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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the part
Loving their masti
Oops Arjun is do dead
Dnt knw how Geet will react listening to the news
Love Maan's love care n pain for her
Edited by -afsha- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
good one Angili...
ooh possessive Maan
kawaii_geet thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved this part re
bechara arjun tu sala kaam se gaya
n maan does know how to manaofy his mishty
agla kaun??

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

loved this part re
bechara arjun tu sala kaam se gaya
n maan does know how to manaofy his mishty
agla kaun??

it was shreya but she run so noone why dont you try please write next i want to read one more part before i sleep
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Posted: 13 years ago
uh oh..me???😲
i posted one part this morning only...
dun knw if i'll do it properly or not😕

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

uh oh..me???😲
i posted one part this morning only...
dun knw if i'll do it properly or not😕

you cant be worse than me come on go for it
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: angili

you cant be worse than me come on go for it


oh madam je...
U can't be worse than me...LOL
u said the other way round!!
but ok lemme type ok
small ud chalega to???
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet


oh madam je...
U can't be worse than me...LOL
u said the other way round!!
but ok lemme type ok
small ud chalega to???

huh chalegq updqte kqro pleqse
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Posted: 13 years ago
yups typing almost done😉
need to post
u can't even imagine wht i did to tht story lol
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART 18

maan knew geet soft heart she cant see anyone urt and for some reason he knew she cant stand him being hurt and bleeding h remembers her expression on the party night when she saw his blood on the floor geet ate fast so she can take care of his cut, he smirked seeing is plan work
she finished the food quickly...rather worriedly thinking abt the wound on his knuckles!!!!!

soon as she was done she threw the plate aside and ran to him...he smiled..a faint one..the smile of contentment which she never noticed!!!!
she cleaned his wound...thank god it was not deep and bandaged it!!!
geet: y do u hurt urself all the tym????

maan (lost in her touch): may be because i love seeing u think of me..atleast for tht particular point of time!!!

she rolled her eyes...but went thoughtful..sum times he behaves so badly...talks things whic r utterly illogical yet sometimes his talks mean soo deep tht touch ur heart directly!!!! she came out of her senses when she heard the door shut close...he had left after she dressed his wounds!!!

she sat on the bed quietly: babajee...how on earth am i going to fall for him??? maan sirf ek jhooti duniya bana rhe hain apne liye...ut in reality...how can i love him?????
her thots went back to all those moments she was with him...the fun..the laugh...the touch...the feel..she actually shied a bit!!!!
she smacked her head and slept off!!!!

maan went to his room and called adi
maan: adi...is everything done????

adi: ye..ye..yesss sssiirrr... as p..per ur orders..there was an Income tax raid in tht arjun's office n now he is being taken into CBI custody!!!but...

maan: what but??? y did u stop????
adi: umm no its ok..sir...
maan: adi...tell me properly wht u want to say!!!!
adi: umm wo ek prob ho gayi hain sir...
maan: kya baat hai aadi...saaf saaf bolo

adi: wo...wo...suhana madam aayi hain yahan...
maan (shocked): what??? suhana???? OMG...kab????
aadi: wo...she came yest n aate hi aapke baare mein poocha...
maan took a deep breathe
maan: and wht did u tell????
aadi (scared): m..meine..k...k..kaha ke u r out on a business trip but she got angry..
maan: she is angry???
there was a clear tension in his voice

aadi: ji...ji sir...she even came to the office this morning asking abt u and when she didn't find u..she...she..
and he started crying!!!!
maan: she what adi?? wht did she do?? theek batao warna...
aadi was n e ways scared of his boss...n his "warna..." meant real bad things..
so he just blurted out everything in one breath

aadi: and she placed chewing gum on my chair and i sat on it..and my pant tore..
and he cried...
maan took a deep breath!!!!!
maan: phir???
aadi: sob...everyone was able to see my sponge bob chaddi sob...
maan: grr stop with tht description abhi suhana kahan hai???

aadi: mansion me sir..n sabko pareshaan kar rakha hai!!!!
maan closed his eyes...he looked towards geet's room and sighed!!!
maan: aadi...humare waapas jaane ki taiyyari karo!!!!
adi: ji sir

later in the evening
geet woke up with the noise around her
she slowly opened her eyes only to see maan packing her stuffs...
geet: yawn...maan..hum kahan jaa rahe hain???

maan (busy in his work): hum waapas jaa rhe hain geet
her face lightened up..finally he was thinking of going...babajee ka lakh lakh shukar hain...
but all her excitement went into the drain when her eyes fell on what he was holding... OMG they were her undergarments..and
he was slowly and nicely opening then and folding properly n keeping them
on her bed...later to be put into the bags!!!!

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lol...dun throw jutties at me for writing this...😆
wanted sum fun😉
now its upto u guys to figure out who is suhana n continue with the besharmi track that is building up...😉
i laid the foundation stone!!!😎

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