in my embrace the situations might change but my arms would always be waiting for u]

Adi: Aaj Geet ka birthday hai?

Meera hits him on his head

Adi: Kya hua? [What?]

Meera: Ullu beech mein bolne ki kya zarurat thi [What was the need to speak in between?]

Adi: Sorry

Maan: Haan aaj Geet ka birthday hai aur hume iss waqt uske birthday ko celebrate karna chahiye [Yes it is Geet's birthday and we all need to celebrate it]

Adi: Okay Bro main abhi cake order kar dethi hoon [Ok Bro let me order a birthday cake first]

Maan: Nahi Adi iski zarurat nahi hai cake ready hai [No need to order a cake Adi]

Dadima: Aap kehna kya chahte hai Maan? [What do u want to say Maan?]

Maan: Aap puch rahi thina Dadima k main kitchen mein kya kar raha tha darasal main Geet k liye uska favourite chocolate cake bana raha tha [Dadima I have already baked a chocolate cake for Geet]

Adi: Aapko yakeen tha k Bha mera matlab hai Geet aayegi? [U were confident that bha I mean Geet would be coming here?]

Maan: Kuch batho par yakeen humesha rehtha hai [Sometimes u have to have faith on certain things]

Dadima: Toh chaliye sab milkar Geet ka janamdin manathe hai [So what are we waiting for let's start the celebration]

Maan: Ek minute Dadima pehle Mohinder uncle aur Rano Aunty ko toh aa jaane dijiye [One minute Dadima we won't start the celebration until and unless Mohinder uncle and Rano aunty arrive]

Mohinder: Wait karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai Maan hum aa chuke hai hum toh bus apni beti k liye tofha lene gaye the [We are already here Maan there is no need to wait we got late as we were busy selecting a gift for our beautiful daughter]

Geet did not react she placed her head on Maan's chest as if she did not want anyone else other than Maan

Maan: Cake kaate Geet? [Shall we cut the cake?]

Nakul gets the cake to the living room

Geet takes the knife in her hands but Maan stops her from cutting the cake

Maan: Geet pehle candle blow karke wish toh maango [Before blowing the candle won't u ask for a wish?]

Geet closes her eyes

This was her wish

Geet: (thinking) Kaash kuch aisa ho jaaye jisse mere dil mein chal rahi kashmash dur ho jaaye main ye samaj paau k main asliyat mein kya hoon aur kya chahthi hoon [Do something that I get a clear idea of what I really want help me to find my real self ]

She blows the candle and cuts the cake

She feeds Maan the first bite of the cake

Maan takes another piece and feeds it to Geet

Meera: Ab sirf cake cut karne se celebration pura toh nah hoga na kuch aur karna chahiye [Just by cutting a cake the celebrations won't take place we need to do plan something else]

Dadima: Ab aap hi bata dijiye bete k kya karna chahiye [You only give some ideas]

Meera: Kyun na hum sab movie dekhne chale? [Let's go for a movie]

Adi: Idea toh achha hai par agar tickets available nahi rahe tho I mean aajkal saare multiplex houseful chal rahe hai [Idea is a good one but what if we don't get the tickets nowadays all the movies are running houseful]

Meera: Tickets ki fikr tum mat karo wo mere paas already maujood hai mere ek friend ka apni family k saath movie dekhne ka plan cancel ho gaya tha toh usne mujhe aaj shaam k tickets diye hai aur dekho pure 7 tickets hai hum sab k sab chal sakthe hai [I already have 7 tickets with me one of friend cancelled her plan to go for a movie with her family so she gave these tickets to me]

Dadima: That's great Meera

Everyone decides to go for the movie

Dadima, Mohinder, Rano, Adi and Meera sit in one car whereas Maan and Geet take the other car

Meera had already given two tickets to Maaneet

Adi: Meera tune Bro ko tickets kyun diye hum sab waha ek saaath hi toh pauchengena [What was the need to give the tickets to Bro we would be reaching there almost at the same time]

Meera: Nahi Adi darasal main jab kitchen mein paani lene gayi thi tab maine bhai ko cake banathe hue dekh liya tha aur unhone hi mujhe bataya k aaj Geet ka birthday hai toh maine socha k agar Geet wakai mein yaha aa jathi hai toh kyun na bahi aur Geet ko ek saath kuch waqt bitane ka mauka diya jaaye. Unn dono ko main eek romantic movie k tickets diye hai aur hum sab ek family movie dekhne jaa rahe hai [No Adi actually when I went to drink water I had already seen that Bro was baking a cake he himself told me that he was making it for Geet as it is her birthday today so I thought if at all Geet really comes here then we should do something due to which Bro and Geet can spend some time with each other hence I booked these tickets the one that I have given to Bro and Geet is of a romantic film whereas we are going to watch a family movie]

Dadima: Adi kuch seekhiye apni dost se kitni samajdaar hai ye [Learn something from your friend Adi she is so smart]

Adi: Haan wo toh hai [Yes she is]

Meanwhile,

There was a heavy traffic jam so Maaneet had to take a different route.

The atmosphere was such that anyone could make out that sooner or later it might start raining

As usual both were silent throughout the ride

All of a sudden Maan's car stopped. Maan could not understand the reason he comes out and starts checking his car. Geet comes and stands next to him

Geet: Kya hua Maan? [What's the matter Maan?]

