Creatv thrd:You can only be mine,jst mine,nt:pg144 - Page 88

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: 111priyan



Maan to sabka hai
kis kis se bachaogi :)

😲😲😲 Mrs.msk main hoo...toh woh mera hua😉😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nd by d way fantastic update
bechare maan nd geet
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Posted: 13 years ago
Last two parts awesome..so maan will now hit himself with a belt..worth watching sight..
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ simi
jaani mrs msk hone se kya hota hai
chahat to mann mein basti hai nd sabke mann mein maan
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Posted: 13 years ago

He wanted to go through the same pain.

He looked at the belt kept on the table.

Part 35B...

He looked at the belt kept on the table he took it with him and started walking towards his gym room'

While walking he passed thru Geet and Suhana's room they were playing wat seemed like some patient doctor game as Suhana was having her doctor set'

He heard Suhana say: Aunty now I'm going to check u so plz turn above ' he saw tat Geet's face changed color hearing Suhana, losing the smile Geet started becoming pale but Suhana without realizing started to play and kept her sari pallu aside and checked with the toy stethoscope' He saw tears of pain in Geet's eyes as the tiny hand played with her back' Maan started clenching his fist against the metal of the belt hard tat it started to bleed.

Then Suhana asked Geet to turn front so she'll check her heart beats and Geet did the same wiping the tears not wanting the angel to look at her pain'

Maan walked to the gym and thro' the belt aside'talking his shirt off

All he wanted was to make himself die in pain take in the pain.. he remembered their nite together in the island'how his fear, him loosing trust on Geet tat Geet mite leave him if she comes to know abt Suhana coz all the girls whom he came across where only money minded and when he mentioned abt the kid they had a changed reaction'

That's the only reason tat he showed his attitude after their nite together after he got the call from Adi abt Suhana returning home for holidays'

How he did not trust her love for him tat she gave herself to him.and faced hell from her parents side' the girl whom he sud be treating as the queen he left abandoned in the hands of her evil brother'

He started punching kicks in the air' thinking how Geet cried all the night fearing the safety their baby'

His muscles pained due to the pressure he was going thro'but he dint care'

Geet who was putting Suhana to bed heard some noise came out the room walks towards the direction of the noise when she came she was shocked still' at the sight she in front of her



Maan broke a huge ice piece' hurting himself'

Seeing him pain Geet forgot all the coldness she had for him and rushed towards him screaming Maan' hurting herself'in the pieces of ice'Maan called over Geet as she fell down holding her leg' Maan came near her and touched her legs where it hit her'

Edited by aarthirajendran - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
simi and aarthi...
u both did a wonderful job..

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Posted: 13 years ago
35 Both parts were amesome.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simi and Aarthi loved the updates 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
wonderful updates

waiting for next...
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Posted: 13 years ago
@ mrs.msk awesome part
loved it
@aarthirajendran, beautiful part
loved it
continue soon
waiting for next part

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