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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow what an ff...I am totally hooked read the entire thing in one go. Please update soon. I know it is probably early to hope that maan will be completely alright soon but atleast geet is going to be with maan soon ...I think as his nurse most likely.

Hate pammy to the core..she wasted all of Geet's efforts in an instant :(
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Posted: 13 years ago
Update soon
Want to see maan well soon
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey jass awesome update love it...
hope Geet will be in Dehli soon...good going plzz update soon
& wish a happy new year 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oye Jass tu sach me updating now kya ?
Kahi kal raat ki tarha updating status dal ke chali to nahi jayegi na?
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
the way pinky n adi are ready to go to any extent to help maan is very rare to find now a days

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Posted: 13 years ago

Chapter 26

Its about fiv in the evening when Pinky n Rahul reached village. Pinky informed her father about her safe journey n gav Rahul's number . In this area Rahul's phone network was quite good. Pinky was much afraid ..This was totally new place for her. Even much more a place where she could b at target. If any one got lil hint about her relation wht Addi n Maan.

Sitting behind Rahul. She was much scared when bike was passing throw village market n then housing areas.People were looking at her in strange way.

Pinky: Rahul these people r staring lik wanna eat me( she was biting her nails)

Rahul: This is natural..after Addi's incident nobody trust any outsider..who has no one known here…especially relatives.

Pinky: It means they all r gonna beat me ..lik Addi (she made sad face)

Rahul: Plz Pinky …chup ho jaayo aap ( he requested her )

They were on bike so in way no one asked Rahul about Pinky.But Rahul had to make excuse who she was.So he decided to introduce Pinky as his boss's cousin


'Bhai why u bring her here 'Rajan ..His brother questioned as expected

Rahul: Rajan u know..in which condition Geet is.Yeh psychiatrist hai..u know what work they do.'


Inse meri meeting show room main hui.Bato he bato may maine Geet ka jikar kiya ..k how she is suffering, On my request she comes here to meet Geet.May we get good outcomes.(this was the excuse n every one trust him )

Pinky : haila Addi Sir ne detective banna diya ..aab inhone psychiatrist. per kahi inke chakkar main pit he na jaau..But for u Maan Sir I can do every thing (thinking Pinky made a sad n pitty face)

Rahul:Pinku Ji aap fresh ho jaaea...my mother n sister are here b comfortable...( he introduced his mother n sister)

Pinky: Rahul I wanna meat Geet first ..I hav lil time..u know (she reminded him )

Rahul thought for a while.After having tea they moved toward Geet's home.Pinky was much afraid what gonna b next ? What would b Geet n her family's reaction? As Rahul told about Geet's bad condition..Whether she was in this condition to listen her.

She was in thoughts when Rahul stopped her at a door.

Rahul: Pinky this is Geet's home.Plz what I said about u to my brother..u hav to say same.what gonna b next it depends upon Geet's reaction ( he requested)

Pinky : Ji u r rite .

Rahul knocked door.When Rano opened it.

Rano: Rahul tum kab aaye ?

Rahul: Massi jst half n hour back.

Rano: yeh...(Rano pointed Pinky )

Pinky was too much scared.Her heart was sinking.But Rahul introduced her as such he told to Rajan.They came inside.When Rano asked them for tea they refused.

Rahul: Mausi ..she can help Geet.Let her talk to Geet

Rano: Rahul Geet theek tab hogi jab wo kush sunegi...aur yeh bhi tab he baat kaar sakegi ...usse..ek jinda butt(statue) se kya baat karni.( she started to cry)

Pinky realsied her condition .She became much emotional when Maan's condition came in her mind even without meeting Geet ,She could feel her pain.

Pinky: Aunty plz giv me a chance..( she requested)

Rano: theek hai..plz come wth me.(she asked to follow her n opened door where Geet was laying on bed )

Rano: Dekh lijiye aap khud he ..kya baat kar sakti hai isse...Un logon ne meri beeti ki khushiya cheen le...Maanko zindgi dette dette..aaj khud bina zindgi k paddi hai( she busted in tears )

Pinky:Aunti plz chup ho jaayea..jst giv me a chance...I wanna talk to her alone.( it was required becoz she was not any speilaist but as a woman she could feel her pain.Maan was that pain n Maan was the only thing which could bring Geet out from it)

Rano was not willing to leave her daughter alone.But Rahul forcefully took her out

Pinky closed the door.She looked at Geet.Any one's presence in room was meaning less to her.Staring from far at Geet ..Pinky realised Addi was not wrong..Geet was such an innocent angelic soul..too beautiful that no one could turn eyes from her.Now she was nothing mere than a statue.As a woman she could realize Geet's pain.n her pain was Maan n to overcome Maan was the only one reason..

