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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shilalipi

PART-12


savitri devi was in karan's room it has been so many years that she had come in his room...after karan suicided...she locked this room..not even for once..she entered here...or let anyone enter..but today..seeing her beloved grandson so devastated only for that wicked girl geet..who was not better than her aunty..she also appeared innocent like her aunty..bt she should have known that all these handa girls are snake in disguise of angel...she still remembered that dreadful day of karan-kavita's marrige..when kavita..geet's aunty showed her actual "roop" & said that she didn't wanted to marry karan as she wanted to marry karan just for his money..now have found more wealthy one...so there is no need of him now...that day if nisha..who was surprisingly kavita's cousin had nt come to rescue their pride & izzat their name would have been tarnished..
all was going well after the marrige..even karan tried his best to accept nisha..bt for an unknown reason,,karan suicided after two years of marrige...then within another year..nisha was married again...this time it was a love marrige to the billionarie mr sham..though daadi thought he was too old(35 years) for a 19 year old nisha..bt she was nt against it as she thought she was too young to mourn over the husband for her whole life whom she married due to circumstances...
vicky came out silently from the Deekshit house...after having a chit chat with arjun..pretending that he did not heard anything.thinking what to do..he have to do something fast..as the marrige will be within 15 days..bt he knew he has to continue acting that he was with those dirty Deekshits...bt it was nt that easy..nt at all easy after knowing that arjun them who made him sensless by spiking his drink & took some pics with girls in objectionable positions & showed it to geet..& it was the reason that geet told meera to end the relation..ofcourse she was right in her position!!she did what did what a loving sister shold have done to protect her sister...all this arjun did only to take revenge for a mere slap!!!.his guilt pils up..now he will nt let the bro-sis sucess in thier plan..he has to do something.bt he knew..he could nt do anything alone.he was nt now afraid of punishment..all he knew that the first thing he would do is to tell daadima & maan bhai all of this...
daadima was devastated after reading the letter which she found in karan's secret drawer..oh god !!
dear mom,
i know that u hate kavita & i hated her too..for doing this to me..bt after knowing the truth i feel my self trapped in guilt..u know mom that day kavita did that only to protect our family honour..it was nisha who told her that i was drunk once & i accidenty ...she told kavita that she was pregnant with my chid & if i do nt marry her she will make sure that the whole delhi knows the pregnancy news..& actually she was nt all pregnant..bt when i discovered it & tried to talk to kavita she told me that i should forgive nisha..as she is my wife & loves me...i also tried that only for kavita & u..bt i could nt bear it nymore when i came to know that nisha..didnt love me..loved only my money..& was having numorous affairs...mom i know i would not be there when u will be reading the letter bt please do not hold any bad feelings about kavita..she is pure mom...
love
karan

she could nt stop her tears from flowing..does that mean geet is innocent too..no no that can not be,,,they had proves...
"dadi!" vicky's voice broke the chain of her thought..she was stil holding the letter..she quickly wipes her tears before vicky sees it & said.."yes beata...boliye..kuch kaam that apko??"

vicky took a long breath & stepped into the room..."I HAVE TO TELL YOU SOMETHING..."



okay this is my first attempt to write something ...so pls comment..critisim also welcomed...

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👏 awesome work the 19 part was a very emotional one..fantasticly written ..just loved it..
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Originally posted by: kathie_berns

Part 13:
"Daadimaa, i've got to tell you something." Vicky burst into the room and Daadimaa composed herself.

"Vicky, i dont want to listen to you. You seem to have forgotten that you are a part of this family. I have not seen you in this house evn one day since Dev's marriage with Meera. What is wrong with you? Dont you want to make friends with your Bhabhi? And now, since your elder brother Maan is getting married, you should be at home and helping in the preparations. But you are least bothered. How can you be so irresponsible?" Daadi chided him.

Vicky felt like his heart was slashed when Daadi spoke about Dev and Meera. His Meera, his love did not even confront him once, before getting married to Dev. He had blamed Geet for framing him with pictures of him and those girls in compromisable positions. It was too late when he came to know that it was actually Arjun behind this.

The pain was just too much to be forgotten. Anyways, that was not important now. What was important was that he save his family from the evil enemy's clutches.

