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Posted: 13 years ago
liked d way d family dealed wid d letter..
loved it..
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely
for a minute i got scared that all will find fault with geet when she has just got love in her life
but pratham and vicky are very clever
good that sameera's plan flopped

give some more situations like this, so that sameera finally gets frustated and reveals the truth as to how she was traeted at her own house
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb n awesome update😊
loved it
first i got scared but feeling happy that everyone understands geet
sameer's plan flopped
finally geet got her family who loves n trust her

update soon

thanks for the pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
Let Maan feed geet and then let them feel something.. Also maybe you need to add some Maahii moments too
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Posted: 13 years ago
part -13
a vision to future..
maan-wow geet!! tum to kafi chalu nikli..in 8 saloon me nahya bakhra vi dhund liya!! not bad!!not bad at all!kya ye dusra hai?? mujhe to nahi lagta..pata nahi aur kitne...
...
...
present,

rahul was back...so was meena's weird behaviour. geet thought it really fishy ..she wanted to talk with meena,so she went to kitchen one night & saw her dropping maan's medicines...bt not all of them,wo utne hi phek rahi thi jitne din rahul ghar me nahi tha...
then sudenley it clicked geet..itne dino se maan ko koi medicine nahi di gayi ...mujhe ye pata laga na hi hoga..
from next day to one whole month she did not gave maan any medicine neither to namrata,wo medicine meena se dono ko khila dene ke bahane se leti..aur phek deti...
then she decided that it was time for maan to go to some other doctor,so he needed to know her plan..
it was night..maan was singing the same song looking out of the window..
Bas itni si
Tum se guzaarish hai
Guzaarish hai

Yeh jo baarish hai, dekho na
Yeh jo baarish hai
Iss mein teri baahon mein marr jaaun
Bas itni si, chhoti si
Ik khwaish hai
Bas itni si
Tum se guzaarish hai
maan
ha geet bolo..
ap bohut accha gate ho..
thank u geet
lekin app har baar yehi gaana kyun gate ho??
wo geet..
bataiye na,main to app ki dost hu na..
wo geet ye main jisse pyaar karta tha uske liye gata tha..
then he fished a photo from nearby photo & looked at it..
SAMEKSHA..he smiled..lekin wo apne naam se bohut chid jati thi..isliye main use sam bulata tha..
khubsurat hai na..he gave the photo to give..
geet looked at the photo, if it was possible to throw the heart away,geet would have really liked to do it with herself, itna dard to na hota..kyu ki uske dil me maan jo bass chuka tha..
she controled her tears & shallowed the big lump of her throat..ha maan she is beautiful.
maan ,
hmmm...
ek baat puchu..
pucho..
ap kya usse avi vi pyaar karte hai??
ha geet bohut,
ap dono ka..i mean..wo..
mere accident ki waja se..lekin ye mat samaz na ki wo mujhe chod ker gayi hai..wo to maine hi use majboor kiya tha jane ke liye apni kasam dekar..
maan main app ko apke pyaar se milakar rahunggi geet thought..
wo maan apko is mahine kafi behtar mehsoon hua bol rahi thi..
ha..paar kyu puch rahi ho??
maan apne notice nahi kiya..lekin is mahine apne koyi vi dawai nahi khilayi..
tum kehna kya chahti ho..
main ye kehna chahi hu ki shayed koyi apko galat dawai de raha hai aisa mujhe sakkh tha,isiliye maine apki medicine band kar diya tha,ab main kisi dusre dr.se apka check up karwana chahti hu,wo vi kisike vi jaane bagair..
lekin geet..
pls maan mujh par vishwas kijiye..
thik hai..kab jana hai...
jitni jaldi ho sake..
kal chale??
ha..
***************
next day when rahul was out geet made an excuse to meena
wo choti ma.. wo main ek darga me jana chahti hu..main jau??
ha to roka kisne hai beta..isme puchne wali kya baat hai??
wo main maan ko vi saath le jaana chahti hu..
par beta..
pls choti ma..maan ka vi dil behel jayega..
tumhe taklif hogi beta..its not easy..
pls ma..
thik hai..
**********
so geet-maan were now sitting in front of a doctor,who was actually geet's family doctor..he was the one who knew geet even before her birth ..he was like a second dad to geet..
geet beta app kaise ho??
thik hu uncle..app pls meri madat karna..
she then explained everything to the doctor..
thik hai beta..lekin test ki results ane me thoda time lagega...aur wo medicine vi maine test ke liye diye hai..
tab tak ke liye tum ye dawayi maan bete ko dete rehna..
******
next week maan-geet came & the dotor said..
tumhara sakh sahi tha beti..maan ko galat..nahi nahi galat bolna thik nahi hoga..maan ko zeherili dawaiya di ja rahi thi...

Edited by Shilalipi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOMEE AND LONG TIMEEE .LOVE UR UPDATE PLZZZ UPDATE JUNGLE GIRL
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Posted: 13 years ago
update maan ko wrong medicines do nexyt soon



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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
but yeh kay tha
maan aur geet seprate hogye
a vision to future..
maan-wow geet!! tum to kafi chalu nikli..in 8 saloon me nahya bakhra vi dhund liya!! not bad!!not bad at all!kya ye dusra hai?? mujhe to nahi lagta..pata nahi aur kitne...
DAAR lag raha hai...
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
great updt...
hmm tho geet ab kya karegi?
i hate tht sameera...pls dnt bring anyone btw maneet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear!!!...
Hmm Geet loves maan... wow..
Wattt Maan ko Galat dava i mean zeherli dava dii ja rahi thi..???!!!!!😲
w8ing eagerly 4 d next part...
Plzz cont soon!!

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