creative thrd:The maze of love v/s evil,note@pg154 - Page 87

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kawaii_geet thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
thnxxx me super excited
wanted to write more
but then...it got longer n i hate typing 😃
so stopped

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

oyeee ladkiyon...whr r my comments????

sabar ker teray update tak phunchoon to main😆abhi page 106 tak hi read kiya hai mainay😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey...nice one...loved the quiet confrontation and the sensitivity between the two...😊

Really now what will the next writer do?😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
@sona
oye jaldi jaldi padho...

@mistique
wanted to make it senti + romantic
both didnt work i guess😆

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Im posting If ull dnt like it toh pplz tell me

Fingers crossed
Maan walked out of the room while Geet laid on the bed
The window was open n Maan sat at the same chair where Geet was sitting before he came
Sumwhr the song started playing
It was as if the nature was showing Geet what Maan wanted to say
Boy
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
Maan looked at Geet whom he culd see sitting frm window
Geet avoided looking at Maan evn knwing that he is seeing her
Gal
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
Gal
main achhi buri jaisi bhi hu
tu achha bura jaisa bhi hain
main teri hu kaisi bhi hu
tu mera hain kaisa bhi hain - 2
Geet looked at Maan listening to the words
Maan's eyes reflected same words
Boy
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam - 2
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
Boy
toote hue dil ki kashti ko
toofan mein kinara mil jaaye
tu thaam le mera haath agar
dono ko sahara mil jaaye
Maan walked towards Geet hoping she wuld give in
Gal
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam - 2
hum dono ki ek kahani
aaja lag ja gale dil jaani
tera gham mera gham ek jaisa sanam
But he was wrng she jus turned her face frm him to the other side shwing him she didnt trusted what she saw in his eyes
Giving him the pain he had given her by not trusting her
He knew it wasnt so easy to pacify her
But wuld have hurt so much he didnt thnk that
Hop ull like it
Here is the video of it
If ull want ull can watch it

sweet lovely update afsha😃loved it a lot yaar😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

so first i thought abt hiding but then gave up on the idea 😆...yes...to both the questions...i am still up..and i do have uni in the morning :(...but don't be mad...please😳..i am catching up on bindu's story...and i only have like 2 parts left...and then i will read the latest part here..and go to bed..pakka promise😃

Sigh ... kya keron mein tera Jalebi .. aik to aisi herkat ooper se cuty faces and request... ye emotional atyachaar hai Ouch .. sigh .. theek hai but u're going to bed after reading this update .. no more sneaking around
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

@sona
oye jaldi jaldi padho...

@mistique
wanted to make it senti + romantic
both didnt work i guess😆

ok give me 5 min😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kawaii_geet

oyeee ladkiyon...whr r my comments????

Super cool. Why did you hesitate in the first place?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sindu555

Sigh ... kya keron mein tera Jalebi .. aik to aisi herkat ooper se cuty faces and request... ye emotional atyachaar hai .. sigh .. theek hai but u're going to bed after reading this update .. no more sneaking around

ohhh...i lubbbsss my Ras Malai...muahhh 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
sana di
diii aap pehle comment karo kaisa hai mera wala part ok
warna aapki shaadi karwa doongi😡😈🤣

@sona
waiting waiting
😍

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