"Daadimaa, you have got to hear me out. I wanted to talk to you about Geet. Actually..."Just then his cell phone beeped with a message and he saw Arjun's name flashing on his screen. He quickly opened and read the message and what he read made him break into a sweat.

'Vicky, i assume that you heard something that you were not supposed to hear. Do you think me a fool that i will not come to know about you visiting my house and eavesdropping on me? Anyways, now that You know the truth, i'm glad about it. You can help me out. Incase you decide to opt out just let me know. Within the next 5 minutes, your po*nographic pictures with the girls will be out on all the websites including youtube. And the prime time news will have you on its headlines. You would become famous and you would have only me to thank for that. If in any case you dont want to become famous, poison Daadi's mind about Geet and tell Daadi that Maan never had any feelings for Geet. I can trust you to cook up a nice story. After you are done, meet me outside Geet's house. She is alone at home and i want to pay her back for her slap.'

"What is it you had to tell me about Geet?" Daadi's voice broke into his thoughts.
Vicky did not want to chicken out but he had no option. He could not sacrifice his life for Geet and even that matter, his family. They could figure things out for themselves.

"Daadi, i just found out that Geet had herself caused the accident as a last attempt to gain the Khuranas sympathy. Even though you may think otherwise, Maan loves only Sameera and he never had feelings for Geet. Geet just wanted revenge for her aunt's misfortune and also has an eye on our property.

When you see Maan bhai attracted towards her, it is not the truth. The shocking truth is that Geet does black magic. I know you wouldnt believe me but an employee found black magic stuff under her desk in office.I think it was to trap Maan bhai. I will show it to you later. Of course, i dont know if Meera is involved or not. I dont think he herself does not know how evil Geet is. She can go upto any extent to achieve her means. It is good that we got rid of her before she could destroy us."

Vicky walked away from there, knowing that from now on he had no chance of salvation. He was doomed forever. His cell phone fell down from his pocket when he went down the stairs, which went totally unnoticed by him.

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Geet was staring blankly at the ceiling of the bed. Her mind was refusing to think anything. She was like in a state of shock since she was discharged from hospital. Maybe Maan was actually playing with her feelings while all the time he wanted to marry Sameera. But Daadima was a shocker. The way she spoke to Geet made her want to run somewhere far from the place.
Just then the radio started playing a song which was apt to describe her feelings.

(Listen to the song suna suna from krishna cottage:www.youtube.com/watch?v=BRZqaS92luU)

suna suna lamha lamha meree raahe tanha tanha
aakar mujhe tum tham lo, manjil teree dekhe rasta
mud ke jara abb dekh lo, aisa milan phir ho na ho
sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha

bichhde bhee ham jo kabhee raasto me, toh sang sang rahungee sada
kadmo kee aawaj sun ke chalungee, tumhe dhund lungee sada
bhulee mohabbat kee yeh khushbuye hain, hawaon me phailee huyee
chhu kar mujhe aaj mahsus kar lo, woh yade meree unchhuyee
aisa milan phir ho na ho, sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha

aa.. aa...
vaado ke dhago me ham tum bandhe hain, jara dor tum tham lo
baaho mai aise pighal jane do mujhko, aise meraa nam lo
mai woh shama hu jo roshan tumhe karke, khud toh pighal jaungee
subah ka suraj tumhare liye hai, mai hu rat dhal jaungee
aisa milan phir ho na ho, sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha
mud ke jara abb dekh lo, aisa milan phir ho na ho
sab kuchh meraa tum hee toh ho
bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
o bapanah pyar hai aaja, teraa intejar hai aaja
suna suna lamha lamha, meree raahe tanha tanha

Her eyes were so moist that she did not notice the two men who entered her room. Vicky watched helpless as Geet screamed when Arjun pulled her by the hairs and banged her to the wall.

Author's note:lol...how was it? Sorry for being evil, but i love twists... Over to the next writer.

kathieee😲hamesha shocked ending kerti hai😆abhi jaldi se next update read kerti hoon😆awesome update yaar😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mchopra

Koi likh raha hai iya i do the honours..but hola i am no mood for a happy update..


let me make another attempt...i think my interference will turn the story again😆😆...

but can any one suggest a song...male, retrospective...but that can instill hope? my PC's sound box is off...😭😭

Edited by bangalores - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Kathie nice job!

