Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
@sona
oye jaldi jaldi padho...
@mistique
wanted to make it senti + romantic
both didnt work i guess😆
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Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
@sona
oye jaldi jaldi padho...
@mistique
wanted to make it senti + romantic
both didnt work i guess😆
Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
okies here u go guys...dun knw how it turned out😕
pls manage ok n e ways my 1st tym in creative thread...wanted to get naughty😉
but went a bit long...
plz njoy n if its not good...pls dun thrw tomatoes or jutties at me plsss😳
PART 29Geet was glad her plan had worked but was now alittle scareed to face this maan.. he was angry and livid.. she knew he didn't like any other
man touching her but she had to do this.. a little bit pain was what he needed right now.. and well she felt glad .. it was her time now..
maan left from there without looking at anyone!!!! how dare she do something like this???? How dare she?? what does she think of herself
han??? dev, meera, yash n geet stood there quiet looking at the mess he created!!!! they were rather thoughtful!!!
dev- he is super mad now...
meera- do you think we should call him?
yash- i was scared to see his anger...geet...u sure all this was ok??
geet had no answer to it. she knew if maan was angry...he cud go to n e extent...even hurt himself badly!!! she was slowly getting back to
herself... she was slowly accepting maan back into her life...that lost trust somewhere coming back!!!! even she was scared of his reaction
now knowing him all too well.
dev, meera n yash tried to reach maan on his cell but he kept cutting the call!!!
geet- its late u guys better go i'll talk to him.
dev and meera had other plans in mumbai so they left. yash left too.
geet tried his no again n again he didn't pick her calls either. she was somewhere slowly getting scared...what if he tries to hurt himself???
she wouldn't be able to see him pain...both physical and mental.
she didn't know where he went..so she decided to get back home n try again!!!!
she reached her flat..around 10pm it was. all the lights were off..she switched on some dim ones and changed into her short noodle strap
knee-length nightie!!!
she sat on the bed and dialled his no again. strangely she heard his cell beeping somewhr in her flat. was he there????
she searched around the whole place only to find him standing with his arms crossed in the balcony facing the Mumbai sea...a cool breeze
soothing their senses.
geet- maan...she called him gently...
he turned to look at her...his one look...that had so many feelings...so many unspoken words...so many complains...she was agonised but still
she held onto her idea of inflicting the pain on him that she had undergone!!!!
geet- how did you get in here??? i had ocked the door.
maan- what was dance for geet??? he asked coldly not even looking into her eyes...not caring about her question!!!
geet ignored- why weren't you picking up ouor calls?? we were trying for so long..
maan- what was that vulgar dance for geet...he souted demanding and answer!
geet- excuse me...vulgar??? Mr. khurana it was never vulgar...
maan- well i consider any man other than me touching you is Vulgar.
geet- for god's sake maan..he is just my friend...y r u geeting so mad about hun??
he turned around, held her shoulders tightly and pushed her against the wall...she winced in pain as his fingers dugged her soft flesh
geet- ouch maan...it hurtss...
maan- does it??? well wasn't it pain only that u wanted to inflict in me??? well u thot since u hve undergone too much pain..that means i should too???
geet was surprised at this...does he even realise how she felt when he walked into the party with that chudail???
geet- yeah of course..she spat angrily..still fearing to lose him once again..
i hve seen too much...i am trying to move ahead once again maan...and u stepped in...still i accepted u again n am trying hard to go back to u..but u dun care abt my feeling...how could u walk in with sum bitch to that party?? u knew i was there ryt??? then y did u??? dun u knw wow much it hurts me????
maan- ohh really..is it??? so u wanted to hurt me in the same way right...then listen to this geet...i hve no effect..i dun feel the pain n e more..staying away frm u...6 months i had learned to live with the pain..the only thing tht hurts me most is ur tears...i can't bear them..i'd rather die than see tears on ur face!! hve u ever realised wht went thru me when i saw u in so much pain after tht horrible incident???? i still dun know how i managed to survive all these days..agreed that sumwhr my love was weak..but..staying away frm u...taking seeing that berukhi in ur eyes kills me every moment
geet- maan...tears welled up in her eyes...
maan- and u were laughing...u were happy with yash...u were happy dancing..then how can i get hurt geet????
he cupped her face..she realised what he wanted to say...
geet- maan...how can u still love me so much???? she broke down crying..
am not that pure any more...that man...he..he..
she couldn't continue
he could bear no longer he smacked his lips on her as tight as possible making her eyes widen with this sudden act...
his kiss was violent...he bit her lips...she moaned in pain..he didn't stop rather pushed hard...she had no choice but to rather give into his wishes...the moment he opened her mouth his tounge went inside violently claiming each n every corner of her mouth as his...his hands violently ripped off her nightie still kissing madly...his hands wandered around her back and pushed her harder into the wall...[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-nSWdmXOLRU[/YOUTUBE]______________________________________________________okies me nervous...biting nails...did i go over board????? do comment acha acha ok😳
over to you guys now!!!😉
Originally posted by: kawaii_geet
sona..
finally my part
Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
Oh god...don't remind me..my own SS hasn't been updated in weeks cause i am busy with university 😆..lolz...
p.s i caught up with forbidden love...loving it hun...and now i am working on SR...so i blame u if i fail my test on thurs...lolz...just kidding...😆
shhh...i am already in trouble with my sano here..i didn't know SR had so many parts...now i am hooked..majorly..now i have to run away before i get killed...Originally posted by: bangalores
thank u...
i still have updates from others pending😳... been busy these days...
thursday... just one and a half day away, right? and u r still here? must be long into nid\ght at ur place too...😕😕
uufff tu aur teri dhamkiyan DQ babyOriginally posted by: kawaii_geet
sana di
diii aap pehle comment karo kaisa hai mera wala part ok
warna aapki shaadi karwa doongi😡😈🤣
@sona
waiting waiting😍
Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever
shhh...i am already in trouble with my sano here..i didn't know SR had so many parts...now i am hooked..majorly..now i have to run away before i get killed...
sowieee...*reya looks at sano cutely*...i am going...really..i am...😭Originally posted by: sindu555
Reyaaa 😡 .. GO TO BED RIGHT NOW ... u were not welll the whole week last week ,... abhee bhee am sure weakness hogi .. and still u're exerting ur self ... 😡 ... go sleep now .. otherwise me is ready to kill u and am gonna tell ur mama bear too ... wo hi dekhay gi phir tujhay 😈
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