Pinky sat silently for some time on one side at Geet's bed.

Pinky: Geet mujhe tumse baat karni hai ( hesitatingly she put hand on Geet's face)

But no reply.She again tried …nothing helped her .Pinky new which thing could effect.

Pinky : Geet tumko mujhe se baat nahi karni theek hai…..per apne Maan k liye bhi nahi. ( this was rite thing to hit Geet's mind n heart)

Geet took time to react.Pinky waited patiently..Geet started to look at Pinky . Blinked her eyes n tears rolled down from corners of her eyes..Pinky wiped her tears.

Pinky: Geet mujhe se baat karo …yeh teen logo ki zindgi ka sawal hai..tumhara ..tumhare bachchay ka aur Maan Sir ka.

Geet thought why she said' Maan Sir'.Geet got up .Pushed Pinky away..throw her pillow away...bed sheet...papers on her computer table lik a mad.


Pinky : Geet kya kar rahi ho...tumhe kush chahea..mujhe batayo ( Pinky held her from shoulder)


Geet stopped her hunt n looked at her.But again she started.She saw her slate at corner table hidden behind a carry bag.She took her but to write chock was not there.


Pinky realized .She opened her purse n gav her pen with a paper from table to write.


Pinky: Geet lo ispe likho.( she gav paper n pen to Geet)


Geet looked at her for some time n then snatched from Pinky's hand.Pinky waited for her words.


Geet (wrote): tumne Maan Sir kaha na…Addi ne bhej tumme.( she throw paper toward Pinky before it fell on floor Pinky took it )

Pinky : Ha Addi Sir ne bheja mujhe.

Geet held her from wrist n pushed toward door.She was about to throw Pinky away from room.When Pinky slapped Geet.

Geet stopped n waiting for a moment she slapped Pinky twice.

Pinky : Geet mujhe jitna marna hai maar lo..main aur Addi Sir ..Maan Sir k liye jaan bhi de sakte hai..jitna pyar tum karti ho unse ..utna to nahi..per kam bhi nahi karte hum unse.( slowly Pinky held her from arms)


Geet stared her without a blink n fell on floor.She was shivering...Pinky became much scared as Geet was pregnant.


Pinky: Geet plz calm down...think about baby...bas meri baat ek baar suun lo fir jo karna hai tum kar sakhti ho...mujhe tumhe kehna to nahi chaahea...per Maan Sir ki kasam hai tumko..( she took Geet in her arms n helped her to stand up )


Pinky arranged bed.bed sheet, pillow.n helped Geet to lay down on bed also gav blanket on her.


Pinky:thanx Geet Geet sabse pehli baat which I should tell u.that is Addi Sir was not behind what happened.Agar unko police ki help le kar Maan Sir ko le jaana hota..he might hav done first day ..he found Maan Sir...aur jab police apna kaam kar gayi..to Addi Sir wapis kyo aate pitne k liye.( she realized Geet would listen her)


Pinky gav Geet more papers n pen to write

Pinky : Geet lo tumhare dil main jo hai tum pusho mujhe se ..aur mai jawab dungi

Geet tried to get up.Pinky helped her placing pillow behind her back.

Pinky : Geet mujhe patta hai..tum mere baare main aisa he kush soch rahi hogi jaisa Addi Sir k baare main.Per sach to yeh hai hamare liye Maan Sir ki khushi sabse uper hai ..aur unki khushi tum ho ( she was rite)

Geet looked at her wth big brode hazal eyes.After thinking some more she took pen to write

Geet: Maan kaise hai...?

Pinky read it

Pinky : kaise hongay...jaise tumhe milay thay Geet waise he ho gaye hai..aur iska jimevaar Addi Sir nahi koi aur hai..Hum to sirf mohre hai...sach to yeh hai Maan Sir k liye hum kush bhi kar sakte hai.uske liye humko kissi bhi museebat ka samna karna padde.


Geet: Bolo Maan k baare main theek se batayo...aur agar Addi nahi to kon hai jimewaar..(writing this Geet held Pinky from wrist n jerked it ..)