Bindu get well soon!
Sherya take over and i don't know how you and the rest will react to this update!
I tried😭

Part 14

Her eyes were so moist that she did not notice the two men who entered her room. Vicky watched helpless as Geet screamed when Arjun pulled her by the hairs and banged her to the wall.

Maan was in his study room..trying to block out the truth about Geet. Meera's words rang in his head..he wanted to believe that Geet, his Geet, couldn't do anything like that..he wanted to beileive her but the proof was all there in front of his eyes that spoke betrayal.

He looked through the files again and again of the proof against Geet hoping to find some kind of loophole some kind of consolidation that maybe Meera was right but all his efforts were in vain. Nothing came up! He throws the files on the floor along with everything on top of the desk...He sits on the floor crying thinking about Geet..."Why Geet...why...did you do this to me? Why? I loved you but you played with my feelings...why?" Dadima comes and sits next to him...Maan looks up and cries...

Dadima: Maan beta what is the point in crying and thinking of your past? What happened has happened? Now you have to lead a better life with Sameera. Don't forget she is carrying your baby.

Maan: Its hard...she has broken everything inside me. Its hard to mend it...

Dadima: I know it will take time but you have to try...please say it for me...you will try

Maan: I will...excuse me...(he gets up to leave...he wipes his tears...) "I won't let you or anyone play with me like this again." As he was leaving he saw Vicky's phone on the floor. He picks it up...he decides to go to Vicky's room to return the phone. It was almost dying. As soon as he plugs the phone into charger..something flashes...a message...he drops the phone after reading the message...he backs up..."no..." He kept shaking his head...he runs out of the house...

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hhCafFsghso[/YOUTUBE]

He drives the car..speeding...his life with Geet..her innocent smile, her face...everything flashed before him. Her pain in her eyes seeing him getting engaged to Sameera, her hurtful voice when he told her he didn't love her...her body lying on the grass...he grips the steering wheel so hard it was turning white..."Vicky...he is behind this...he is the one that placed something in Geet's drink...he is..." Meera's words..everything was making him feel guilty. Why didn't he believe her? Why didn't he believe Geet's innocence? Why? Does he even deserve her? He raced through the road to get to Geet.

He stops the car in front of her house..he runs inside...everything stopped. His life came to a halt. There was blood on the wall, everything was scattered all over the room. He barged into every room to find her but no Geet..."GEET..." He drops on his knee...

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Originally posted by: mchopra

Even i was disgusted writing this part..but i had to.if u dont like it..let me know..i will edit it...


Part 15:

Arjun banged her against the wall. Blood shot out from her head but she turns around to see arjun and Vicky staring at her. She tries to get up but before she could arjun holds, she tries to push him away but couldn't. He holds her by her head and throws her across the room. She lands on the table and the things on way topple away. He tries to reach her but she moves on her back in fear and knocks down things that come on her way. She reaches the corner and is fixed. Arjun leers at her lecherously and pushes her again and she immediately faints. He lifted her up on her shoulder and carries her out.

Vicky is a silent spectator to all this.

Vicky: Tum iske saath..

Arjun moves his hand along her arm and smiles at him.

Vicky turns away.

Kahaan jaana hai..he asks since he was the one was driving. Mere ghar..tells arjun.

Vicky drives to his house and opens the door and walks into his room.

Come on Vicky lets him have some fun..

Vicky shakes his head and tells him that he will stay outside.

Arjun carries her into the room and lies her down on the bed.

He looks at her beautiful body lecherously and smirks. He then takes a rope and ties both her hands so that she cant do anything while he makes her pay for her slap.

He runs his finger down her body pausing at B****** and then at her feminine core.

He then goes and sits on the chair and asks Should I wait for her to wake up or' he looks at her and decided against it. He couldn't wait to take away her pride from her.

He walks towards her and looked at her before tearing of her kurta from her body and then throwing away her salwaar of her. He looks at the semi cad beauty in front of her.

He wanted to give her pain before he could take away everything from her. He dug his nails into her abdomen hard and enjoyed seeing her face furrow in pain.

He then pulled off her bra off her making sure that its hurts her when he pulls it out. She winces in pain. He smirks seeing it and bends towards her covers her body completely with his so that she would wince under his weight.

He then bit her at her collar bone, her neck, her earlobes harsh enough to make her writhe under him. He was completely enjoying the pain he was bestowing upon her and the pleasure he was getting from her virgin body.

