Kis Morrh Pe Milay Ho #4/Chapter 24/Epiloge P44/45

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Posted: 13 years ago

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beautiful update dear...

its amazing to see hw geet is possessive of children...

really loved it...

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Posted: 13 years ago

#162

finally she is mrs msk...

continue soon...

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Tabinda Areeb

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Posted: 13 years ago

#164

great they married

and now geet is in dehli

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Chapter 23

Daddi Maa had been arranged Greh Parveesh before their returen.Meera did every thing.As she was back before them.

Daddi: Geet u r welcome to ur home (after all rituals she said)

She gav blessing to both Maan n Geet.

Meera: Vaise Daddi Maa what about suhaagraat (she winked looking at Daddi )

Daddi: Us sabh ka arrangement aap k zimme tha kya hua

Meera: Mujhe koi kaam diya jaaye aur main na karu..it never happens.(she praises her self)

Geet: Suhaagraat ?

Meera: Kya hua Geet shaddi hue hai aap dono..aur I hav arranged every thing in Maan's I mean ur room.

Daddi : Meera jo dresses humne apse kaha tha wo aa gayi ..n every thing Geet needs (she already had told Meera to do list for Geet)

Geet: Daddi Maa maine kaha tha I came here jst for Arya n Sandhya..so I hav to liv lik Maan's wife but (she was interrupted by Daddi)

Daddi: What but beta..its true u r Maan's wife ..

Geet: Per main Maan ki dusri patni nahi hu...iska matlaab hai main Sangeeta k jagah per aayi hu..aur mere andhar Sangeeta ka dil hai...to Geet k andar bhi Sangeeta hai...to main kaha hu...mujhe us room main nahi jaana yaha ..(she started to cry bitterly )

Even Daddi melted looking at her.This was not good for Geet mentally n physically.On the other hand only child of her parents r far away from them.It was different jst for few days

Daddi: Aap aap hai Geet...koi aur nahi aur aap jaldi samjh legi k aap kissi k jagah per nahi apni jagah bana kar aayi hai hamari zindgi main..take ur time (she rubbed her hand on her hair)

Geet: Daddi Maa mujhe Sangeeta se koi problem nahi hai..na he Maan k pyar se jo Sangeeta k liye hai..kabhi bhi problem nahi hogi..per main mai hu Daddi Maa let me do what I want.(she folded her hands)

Maan: Geet tum tum ho okey.I know u r not against Sangeeta. aur jo hua hai uske baad u r much disturbed...

Daddi: Take ur time ..aur app wo room nahi lena chahti ..take which room wants...n arrange things according to u Geet

Maan: If u ll permit me I ll only come to ur room ..okey aab khush (he tried to smile)

Geet: Main aaj Sandhya k sath so jaati hu...

Daddi: okey beta...Maan aap Geet ko help kar dejiye

Geet: No Daddi Maa I ll manage..aap mera beg rakhwa dejiye mujhe change karna hai

Daddi said nothing n did what ever Geet asked .She had judged why Maan love her.She was Geet not Sangeeta.Having her own identity.Which she thought she had lost.Jst by heart she owns now.Once was Sangeeta had.

Maan: Daddi Maa u r upset ? (sitting next to her Maan said )

Daddi:Not for my reason but for Geet.She is so innocent n true to every one.But kahi na kahi wo kho gayi hai.

Maan: I m not getting ?

Daddi : Maan it is clear..she is fighting with herself.for her own identity.aur jab tak unko is baat ka ehsaas nahi ho jaata wo Geet hai ..andar say...wo aagay nahi badd sakti (she sighed)

Maan: Daddi main samjh gaya...I ll help her

Daddi:okey beta thats good...

Maan: we should start from home.(he took her hand in his)

Daddi: Ya let her do what she wants in our mension..but apko burra to nahi lag raha (she cleared)

Maan: But why ?

Daddi: Yahi k wo Sangeeta k gahr ko .I wanna say how she arranaged things ..Geet ll change it.

Maan: Daddi aap yeh keh rahi hai to usko to lage ga aise ..I hav no problem...Ek din usko pata chal he jaana hai k Geet Geet hai...aur wo Sangeeta ki jagah per jo uski jagah hai uske sath meri zindgi main hai..(he had hop in his eyes)

Daddi: Ya (Daddi second him)

Maan: Okey Ya Daddi (he got up )

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Jass

posted in hurry .Tense liberties according to rules of contemporary writing.here is used same way as always 😲

Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago