U r our Half world # 3/Chap-22,23,24epilog p 22-23 - Page 11

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Posted: 13 years ago
wow
lvly part
geet is prgnt... omg ek hi updt mai sab kuj kar dala...😆
lvd it...
awsmmm



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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
awww Maan gonna be paa again so sweet
lovely part
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update
loved it
maan is on full masti mood
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii...geet phirse maan banne wali hai...wow...but maan should tell everyone abt geet n adda n d little one coming...its deir haq...

beautiful update...


loved it...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the update dearie...so after a long period and gaining trust on each other again they r one in all means... loved it ... their world is going to be complete... geet pregent good... wants maan to let the entire world know his family...


and wants u to write some more part of their this beautiful period of nine months ... with maans love and extra taking care of her as she missed all this during the birth of adda
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Posted: 13 years ago
woah...thanx 4 d update...

geet pregnant again...cool..

hope geet accepts maan's family n wl go back to KM...

waitin 4 next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely...

n new baby on the way...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update yar
loved it a lot
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 22


Maan in dilemma at least dared to ask Geet

Maan: Geet wanna go back to delhi ?

Geet stared Maan without a word.

Maan: Geet why r u not saying any thing ? (he put his hand on her shoulder)

She put her wet eyes down

Geet: Who I m to say u any thing..If u want u can go..for some time I thought my world is complete but that was not true.But Maan its ur lif ur decision.(she had lots og questions in her eyes why he was doing so )

Maan: Geet tum yeh kya bol rahi ho...my life mu decision.If I said I m planning to go back to Delhi it means u n Adda both r going with me.I take days to say u this. (he cupped his face)

Geet: Days it means u hav this thing in ur mind for long.

Maan: Ya I hav , kyonki har baar emotions k sath zindgi nahi chalti ..practical bhi hona padta hai...

Geet: What u wanna say

Maan: Yahi k jab hamari shaddi hue...tab hamari zindgi alag thi..kush sapne thay apne future k liye.Those remained as such.But now we hav to think about our kids Adda aur dusri jo aane walla hai..(he said very calmly to make her understand him)

Geet: Maan mujhe pata hai .Where you spent years Where u established ur business.it is not easy to break ties with that place.But I just lost every thing there...kaise jaau (tears rolled down to her cheeks)

Maan: I don care about business ...I can leave every thing for u...But Geet think practically...business is mine...for my kids.I can't see my child craving for lil things..Nahi dekh sakta Adda ko tarste hue..aur jo maine Adda k time miss kiys aab nahi karna chahta.Main apni beti ko sabse ache school main dekhna chata hu..I wanna fell my growing baby inside u...World should know about my real world.

Geet: Its ur last decision. (Geet had understood what he wanna say)

Maan: Ya its mine last decision a Father's decision for his kids..their good future.Its ur responsibly too.But it doesn't mean we r cutting ties with this place.This place kept my half world for years.I m planning to reconstruct Adda's school here n more facilities ll b provided for all.It ll take time.But it ll b done.Let things b okey we ll come back.(Maan flashed a smile looking at Geet's calm face)


Geet: As u wish...But what about Adda's school..aur main us ghar main wapis nahi jaa sakti Maan...

Maan: Kisne kaha hai us ghar main jaane ko...I hav arranged things.Even registration for Adda's at best school has been done.

Geet: What ?

Maan: Ya okey now start packing...Jo jo sath le jaana hai wo dekh lo..mujhe bata dena...apne aap he rakhne na beith jaana...mere bachy ko jayada tang mat karna...(he placed his hand on Geet's tummy )

Both looked at each other with eyes filled with hop for their coming baby n hugged each other.

Adda came running from her friend Tina's house.When he found her parents packing things.

Adda: Papa aap ja rahe ho hume chod k..(much shocked Adda said)

Maan: Yahan aaea...(he spread his arms)

Adda came to Maan he made her sit in his lap next to luggage on bed.