He then moved to bite her breasts and make sure he would leave marks on her. He moved down and bit her swelled area hard enough to make it turn blue and even bleed when her body coudnt take his harsh demeanor. Where he couldn't bite her he scratched her such as to make her bleed and leave her marks on her.

On the other hand maan decided to find Geet. He knew that he wouldn't kill her but they wanted to avenge her but he couldn't let anyone even touch her, not that Ba***** arjun, he couldn't lay her filthy hands on her.

He called up dadi and asked if Vicky was home and dadi replied in negative. He took out his car and drove to the only other place he knew the two could be. His mind flashed with memories of geet, her smile, her way of fighting against him. His heart was bleeding thinking what he had done to the angel who brought light into his life and shedding silent tears.

Hum bewaafa hargiz na the,

Par hum wafaa kar na sake,

Humko mili usko sazaa hum jo katha kar na sake -2

Kitni akeli thi who rahein hum jin pe ab tak akele chale rahe,

Tujse bichid ke bhi who bekhabar tere he gum mein jalte rahe,

Tune kiya jo shkva hum who gila kar na sake

Hum bewaafa hargiz na the,

Par hum wafaa kar na sake,

Tumne jo dekha suna sach tha magar kitna tha yeh sach yeh kisko pata

Jaane tumhein maine koi dhoka diya jaane tumein koi dhoka hua

Is pyaar mein sach jhoot ka tum faisla kar na sake

Hum bewaafa hargiz na the,

Par hum wafaa kar na sake'

When he reached deekshit house his fears were confirmed seeing vicky's car parked in the drive way. He ran into the house and saw Vicky sitting in the room.

He reachd to him and Vicky seeing him got up and said maan bhai..

He slapped him hard and asked him geet. Vicky bend down his head. Maan held his collar and asked again.

He pointed to the room and maan ran towards his target.

Arjun was busy making geet wince in pain that he didn't notice when the door was opened.

Maan shouted ARJUNNN..which made him look towards him.

His hands froze in place seeing the anger in his eyes. Maan looked at him and then at geet was lying naked unconscious under him.

Maan..dekho geet..arjun started..

Maan walked towards him and punched him . he fell backward before he could gather he hit him again and again till he was lying unconscious on the floor.

He then turned to look at Geet, her body was full of scars and marks. Her white skin was red and blue. He looked away and removed his shirt and covered her.

He then scooped her in her arms and walked outside to take her to the hospital. It was only when he lifted her that he realized that her head was bleeding too.

He put her in the car and drove away..

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I think This Time Its Not That Confusing...
Finally I Have It Written Up..
I had to Re-Write This Part Again
Lmao x
Part 16

Maan got out of the car as he reached the hospital.. he went to the back of the car and got Geet out.. Her head was bleeding furiously' blood dripping down her face, down her neck and even some in her mouth'

He ran into A&E and yelled for a doctor.. He saw a empty bed and placed her on it and waited for a nurse to come.. but no-one came.. Maan walked to the receptionist and yelled straight at her face'

"I WANT A DOCTOR NOW OTHERWISE KISS YOUR JOB GOODBYE!" He Yelled at her.. The nurse started shaking as maan yelled out instructions.. she picked the phone up shakily and called for the doctor' Minutes later the doctor came And saw geet bleeding..

"Oh God!!" he exclaimed "Isse tho bohat khoon beh rah hai.. Quick Nurse Isse Operation theatre main leh kar joa.. Abhi!" he said fearing for this young girls life'

Maan was shocked about the outburst and became scared for her life' he remembered her smile, laughter and her happy excitement.

"BTW sir humme is ki parivaar se koi ek ka signature chahiya.. or we can't operate'" the doctor explained..

