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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#11

wow soni that was just too awesome...

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍the emotions were beautifully explained...

LOVED IT

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Niharika

@Niharika.Nair

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

That was a beautiful one...

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mchopra

@mchopra

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

Too cute sonia...

thnks for the OS..

Edited by mchopra - 13 years ago

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Saams

@Saams

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#14

Awesome work Sonia..
yeh padne mei bada maza aaya.mein toh jia aur hubby ko hi assume kar rahi thi har scene mei.hehe

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516645

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#15

First of all Congrats Jia DI.. And second of all I LOVE LOVE LOVE this OS. Absolutely Love it! First the entire bacha gang trying to plot against the groom and not to forget the stunt they pulled up with Dev was hilarious. I laughed out loud where Geet says "You are Impotent" ROFL. And then Maan.. Okay I admit Jeej is really sweet. Wait Even Di is cute. And the entire OS is sweeettt. I'm still grinning.
What should I say about MG? Everything between them was beautiful. Their meeting, her shararat, his revenge for throwing his mobile, his explanation of his views about marriage.. the entire leg fight.. everything was cute. But I really liked Maan during their wedding night. Jiu Di once again you are lucky😆
And then comes their bonding which was BEAUTIFUL. But for me the last paras were hilarious. I never laughed this much reading something.
"DARE YOU! DARE YOU MR MAAN SINGH KHURANA' DARE YOU FAINT' I SWEAR I'M GOING TO KICK YOUR PERFECT ROUND ASS!" she screamed at him and the faintest hint of dizziness leapt away with the threat in her eyes. The doctors urged her to push and she did but whilst she cursed him again, "I knew it' I knew it marriage was never a good idea" she cried. "But you don't need to be married to get pregnant" Maan blurted almost instantly. She snapped her head at him, "tumhe mazak soojh raha hai' Mazak soojh raha hai' come here deliver a baby and then talk about the facts!"
That was downright hilarious. I had tears in my eyes laughing. Soni Di 🤗 this is for you.. not only for writing such a lovely OS.. But for sharing such sweet thins with us... I Proudly welcome the little cutie Prince to the world🤗
This OS was definitely like the droplets of first rain of the season. Once again congrats Jia Di🤗

Edited by --Shika-- - 13 years ago

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mandymore

@mandymore

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Its beautiful,luvd geet n maan bondng..
Whole journey frm their 1 meet to their baby is beautiful
luvd it cmpletly

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reni

@leverne

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Oops i liked the os but forgot to comment lol.. Blame the meds i take.. Makes me drowsy.. Wow it was such a good os..loved how maan and geet met..how sweetly he made her fall for him..how he didn't fall for her siblings ka tricks..how he gave her time to accept him..the way she was in the hospital..so nice..

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

Hi tht was beuatiful sweet n wonderful. It was emotional, happy. Memories!! Loved it! well written Jia!👏 Maaneet's journey from friends to lovers to parents! Jus one compliant...y no pm? 😭 Please pm wen u update lol!

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euphoric

@euphoric

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: khwaishfan
Hi tht was beuatiful sweet n wonderful. It was emotional, happy. Memories!! Loved it! well written Jia!👏 Maaneet's journey from friends to lovers to parents! Jus one compliant...y no pm? 😭 Please pm wen u update lol!

sorry buddy... i m yet to send the PMs😕