Pinky: Geet Maan Sir tumhare binna nahi g sakte...isliye..he needs u..is ke liye jimewaar koi aur nahi Maan Sir ki Maa...unki sauteli Maa kaho to theek hai...Pammi..usne kiya yeh sabh...( she shouted)


N she explained each n every thing to Geet.


Geet: Ek Maa hokke...bhi aisa kiya usne...(she threw her pen n busted in tears)


Pinky after reading...hugged her tightly.


Pinky: Geet Maan Sir needs u...tum unki jindgi ho..yeh baat hum Daddi Maa se bhi nahi keh sakte..us chudail(witch) ne aisa chakkar chala diya...Aur Daddi Maa ki duniya Maan Sir...tum he ho jo kush kar sakti ho.


Rano opened the door when she heard this.


Rano: Yeh kya kar sakti hai..apni jaan de sakti hai...agar koi isse kahe Maan k liye jaan de do wo theek ho jaayegay...she ll do...( Rano came near to Geet's bed)

Pinky: Aunti aap ..


Rano: Rahul ne sabh batta diya mujhe...per itni shaatir aurat k saamne meri beti kar bhi kya sakhti hai...jab tum nahi kar paaye...aur wo bhi is halat main Geet...jab ek zindgi aur jud gayi hai iske sath


Pinky :Kyonki Maan Sir sirf agar kissi ko sun sakte hai mehsoos kar sakte hai to wo Geet hai...sabse pehle unko Geet ki zaroorat hai...jo karna hai wo humne soch liya hai...


Rano: Mujhe nahi pata tumne kya socha...Geet Maan k liye kya karegi jab Maan uske pass he nahi..(she sat on Geet's bed)


Pinky: Wo pass nahi..aur na aa sakte hai..per Geet to jaa sakti hai..


Rano: Pagal to nahi ho gayi...us aurat k samne kar du apni beti ko jo apne betay ki nahi ho saki.( she again got up)


Pinky: Aunti Pammi ne jo karna tha kar liya..agay kush na karre uske liye Geet ka hona bahut zaroori hai..plz Aunti Geet ko mat rokiye.(she begged)


Rano: Main to nahi rokti...karogay kya tum sabh..yahi k Geet Maan ki Daddi k pass jaakar kahe I saved Maan n now gonna giv birth to his child.Aur wo maan legi..Aur Pammi honne degi yeh sabh...Tum yeh sabh jaante ho per keh nahi sakte...k Geet Maan ka rishta kya hai...fir kya rashta hai..(was too angry)


Pinky : Rasta hai Aunty plz trust us...yahan Geet aur wahan Maan Sir ..ek dusre k binna adhure hai...aur us bachchay ka sochiye ...usko Apne Pita ka pyar milna chahea...aur uske liye Geet ko ladna hoga..she has to fight.Per yeh ladaae(fight) wo nahi ji Geet pehle bhi lad chukki hai...wth this society..But yeh fight apno k sath apno k liye hai...(said wth full courage)


Rano:Per tum aur woh Addi akhir chahatay kya ho ...?


Pinky : Yahi k aap dono ko mere sath Delhi chalna hoga..aagay kya karna hai...wahi sabh pata chalega.Per Geer akeli nahi hum sabh hai iske sath.


Rano: Nahi hum nahi jayegay ..kya bhrosa tumhara.(she had made mind to say no)


Rahul: Mausi Pinky per yakeen ker k dekhte hai ek baar yeh itni dur aayi hai...aise to nahi aayi hogi...aur don worry apko akele nahi jaane dugga...I m going wht u .


Rano: Kya ..Rahul tum chalogay ..

Geet got up from her bed n took her mother n Rahul's hands in hers n gav yes to Pinky


Geet was happy as she had a hop...n how to fulfil it .She good a way...Pinky was too happy as she did some thing good which Addi expected n they both wanted for Maan Sir n his lif Geet


I hop this boring part ll bore u...But this was required..so bear it...I had empty mind.I hav flow about idea ..but searching for rite words.Plz bear me...help me to bring high points.n to giv my best plz comment n hit lik.I ll pm later.I posted this in hurry may hav many low points if yes u can tell.😳


Lov


Jass😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!! awesome part dear!!😃
amazing ff i read it today 👏
continue soon...and happy new year..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update
Chalo now Geet will go to Delhi
Good Job Pinky

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it
the way pinky convinced rahul then geet n rano was awesome
waiting to see geet n maan's meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
continue soon
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