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=m_QGcwwLaok[/YOUTUBE]
oh dil se dil ka rishta juda

pal do pal mein mitta nahi

bandhan dilo ka tutta nahi

Maan stood near the phone unable to dial meera's number.. He was unable to tell his sister ' in ' law what Had happened to geet.. He called the doctor back and told the doctor the events that Geet had occurred without naming any names and gave him Meera's Number'

(tere dil ka mere dil se

rishta purana hain

in aankho se har aansu

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain )

tere dil ka mere dil se

rishta purana hain

He walked towards the operating Theatre and saw the nurses trying to stop the bleeding' He saw her pale face and it looked like no blood was running in her veins'

Teri bechaini ka teri tanhai ka ehsaas hain mujhko sun

main jo saath tere hu phir tujhe hain kaisa gam

dard baat lenge ham sun

in palko mein khushiyo ka sapna sajana hain

tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain

he remembered the look on her face as she tried to hide her feelings for him' the look when she found out about his engagement with sameera'

kaise main batau yeh tera is tarah rona

dekha nahi jaata hain sun

shaam jab dhalti hain subah muskurati hain

khushbuye lutati hain sun

He remembered her tears when his engagement was announced.. he soo badly wanted to wipe them tears and take her in his arms.. he wanted to tell her it was all a joke.. he couldn't take the tears in her eyes.. it hurt..

udaasi ke lamho mein hamein muskurana hain

tere dil ka mere dil se rishta purana hain

in aankho se har aansu

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain

mujhko churana hain

He broke out of his thoughts as he heard a woman calling him.. he turned to see Meera' Her eyes were puffy and she looked tired.. she had his two year old nephew Ayaan in her arms fast asleep..

"maan Agar meri geet ko kuch hogaya na phir mein tumko aur tumhara bhai ko kabi maaf nahi karonge.." she wept silently..

"Geet ko kuch nahi hoga"

"vo tumse bohat pyaar karthi hai yehi uske bari saaza hai, ke vo tumse pyaar karti hai" She said silently unaware of Maan who was stood next to her listening to everything'

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Part 17
Maan's head throbbed as Meera's words rang inside him "vo tumse bohat pyaar karthi hai yehi uske bari saaza hai, ke vo tumse pyaar karti hai"

His soul shattered with her every chant "His love is the reason for her destruction" Maan walked in the corridor as if in trance. He stopped before a glass door looking at his reflection. All he could see was a monster who was the reason for destruction of one girl who meant the world to him.

"No I don't love her. How can I love her?"

He covered his face in his hands as he sunk to the ground. He felt broken. His shoulders shuddered as tears welled in his eyes. "How can I love her? Was my love so weak that I could not trust her?"

He remembered the day in office when he had stood in front of everyone in the conference room. They were discussing Demello's dream house. She had asked her "Aapke liye pyaar kya hai Sir" just before the meeting. It was then that their eyes had met. It was then he had stood tall and said "truth and trust are the foundation of any relationship"

"Truth and Trust" His own words came back to haunt him. He did not believe in her truth. His trust broke like glass. Was his love so shallow so brittle. He hated himself. How could he not be there in her hour of the need. She loved him. Her eyes spoke the truth. Her beautiful almond eyes asking him to trust her, to believe in her.

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bin tere kya hai jeena

mere dil ki raani tum

meri khushiyon ka mausam

mere khwaabon ki taaviz

mere sapanon ki tasveer

bin tere kaisi aas

woh jeet ho ya haar

tere sang hai sab kuchh

tu na ho toh bekaar

bin tere kya hai jeena

How could he let her come to this state? How could he leave her alone and not be there when her heart cried for her in need.

Maan Singh Khurana, man of his words and principles sat on the floor today crying over his own follies.

Yes he was indeed a monster.

Another flashback came to his mind. "Dusht Danav ho aap'.samjhe". She sat on his lap holding his tie. She was angry as he had once again missed his lunch due to numerous meetings. She tugged at his tie bring him closer "Par jaise bhi ho mere ho". She pouted her red juicy lips "Aur mujhe bahut bhook lagi hai". Maan had driven her to her favorite dhaba to make up for the delay.

suni khaali raaten

ruthi feeki baaten

har aahat pe chaaukun

tujhko harsu dekhu

tujhko hardam sochu

tujhko har pal chahu

tere bin toh jeevan mera hai intezaar

bin tere kya hai jeena

He stood up. He wiped off his tears. "I don't know I deserve you or not Geet. Par main tumhaara hoon. Meri har saans tumhari hain. Ab tum kabhi akeli nahi hogi Geet kyonki main tumhaare saye ki tarah tumhaare saath rahunga. Koi tumhein haath to door tumhaari taraf dekh bhi nahi sakta. Maan Singh Khurana mit jayega lekin un logon ko nahi chodega. Ab tumhaari jaan aur izzat meri zindagi hain. Tumhaari har khushi meri saansein hain. Aaaj is pal se mera har pal, har saans tumhaari hai Geet'sirf tumhaari."

tere saath jiye jo pal

kuchh unse nahi badhkar

tere khaatir saans main loon

teri khaatir jeeta hoon

marne ki tamanna bhi

tere saath main rakhta hoon

tu hai jeene ki wajah

kar mera aitbaar

bin tere kya hai jeena...

