creative thrd:The maze of love v/s evil,note@pg154 - Page 46

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

Bindu honey...i see u hitting ur likes here..how are u feeling hun ?

Reya <3

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

okay, to all the writers
don't misunderstand me or don't think that i am being harsh but i badly want to say it as most of you know that i can't keep myself away from it

well, all the writers are doing excellent work -- no doubt in that ... i always pamper, support & encourage you as i genuinely think you are capable enough & moreover your hard work should be appreciated but i can't force myself on to anything
the idea of opening the thread was awesome (we have got numerous responses & creatives work in last 2 threads) but this thread is making me pull my hair
all the scenes are presented as there is no head & toe, so much negativity & confusion ... i simply can't handle it

well, ya i know that we should taste every emotion but this is beyond tolerance as i am a die hard fan of your creativity & i can't see you all writing so sad about MANEET
plz forgive me if i am rude or harsh

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Dear this was supposed to be an emotional drama thread. Things should turn positive now as Geet is alive and Man has realised truth and his mistake...so hang in there honey

Originally posted by: leverne

Pls tell me page no of updates bindu di.. Me sittin in office cant go thru so many pages

PART 15

PART 16

PART17

PART18

Originally posted by: Nazmaa

Okay i may have ruined it.. lol :P

But i thought its about time Geet had someone on her side...

So Here goes...

Hope You Like it...

Please Comment...

Part 10

Maan turned to see Meera standing in front of him.. Anger shown in her eyes, her fist was scrunched up in a ball as if she was about to throw a punch... Meera was infact Geet's Elder Sister/ best friend And was also Dev's Wife And Maan's sister - in - law.. Maan resp xected meera and would never do anything to hurt her but today he had hurt her bad... he hurt her sister, insulted her upbringing, her dignity and her family...

Meera walked up to him and Smacked him across the face.. maan hand automatically replaced Meera's and he held his cheek and kept his head down in shame.. But he was right for what he did with Geet's although he shoudnt have insulted her family..

"maan Tumne meri behen ki saath jo bhi kiya bohat bura kiya.. Usko Aur mujko esa Zaleel Nahi karna chahiya tha." she said in anger... She held his colar and yelled at him...

"Aaj jo tumne kiya uske baad na meh Aur mera bacha is ghar mein raho gi aur na he tumse bat karogi.. Lekin us se pehle Yeh Sach Jaan Lo" she said...

"Kaise sach Meera?" he asked angryily... "Ab kaun sa sach reh gaya hai, Hmm.. tumhara behen ne jo kiya uska kya... usne jo mere saath kiya vo kya hmm?? "

"Gudiya Ne kuch nahi kiya.. Meri Geet ko yeh sab karna nhi aata.. Yeh Doka, yeh kisi aadmi ko us larki se cheena ... yeh sab nahi aata usko... yahan tak usko pyar se nafrat hogi hai.. usi din se jab se tumne sameera se yeh shaadi karni ka fasla kiya hai... us din se yeh yahan se chalne vale thi.. is sheher ko chorna vali thi.. lekin nahi kiya kyun ke us ka accident hua.. lekin uska accident karvya kaun.. tumhara khud ka bhai.. VICKY!!" She Yelled..

"Vicky?" he repeated..

"Haan Vicky.. Aur uska vo dost Arjun .. Vicky ne Geet ko club mein bula liya.. when Geet got there HE ordered her drink Aur usne kuch mila liya tha.. Jab Geet ne yeh drink pee le vo naashe mein thi... She hardly knew wha t was happening.. arjun uske saath..."She stopped As tears were coming down her face... she couldnt carry on.. her hand covered her mouth in order to stop the crying the thought o her baby sister... she left maan and just went to her room and started packing..

(listen to Sad song)

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4ErSiT8gDmU[/YOUTUBE]

Betaabi ka, khaamoshi kaeeth
Ek anjaana sa nagma hai

Meera thought about G?eet, How she would be feeling.. This is the second time her sister had lost someone close to her... Meera Now
feared for her sister..

Mehsoos isse karke dekho
Har saans yahan ek sadma hai

Meera took a picture of Geet and hugged it tight.. she cried while hugging her picture.. her back to the door, she was unaware of Maan standing there.. She yelled to Her babaji... "phir meri Gudiya ke saath asa kiya aap ne... Phir usko ek esa dard diya hai jis ke karan pyar hai.. aab vo kisi ko pyar nahi karige.. kisi se shaadi nahi kariga.. khud ko maar degi mera behen.. Jeetth jeetha khud mar jayigi .. bilkul akela.. " She wiped her tears..

