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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
@ tanei
part41
awesome part
loved it
Part42
awesome emotional part
feel sad for geet
she is broken inside her fear is eating her up
maan fill her mang by his blood
waiting for geet's reaction
continue soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
thank u all well if an 1 update do tell me i hve certain point in my mind for next other wise will update this in evening
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
Awasome part
Waiting for geet to react on his act
What will be her reaction
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Posted: 13 years ago
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So I've never done this before but I am going to give it a whirl. If anybody has any objections voice them now or forever hold your peace...until I post it. 😆

I have an idea...

I have to say you all have developed the story beautifully. I never thought I would find myself liking the love story of a stalker and his victim! But this one has won me over. 😃
Edited by Samanalyse - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#95
superb updates...just can't wait for the next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: tanei

Part 42:

The both saw Tom and Jerry cartoon and laughed a lot. After laughing session they had their lunch and headed towards the room and plan to rest for a while. At 4:30 geet eyes opened she got worried after seeing the time and hurried made suhana ready first and then herself and came to hall.

When maan came the left immediately .now the question arise whose gona sit in front.

Suhana ran towards the back seat geet followed her it pinched in maan heart and he said "mai driver hoon kia come sit in front"

She hesitated but suhana immediately added "haan aunt I wana be alone at back u sit with bade papa"

She half heartedly came and sit in front with maan .he had a big smile on his face feeling like a complete family man. After settling session in car he asked where to go suhana wanted to go to play land she said as settling herself between their seats.

The reached the place suhan started her session mujha who wala swing per jana hai waha bhee aur waha bhee . the both headed in her direction seeing so man family around geet was feeling something in her heart for his baby would she be able to full fill bab need especially complete family she don't even know what will happen if maan take away the baby. She was buzy in her own thought while maan was reading her changing face expression suddenly suhana came an insteded for the other ride the were heading towards it when a couple passed by and said what lovely family . geet smiled weakly at the complement and said to maan "I wana go home now". He nodded and he took suhana and headed towards home the drive was quiet geet was continually shedding tears it was pinching maan so much but he don't wana sa anthing in front of suhana he couldn't get what going in her mind that's hurting her so much. As the reached mansion she headed towards her room maan told suhana to go to her room instead geet. While he followed geet he doest have courage to go inside as he was the real reason of her tears. the door was slightly open he was monitoring here she was sitting on the floor crying & looking up towards her babji and saying " why me?? Why me? why m baby has to suffer the things which I did what will I tell him that her mom became pregnant without a wed lock'his father will already take him away from me at his birth why I have to suffer for maan will 'I loved him I wanted him 'but he just ruined m all self-respect and feeling'."

She kept on crying maan who was listening all this just felt that though he love her but still she is not his wife seeing her this pain he felt like killing himself to ruin someones feeling and life after all society does matter for both of them he doest want his bab to suffer harsh sentences. He got hyper and striatl went inside geet room and picked her up and made her sit on the bed sit '.she jerked him as he was holding her shoulder he got more pissed and saw a cutter on the table he went to pick it up and cut his thumb with it and filled geet mang with his blood her eyes popped open with his certain action and he said loudly "u r mine only mine Mrs khurana no one will dare say anything to you or my baby remember".


P.S sorry for mistake

loved it a lot yaar👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 41 & 42... awesome updates...loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 43:

Well geet was totally in a shocked state she was just staring at maan with big eyes she just stand up and was looking herself at the mirror behind maan here forehead filled with his blood .suddenly suhana came running hearing loud voice of her bade papa and she frantically said "bade papa ur hurt aunty look her head is bleeding". He smiled at her thought picked her up and said "No dear she is not hurt now she is ur bade mama ur bade papa ke wife" . she said "sachi" and headed towards geet to be picked by her but she was not conscious at all that whats happening around her and suddenly she fainted and fall on the bed behind her. Maan shouted "GEET" and immediately called the doctor after that he settle her properly in bed and sat beside her and rubbed her hair. Doctor came checked her and told she is having a high blood pressure need to be shifted to hospital soon before it gets complicated. He immediately did what doctor said. Doctor was observing her it took like 2 hours for her to get stable and told maan that she need mental relaxation too much tension next time can be very dangerous for both of them.

And advice to take her on some vacation.

He did all the formalities of hospital and took geet home. As usual the were quite all the drive maan took ever opportunity to take her glimpse as she was just looking outside the window. As the reached home she was about to move out but maan stopped her and immediately came to her side and lifted her she protested but u know MAAN SINGH KHURANA he never listen he picked her up and took her to the room and placed her properly on bed . suhana came in the room it was late at nite now she went near geet so she could sleep with her but maan refused her then geet said "she will sleep her with me like always you cant say no to her"

Maan said "GEET u need rest I will be hear with u "

Listening to his word she showed anger towards him but he doest care husband jo hai ;)

Geet picked suhana and placed her in the middle a slept along with her maan was watching her action and loved her fight with him. So he changed and came a slept on the other side of the bed in the middle.

IN morning suhana waked up early seeing both her bade papa and mama sleeping she smiled and went out of the room .geet turned towards the center and placed her hand on maan chest and started cuddling with him '.



P.S sorry for mistake now who ever takes the next part plz make its romantic besharam types plz plz

Edited by tanei - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
😃

Originally posted by: tanei

Part 43:

Well geet was totally in a shocked state she was just staring at maan with big eyes she just stand up and was looking herself at the mirror behind maan here forehead filled with his blood .suddenly suhana came running hearing loud voice of her bade papa and she frantically said "bade papa ur hurt aunty look her head is bleeding". He smiled at her thought picked her up and said "No dear she is not hurt now she is ur bade mama ur bade papa ke wife" . she said "sachi" and headed towards geet to be picked by her but she was not conscious at all that whats happening around her and suddenly she fainted and fall on the bed behind her. Maan shouted "GEET" and immediately called the doctor after that he settle her properly in bed and sat beside her and rubbed her hair. Doctor came checked her and told she is having a high blood pressure need to be shifted to hospital soon before it gets complicated. He immediately did what doctor said. Doctor was observing her it took like 2 hours for her to get stable and told maan that she need mental relaxation too much tension next time can be very dangerous for both of them.

And advice to take her on some vacation.

He did all the formalities of hospital and took geet home. As usual the were quite all the drive maan took ever opportunity to take her glimpse as she was just looking outside the window. As the reached home she was about to move out but maan stopped her and immediately came to her side and lifted her she protested but u know MAAN SINGH KHURANA he never listen he picked her up and took her to the room and placed her properly on bed . suhana came in the room it was late at nite now she went near geet so she could sleep with her but maan refused her then geet said "she will sleep her with me like always you cant say no to her"

Maan said "GEET u need rest I will be hear with u "

Listening to his word she showed anger towards him but he doest care husband jo hai ;)

Geet picked suhana and placed her in the middle a slept along with her maan was watching her action and loved her fight with him. So he changed and came a slept on the other side of the bed in the middle.

IN morning suhana waked up early seeing both her bade papa and mama sleeping she smiled and went out of the room .geet turned towards the center and placed her hand on maan chest and started cuddling with him '.



P.S sorry for mistake now who ever takes the next part plz make its romantic besharam types plz plz

wowww👏👏👏awesome update😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update. Y can't someone bring in Dadima so that Geet behaves as his wife. Shifts to his room. Hai na.

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