Maan walked back with new determination towards Meera and sat beside her. He squeezed her shoulder gently and took Ayaan from her arms. "Kuch nahi Hoga use Meera. Main use kuch nahi hone doonga"

Meera looked at the man who stared at the operation theatre door waiting for some news. But there was a new aura to him. Along with everything else, new feeling of love twinkled in the tears which still lined his eyes.

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Part 18 ...i think 😳

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Maan sat outside with Meera as they both stared at the OT door light waiting for it to go off; just to hear that Geet would be okay. Time ticked by so slowly making every second last ages.

"I loved her; I really did love her.", Maan whispered softly barely audible but when Meera glanced at him, the tear filled eyes spoke nothing but the truth.

"But your love wasn't strong enough to trust her. A relationship is built on trust and when there is nothing left when the trust is gone.", Meera couldn't help but tell the truth again.

"We were going to get married, you know?", Maan asked with a faint smile at the beautiful memory that evening was.

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Flashback

Hand in hand, they walked bare feet over the sand towards the rocks to watch the sunset. She sat down letting her back against his chest and sighed happily as he wrapped his strong arms around her. They closed their eyes as they sat close to each other in comfortable silence. Their relationship didn't need words; they knew each other so well that even their actions spoke to them.

Main waari jaavan

Main waari jaavan

Saan tho ki hoya ve kasoor

Main waari jaavan

Main waari jaavan

Dil to ye hoya majboor

Main waari jaavan

Main waari jaavan

"Isn't it beautiful?", Geet asked softly after a few moments, as she looked at the fading colours of the sky.

Maan placed a soft kiss on her hair and she turned around to look at him with smiling eyes. "Only because you are here with me; you make my life beautiful Geet Handa. And I think I want to say 'I Do'."

Chhu liya tune lab se aankhon ko

Mannatein poori tum se hi

Tu mile jahaan mera jahaan hai wahaan

Raunake saari tumse hi

Chhoo liya tune lab se aankhon ko

Mannate poori tum se hi

Tu mile jahaan mera jahaan hai wahaan

Raunake saari tum se hi

Maan's words took a few moments to process in her head but then she gasped when she realized what he had actually said. Without another word, Maan pulled out a box out of his blazer coat and revealed a stunning three stone diamond ring.

"Maan", she whispered as tears gathered in her eyes.

"You know that I am not very good with words but you know that I love you. And until you came into my life, I didn't think I would ever want to say 'I Do' but now I am dying to say the two special words. So what say, Want to say 'i Do' with me? ", Maan said as he held her hand and the ring in his other hand.

"Maan, I--"

"But I am not going to go down on one knee.", he said with a laugh before she could say anything.

Geet joined in and then went forward to seal their lips together softly. "I think that 'silently' answered your question.", she said with a bright twinkle in her eyes. A few moments later, Maan slipped in the ring and planted a lingering kiss right above it.

Piya O Re Piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

Piya O re piya

Piya Re Piya Re Piya

Flashback end

"I can't believe I let my life slip away from me but now, I am going to get her back in my life. My life is nothing about her.", Maan said and Meera gave him a warm smile knowing the love he carried in his heart was true.

"Maan", someone called out as the silent observer finally revealed themselves from the shadows.

Maan stood up with a startle shocked. "Sameera" but before he could say anything else, she ran towards him throwing herself in his arms as she sobbed.

Before he could recover, the OR room opened and the doctor stepped out with an defeated expression.

I badly wanted some romantic moments..so i went into the past 😆😳..

Okay sheryu...take it away...i was tempted to reveal Geet's fate but i knew i couldn't be loved here 😆

And the person who was listening when Naz left off...aren't u all happy to see Sameera ? 😉

Love,

Reya <3

is sameera ki too😡yeh tum sab ko SAMEERA se itni MOHABAT kyun hai😡jab dekho BEECH main le atay ho😡😆lovely update😃
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Part 19

Doctor came out with a forlorn expression on his face. Maan who had raised his hands to hold Sameera dropped his hands and moved her back from him and rushed to the doctor.