Maan: Yeh kya hai ...(showing Adda's dress in bag Maan said)

Adda: Yeh to meri dress hai

Maan: Yeh apki dress hai...aur Papa...Maa...Adda...aur hamara chota sa baby sabh apne ghar ja rahe hai.(he kissed on her cheek)

Adda: Apne ghar !!! yeh hamara ghar nahi hai.

Maan: Yeh hamara ghar hai beta...per beta apko pata hai na jab marriage hoti hai to dulhan dulhe k sath uske ghar jaati hai...aur wo he uska ghar hota hai

Adda:Papa aap kya keh rahe ho(she made face waving her hand in air )

Maan: Yahi k beta ..due to some bad people U Maa n Papa stayed far away from each other.But not now.Papa ki aur Maa ki shaddi hue hai to Maa ka ghar wo hai jo Papa ka hai...Delhi main..to apka ghar kahan hua.

Adda: Yahan Papa aur Maa ka.(she was excited )

Maan: Ji to aap chalogay na beta.

Adda: Yes Papa.

Maan: Beta waise to apko wahan kissi bhi cheese ki jaroorat nahi..Papa ll bring every thing.But I know u lov many things here.so collect what u want to take.(he pulled her cheeks )


Adda: Okey Papa.

Maan: Mera bacha (he hugged her daughter more tightly )


Adda ran toward door when she found Geet listening to both She flashed a smile to her mother n went outside.

Maan: So ho gaya sab.

Geet: Almost bas Adda ko kush lena ho to dekh le.Aur Adda k aur mere sare jaroori documents to rakhne hai mujhe.

Maan: No need for that I already hav done that

Geet: What ?

Maan:Adda k birth certificate se lekar tumhare sare certificates maine correction k liye bhej diye hai not as Adda n Geet Handa but as Adda n Geet Maan Singh Khuraana.Bas Delhi pahunh kar marrige registration ka certificate departments ko bhejna hai jin jin main certificates submit kiye hai.


Geet: When u did that ? Apne mujhe bataya nahi (surprised she said)

Maan : Agar bata deta to tum fir se questioning karti so I needed not.

Geet:oh Mr Khuraana aap to bahut advance hai

Maan: Advancement karni padti hai nahi to

Geet: Nahi to kya

Maan: Nahi to tum mujhe Papa he na banne deti. (teased)

Geet: Bas kijiye Mr Besharm Khuraana...U r father of a growing girl .

Maan: Kyo

Geet: Chaliye ..tell me when we r going...

Maan: Morning ..waise maine socha tha..we should go by plain but its not good for u in this early stage...I hav booked train yahan se hum Shimla chlte hai ..then by train.

Geet: okey...Let me check what Adda is doing.(she got up n moved out)


It was really tough to leave this place where Geet spent almost 12 years.When all her dear ones left her alone.Where she found a reason to liv.Adda.She was born here.She again became on her feet with lots of hardship.But for Maan for her kids she had to leave.Every body was in tears when she left this place with Maan Adda n their child on the way.


When they reached Delhi it was about 7 in the evening.But question was where Maan gonna take both if not KM.

Answer was KC where Maan had turned ground floor of multistory KC complex to his well furnished house with in two weeks n whole things at ground floor had been shifted to upper floors.Real reason was Maan wanted to keep eye on Geet n Adda 24*7 even in his office hours.

He could arrange much bigger mesion then KM but to him this was rite choice. Conference hall entrance had been shifted to other side so that there would n no need to enter home for meetings.Maan had bought near by villa for guests at KC.

Daddi was much tensed looking at what was happening.Even whole staff.They knew how mad Maan was.But his madness always had a solid reason to acchive his goal.This time nothing was disclosed.Maan had given time to Addi to send a car at definite time according to train.


Maan n driver loaded luggage.But stuff they had was more then enough so Maan had to hire another car from station.Around 7:50 they reached home

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