MG OS: -A Love Lost- Updated Pg.4 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Maaneet099

okay... i just read the last para to save my emotions but i have to say i am overwhelmed with sorrow... sorry cannot comment as of right now... dont know if i ever will... i know i know u can call me coward...


Now don't tell me you only read the last paragraph! That would be highly disappointing to me...lol
Sigh...I guess I can understand though, our hearts aren't able to withstand so much grief sometimes. And who said coward? I sure didn't! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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sigh...i knew the ending would be the ending it was...as i mentioned in my previous comment but u have written it beautifully...i read with a heavy but loved every bit of it...Great job :)

Reya <3
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Posted: 13 years ago
#33
i m crying after reading the second part
very beautifully written
i m really heavy with emotions to write something now😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Wow... this is the only os i've ever read that made me cry.. it might be my mood today... because i've had a pretty tough day.. but thank you for writing such a beautiful piece!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏 😭 😔 😭 😔 😭 😔 😭 😔 😭 😔 😭 😔 😭 👏

very sad...heart wrenching story...
yes life is always not a bed of roses...

thanx for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Limerance


Now don't tell me you only read the last paragraph! That would be highly disappointing to me...lol
Sigh...I guess I can understand though, our hearts aren't able to withstand so much grief sometimes. And who said coward? I sure didn't! :)

ah my heart is too weak to read the whole thing... i would be bawling like a child... i have read most of ur happy OSes i think that makes up for it!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG

just superb update dear...

beautifully written...



thnxx for d pm..


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Posted: 13 years ago
#38
U made me cry
Beautifully written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh gosh had tears, but was very well written
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Posted: 13 years ago
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it is a beautiful update...

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