Sameera stood there shocked at his cold demeanor towards her.

Maan: Doctor..Geet..Meri Geet..woh theek..

Dr: I am sorry Mr.Khurana she had lost too much blood already and her body was bleeding at various places too. We couldn't do anything. We are extremely sorry.

Hearing that her body was bleeding at various spots his hands curled into fists and he wanted to kill that B****** arjun with his bare hands even if that meant spending the rest of his life in jail.

He charged towards the dr and held his collar

U are lying..use kuch nahi ho sakta..use waada kiya tha mujse..woh..

DR:Mr. Khuaran pls control urself as he pried his hands off her..we couldn't do..

Before the dr could complete his sentence he rushed into the OT and saw the nurse was going to cover her face.

He shouted at her..LEAVE.. the nurse stared at him in blank horror.

He shouted again Leave . The nurse left the sheet and went out.

He walked to her and held her cold hand in his.

He bent to her and spoke..

Geet utho na..dekho meera bahaar khadi hai..

He looked at meera and then back at her and held her face in his palms.

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labo'n se yun pilaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na din dhale sataoge
Na raat ki nashili bye se neendh mein jagaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Aise bhi koi mazaak karta hai..chalo utho..dekho agar tum nahi uthi na,,toh main..

And he bent towards her ear and whispered..main tumhe bahut gud gudi karoonga..

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na dooriyaan dhikhaoge
Na thaam ke woh josh mein yun hosh se udaoge
Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na jhoot se sunaoge
Na rooth ke sirhane mein, remote ko chhupaoge
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

When he didn't see any movement from her still..he looked at her hand and then he gently placed the ring that he had given her that day on the beach on her finger again.

Dekho yeh kitni sundar lag rahi hai..

Aankh bhi tham gayi, na thaki
Raat bhi na bati, na kati
Raat bhi chherti marrti
Neend bhi lutt gayi, chiin gayi
Raat bhi na sahi, na rahi
Raat bhi laazmi, zaalmi
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, yeh raat baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye ho kyun, saath baaki hai
Gaye tum gaye hum tham gaye har baat baaki hai
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun
Gaye kyun toh jiyein kyun

Na aaye ho, na aaoge, na phone pe bulaoge
Na shaam ki karaari chai, labo'n se yun chhudaoge

Geet utho na..dekho ab na main Dusht Danav mode mein chala jaaonga phir mujhe mat kehna ke maine tumhe kaha nahi tha..aur phir tum mujhe jitna marzi manati rehna main manoonga bhi nahi.aur haan tumhare saath dhabbe par bhi nahi jaaonga..

Geet bahut ho gaya mazaak utho..when she still made no movements he took her lips in his and kissed her on her mouth.

He opened her mouth and probed into her while his hands caressed the marks on her skin wherever he could find them.

He left her mouth in a few minutes and then he felt her gurgule..

He looked at her again and her breath was coming in gasps, and he held her hand. She immediately tightened her hold on his hand.

He pressed the switch to call the doctor and kissed her face and forehead upteem no of times.

In a matter of seconds he heard the footsteps he informed them and dr checked her and immediately began the procedure of setting on the oxygen on her and her breaths which were labored now returned to normal.

The dr told him to leave but seeing the grip on his hand he didn't want to.

Mr.khurana we will have to remove the covers and we cant allow u inside.

He looked at their hands and then at the dr. SHE IS MY WIFE'now can u continue with the procedures cant u.

Meera and sameera standing outside heard the declaration and gasped..Meera in joy and Sameera in shock.

She was about to move in when Maan saw her and told her.

Ms.Deekshit u can leave from here and don't u dare show ur face to me or I may forget that u are woman.

With this he turned his attention back to geet and the dr who were busy giving her various medications though his gaze never travelled to her body and even if it did all the saw the marks that those brutes had left on her and his promise to avenge those who had done this to her and he also remembered that he would never cross her path if she asked him to but would remain as her shadow even if it would kill him day and night.

now tell me did that make u CRY..pls say yes..i so want that..😈

😭😭😭khushi ke ansoo hain😭😆awesome lovely update yaar loved it a lot😃

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