Maan: Pata nahi Geet kuch samaj mein nahi aa raha [I really can't understand Geet]

Geet: hmm' ek kaam karte hai hum chalkar jaate hai shayad movie k end hone se pehle pauch jaaye [I feel we should walk and go maybe we will reach before the end of the movie]

Maan: Aisa kyun keh rahi ho Geet [Why are you saying this?]

Geet: Aur nahi toh kya ab hum ek aise sunsaan ilake mein khade hai jaha gaadiyan toh dur insaan bhi nazar nahi aa rahe aur upar se tumhari ye car isse bhi aaj hi bannd padna tha [We are standing in a deserted area where I can't see a single vehicle nor any human being and on top of that your great car is also not ready to start]

Maan was about to say something when all of a sudden it started raining

PLS LISTEN TO THIS SONG

Music

Geet took the pallu of her saree and placed it on their heads. Maan's hand automatically goes to her waist and both of them start running

They were totally drenched both of them come and stand under a tree. Maan was still holding her waist and due to the pallu of her saree Maan and Geet's face was very close to each other

Their eyes meet and all of a sudden both of them get drowned in an unknown sensation. The rain was playing a perfect cupid it was arousing them there was a burning desire in their eyes

Aakhon se tune ye kya keh diya dil ye deewana dhadakne laga

Geet's hand automatically made way to his neck she closed her eyes as if submitting herself completely to his love. Her lips were trembling as if inviting Maan to sooth them with the touch of his lips

Tanhaiye mein hum mile iss tarah baarish mein sholaa bhadakne laga

Maan started licking her lips with his tongue he has been waiting for so many years to see love in those angelic eyes of Geet and today he could finally see the same emotions in those eyes he was not sure if this was a dream or reality but he wanted to live this moment

Tu tadapne laga main machalne lagi Bhoond tan pe giri jaan machalne lagi cha raha hai ajab sa nasha'

The touch of his tongue on her lips were sending currents throughout her body. The water droplets were acting as an obstacle between his tongue and her lips. Geet parted her lips slightly to drink those droplets

Aakhon se tune ye kya keh diya dil ye deewana dhadakne laga Tanhaiye mein hum mile iss tarah baarish mein sholaa bhadakne laga

Maan placed a peck on her lips and started sucking her lips gently

Tu tadapne laga main machalne lagi Bhoond tan pe giri jaan machalne lagi cha raha hai ajab sa nasha'

Geet was about to kiss him when a sudden sound of thunder stopped her from proceeding ahead. She took a step back

Aakhon se tune ye kya keh diya dil ye deewana dhadakne laga Tanhaiye mein hum mile iss tarah baarish mein sholaa bhadakne laga

She started breathing heavily and goes and stands at a distance from Maan. But Maan had read those eyes of hers he was sure that she still loves him

Music

Maan follows Geet. Geet could feel his breath on her skin.

Geet tries to move away but Maan stops her

Thodi sardi bhi hai'thodi garmi bhi hai

Maan places his hand on her hip Geet tries to remove his hand but somehow she just couldn't manage it. Maybe somewhere deep in her heart she wanted to feel his touch

Thodi hai bebasi'thodi marzi bhi hai

Maan placed his other hand on her chest Geet's hand automatically made way to his neck

Aise mein hum bhala kya kare tu bata

She looked at his eyes as if trying to find out the answer about her feelings which she was unable to understand

Jo bhi hotha hai wo..hone de dilruba

As soon as their eyes meet Geet's confusion was lost somewhere yes she knew that it was love the feeling that she hated the most but was this really true.

Aakhon se tune ye kya keh diya dil ye deewana dhadakne laga

Geet wanted to run away from her feelings she started to move once again but Maan held her waist. She had to accept she could not resist his touch her legs were not in her favor they wanted to stand next to Maan

Tanhaiye mein hum mile iss tarah baarish mein sholaa bhadakne laga

Maan reduces the distance between them and starts caressing her hair with his face. Geet was experiencing a strange emotion she had to agree that Maan's proximity was a heavenly bliss for her

Music

Maan started kissing the nape of her neck.

He encircled his hands around her waist and turned her so that they could face each other

Paas aau jo main dil ye darta hai kyun?

As soon as their eyes meet Geet starts caressing Maan's face with all her love

Dur jaayega tu aisa lagta hai kyun?

But all of a sudden the love in her eyes got converted into fear'fear of losing Maan once again

Maine vaada kiya maine li hai kasam Umr bhar na kabhie pyar hoga ye kum

Maan placed his finger on her lips as if assuring her that he will never leave her alone

Aakhon se tune ye kya keh diya dil ye deewana dhadakne laga

Geet got a strange strength from his actions. Her eyes were reflecting trust for Maan

Tanhaiye mein hum mile iss tarah baarish mein sholaa bhadakne laga

He kissed her magical eyes

Tu tadapne laga main machalne lagi Bhoond tan pe giri jaan machalne lagi cha raha hai ajab sa nasha'

Geet hugged him immediately and found peace in his arms

Aakhon se tune ye kya keh diya dil ye deewana dhadakne laga Tanhaiye mein hum mile iss tarah baarish mein sholaa bhadakne laga

Maan hugged her back and assured her once again that your Maan will never change he was always yours and will remain yours till his last breath

Aa aa'aa aa'aa aa..

The intensity of the rain increased it seemed that the entire universe was celebrating their union

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago

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