Isko jitna samjho kam hai
Jeevan sukh dukh ka sangam hai
Kabhi patjhad hai, kabhi saawan hai

"Agar usse kuch hua na phir mein us sameera ke aur Arjun ko sazaa dela kar rahoungi... unne zinda maar dongi... is khurana kandan ko
saza dehla kar rahoungi.. Dekna Babaji.. Ab mein apne behen ke liya laroungi.. aur usse yaha se door leh kar joungi..." She vowed...

Yeh aata jaata mausam hai

Kabhi hasna hai, kabhi rona hai
Jeevan sukh dukh ka sangam hai

"Ab Geet akeli nahi hai.. mein hoon uske saath... aur sameera ko sab ke samne leh kar aungi.. " She wiped her tears.. Maan overheard everything and left to his room.. meera left the house with her son.. leaving a note behind for dev...

Over To You Mchopra Lol ..

Or Whoever's next..!! 😆

Hope u like it guys

You all ready for some more 'fun'...read on people 😃

Part 11

Vicky sat in his study of the Khurana Mansion drowning himself in alcohol to dull the pain he carried in his heart. He had lost the love of his life; the woman he loved with all his heart because of that Geet Handa. And who had he lost her to ? His own brother Dev: Meera left him and married Dev the next day because she claimed that Dev's love was pure. Like hell. No one could love her like Vicky Khurana could, he thought as he poured himself some more scotch over the ice and chugged it down in one shot.

Tanhai http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nc_dGr5eals

Blinded with anger and a need for revenge; he didn't even hesitate once when Arjun suggested the plan to trap that Handa. And it was because of her that he had lost his precious Meera. He knew he had done the dirty work by giving Geet the envelope to hand to Akash Trivedi and he knew that Arjun could expose him anything. Arjun wasn't a man that should be trusted, Vicky knew that now. He decided that he would pay a visit to Arjun in the morning and see what his mindset was.

The next day

Vicky drove his car through the gates of the Deekshit house early afternoon as the guard let him in as the guards knew him well enough by now. The guard gave him a slight nod. Vicky stepped out as he parked the car and took his sunglasses off as he walked in. The Deekshit house was high class but still nothing compared to the Khurana Mansion. Maybe that's why Sameera wanted to marry her brother. But she claimed that she was deeply in love with him and even pregnant with his baby. How the hell had his brother gotten her pregnant when he didn't even spare a glance before ? that Vicky couldn't wrap his head around. He must have been drunk or something, Vicky thought.

"Good afternoon sir", a servant said as he saw Vicky.

"Good afternoon. Where is Arjun?"

"Sir is in his study. I can let him know you are here.", the servant informed.

"No, that's fine. I will just meet him upstairs then.", Vicky said before he started to climb the stairs.

Vicky walked through the Deekshit house knowing it well by now and soon reached the door of the study. The door was slightly ajar and he put his hand to open it further when someone's words suddenly stopped him.

"But you know that they are bound to find out the truth sooner or later.", Arjun said.

Vicky listened intently waiting for the other person to speak. He had a bad feeling about the 'truth' he was talking about.

"Oh come on Bhai, Maan thinks he slept with me that night he was drunk and got me pregnant.", he heard Sameera say and fought to stand on his feet as her words shocked him. She wasn't pregnant with the Khurana heir. Oh my god. She had trapped his brother and even his Dadi Ma shedding crocodile tears about how they would lose face in the society if she gave birth out of wedlock.

"Well, you better hurry up and get pregnant with a 'real' baby before the Khuranas find out. They are pretty smart; those bas***ds.", Arjun said and Vicky's blood boiled at his words. How could that bas***d say that after he had gotten his hands dirty for him.

"Don't worry Bhai, I will get pregnant and get all that Khurana money.", Sameera said and Vicky could see the smirk on her face.

Vicky couldn't believe it. The Deekshit siblings had deceived the Khuranas and now Vicky wasn't ready to sit on the sidelines and watch. It was time for some action.

I hope this takes care of the vicky-meera-dev confusion that was there after Naz showed her married to Dev...so i hope i took care of that😳

So how was it ? Now what will Vicky do now that he knows the truth?

Come on...who wants to take it from here ??

Love,

Reya

p.s i know so many mistakes...sowieee...didn't get a chance to read it over😳